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By : xxdedxx
  • From ANON - btb900 on August 05, 2005
    I think it was be cool to see what Naruto is thinking about , like write what just happen for Naruto view piont, or go make to the fisrt time Sasuke made Naruto have sex with him. and do Sasuke make Naruto have sex more then one time per time Sasuke asve his live. Like Siince Sasuke was so badly hurt saving Naruto life with he make Naruto have sex more then once , becouse I think since he was hurt so bad he sould wing it for actless 3 more fucks.
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  • From ANON - michrure on August 05, 2005
    It's great. *speechless* They way Naruto smiled when Sasuke advanced on him but was still so sad. It was almost evil. I liked it a lot. Keep writing if you wish, but it would be so eternal if it stopped here. So mysterious, you know? But I want another chapter. *sticks tongue out* Thanks again!
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  • From ANON - Helaine on August 05, 2005
    i love ur story! angst... is great!

    update soon, please? luv u! xD
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 05, 2005
    this is totally my kink! I can so see Naruto letting Sasuke have sex out of guilt/love (but not romantic love, like 1st-best friend brotherly love). Of course, the other way to read this is that Naruto also has romantic feelings, but because Sasuke's so cold, he thinks he's just being used for sex--with sex just another way for them to fight and be rivals. I loved how you had Sasuke be cold here outwardly though. I almost want 2 sequels--one where Naruto feels romantic love towards Sasuke and one where it's just guilt and friendship-love. I liked that both possibilities were open in this fic.

    I only had 1 problem--I don't see Sasuke getting regularly injured for Naruto as very believable. Naruto gets pretty strong pretty quick (yeah there's the Haku fight, but only a little while later there's the Gaara fight where he was saving Sasuke), and Sasuke isn't such a bad ninja he'd get injured lots, even if protecting Naruto. Plus if it was regular, Naruto would also have more anger--like Sasuke didn't respect him enough as a ninja that he could take care of himself.

    Anyway, very nice. Here's hoping you get no more writers block!
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  • From ANON - Cassandra on August 05, 2005
    Squel! Sequel! Sequel!

    I really enjoyed this. You have no idea how long I've been looking for a story like this, and it was almost as if you were reading my mind.

    Great job, loved it. And Trapt is a wondreful band!
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  • From ANON - Jem on August 05, 2005
    Wow, lovely fic. I wouldnt mind a sequal, but i dont think it ended too terribly either. great work.
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  • From ANON - Serenia on August 04, 2005
    I don't normally like song fics, but this was good. The song wasn't too intrusive.
    It's interesting seeing Sasuke craving affection, but you still have him able to act cold, so he doesn't seem OOC.
    I almost feel sorry for Naruto. On the other hand... he's getting fucked by Sasuke. Lucky bastard!
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  • From ANON - YaoiOtaku on August 04, 2005
    I vote yay. This story was well written, but you can't just leave it like that! Maybe you should stay away from angsty things for a while and read/watch some 'happy' things, and then continue. Yet again, great story!
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  • From ANON - lo on August 04, 2005
    It was sad, but well written. I think it could use a follow up chapter. If you want. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Stranj100 on August 04, 2005
    I liked then ending. I think this could be the beginning to a good story, but then I'm an angst-monkey.
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  • From ANON - Michrure on August 04, 2005
    *cries* Absolutely beautiful. I found no mistakes and the wording the great. Great sex scene and great emotions. I really felt a stab at my heart when Sasuke felt it. I bet Naruto feels the same way as him but its just that he sees only the coldness from Sasuke that Sasuke can seem to put away. Please write another chapter to this. I would love it immensely. Great job. I vote! YES another chapter! Thank you!
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  • From ANON - lstdpnthght on August 04, 2005
    Ooh, please add another chapter to this!! This could be a very good beginning to a longer fic!
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  • From ANON - Aivivi on August 04, 2005
    Nay!!! I wish there was more of a, Naruto would come around, or a, Sasuke would get over her damn ego, and live happily ever after. I sort of breaks my heart and you definately were watching too many depressing movies. Go see Howl's Moving Castle and then come back to write a story about Naruto. Okay... Okay... Laterz then. ~.-
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  • From ANON - vashta on August 04, 2005
    Ok, that was totally depressing, but well written. Maybe a sequal where we find out Nar really loves Sas but thinks Sas just wants sex??? Please, I hate it when Nar doesn't want Sas, I hate a depressed Sas. Oh well, it is your story and I will read it regardless, because it is good.
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  • From ANON - kkkkkkk on August 04, 2005
    Aw, that's so sad. I almost want to ask you to continue it just so I can hope that Naruto will come to love Sasuke back. You made Sasuke so...likeable in this story, and he loves Naru-chan so much....
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