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Reviews for Broken

By : jdauss1
  • From ANON - Quichi on August 06, 2005
    A great beginning, I want to see it continued! And please don't kill my dear dolphin, the story just isnt rich enough without major post-trauma angst and UuberRegretful!Kakashi.
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  • From ANON - Kaiyo No Hime on August 04, 2005
    Wow. That was really freakin' good. Continue please?

    /me worships the angst
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  • From ANON - Cim on August 04, 2005
    ACK! Continue! Please. That is just a horrible cliffy to leave ppl at.
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  • From ANON - lalala on August 04, 2005
    I'm really looking forward to Kakashi's POV.
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  • From ANON - Anon^^ on August 04, 2005
    I don't think Iruka dying would be mean enough to Kakashi. Iruka should live and fall in love with someone else, making Kakashi watch. Yeah I'm vindictive, so sue me. Anyway Good job on the descriptions, I really liked it. You can leave it there, but if you want to leave it a one shot I think you might want to tinker with the ending. To me it just doesn't feel finished. Maybe like adding a funeral, or even a line about how Kakashi would forever regret what he said in is attempt to protect his heart or blah blah blah, something to wrap it up. As it is now it feels like there needs to be more, to me atleast. Anyway, goodluck, Ciao!
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  • From ANON - Serenia on August 04, 2005
    That was good. I'd be interested in seeing why Kakashi said what he said - he never seemed like a heartless guy.
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  • From ANON - Kakashi_Dono on August 03, 2005
    You will continue...
    You will love me...
    You will make Iruka-sama live.
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  • From ANON - Yit-Ha on August 03, 2005
    UPDATE OR DIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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