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Reviews for Broken

By : jdauss1
  • From ANON - Kat on May 15, 2009
    To be continued???????
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  • From morbiDreamscape on July 19, 2007
    Hmm... I hope you'll update this fic eventually... it's definitely worth finishing. ^_^ However, I found Iruka's reaction at the end of the first chapter extremely OOC... with how much he worries about the people he cares about, he'd never do something like that in front of Kakashi, especially with a smile on his face...
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  • From NekoIzumi on February 22, 2007
    That's it? There's no more? You gonna let Iruka die? *throws a tempter tantrum* This story is just unbelievably amazing! I cant wait to read more! ... There WILL be more right? Please! You have to let Iruka live and somehow get them together again! I mean, Kakashi didnt want to say those things but he did it to save Iruka!! I cried like a five yearold being robbed of her lillipop when I read this! And thats saying something when it comes to me! Please please please write more! Soon!
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  • From ANON - Yit-Ha on January 19, 2006
    Kl story! Don't worry about the hurting Iruka thing, we all love a bit of suicidal angst now and again. Keep up da good work!
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  • From ANON - Vox on January 18, 2006
    O.O
    ...drooool.... so sexy ^^
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  • From ANON - blood water on January 13, 2006
    CONTINUE!!

    Update soOn!! please! btw keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - random on December 07, 2005
    It's a good fic, and I really want to see another chapter, but the characters are really out of character (especially the Hokage). Otherwise, it was a good read. I want to know what happens soon. Please update.
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  • From ANON - ruka on September 30, 2005
    this was sooo beautiful! First you had me thinking that kakashi was a bastard, (Although it was hard to picture him saying those things to Iruka) but this was sooooo sad! Please don't let it end here, and please don;t let Iruka die!
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  • From ANON - MorbidHarpy on September 12, 2005
    ahh that story is so sad!!! you must write more!! please!!
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  • From TsukiMorositey on August 22, 2005
    good luck with law school, my sister's going to law school (last year) so i totally understand a lack of updates or even finishing your story (not that i am in any way suggesting that) i want to see how the couple ends up... Wha! yay! you didn't make Kakashi evil for real, it was at the evil Hokage's orders...i can deal with that! yay, yay... happy sand!
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  • From ANON - Reina on August 17, 2005
    why Hokage ...... you so mean *cries*
    sob sob TT_TT

    anyway its great ^o^

    Poor Kakashi *pat kakashi's head*
    Poor Iruka *hug iruka*

    Anyway >>;; you will countinue right ???
    and I'll always be rooting for you ;p
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  • From ANON - Emily Saeke on August 15, 2005
    Nonono!! Keep going, please keep going!! Kakashi needs to apologise to Iruka *nods* Kakashi been a bad boy by hurting Iruka!! No letting Iruka die okay?
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  • From Lithiel on August 10, 2005
    I like it..... just plainly awesome :O
    though I have to say... I'd like u to let Iruka die ^^*
    so ur *threat* was not why I decided to review :P

    The story has a nice atmosphere, sad, it's this feeling that makes me think ur FF is really good.
    that dark thing gripping ur heart and making u feel the same numbness, the same pain....
    it's kind of.... the feeling of being understood.
    I'm not that good with words, but I hope u understood what I wanted to say...
    I really appreciate ur work on this fic, cause I really really like it ;X

    baba Lithi ^^/)
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  • From Irukichan on August 08, 2005
    Yikes! This was a depressing story. I guess I should've read the attempted suicide part more carefully. ^_^; I really enjoyed the storyline so far, and this is definitely more believable than the Naruto and Iruka one. I like how you wrote the characters in this, and I really enjoyed the descriptive style of writing. I hope greatly that you will continue and write another chapter to this and that Iruka will survive his attempted suicide, but I'll read it regardless of the ending.

    *Gives you happy Iru-Kaka-smoochy cookies* ^_~ Write the ending soon! I'll be checking for it
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  • From ANON - Reina on August 07, 2005
    waaaa what will happen to iruka......
    dont let him die please dont *sob sob*
    but please countinue because I kinnda like this story ..... ^-^
    Put up the banner *I want more!!!! X 100
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