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By : KeairaxSeiaa
  • From ANON - kuu-ish on August 24, 2006
    Oiii! That's crazy. Nice twist ya got there..Surely Sasuke won't blame Naruto for it.. T-T I smell angst in the near future.

    Lol and nice cosplay..! ^_^ I did curse seal Sasuke at the last con, I can show you pics if you want too! Rofl. I'm doing timejump Sasuke this october. :3
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  • From ANON - Rei on August 24, 2006
    ACK MOOOOORRRRE!!!!
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  • From ANON - innerchild on August 24, 2006
    gah! i've been waiting so long for you to update! and now... i'm so happy that i might burst! i must go write something now. angst... that's what i want to write. hmm, good job. loved it. as always. really hope u update soon, but i can definitly understand about the whole school thing. i'm about to start school tomorrow, the second new school i'll be going to in less than a year, and i have to catch up on all my classes. i failed a couple last year... hehe... gotta make those stupid credits up. so, i'm gonna be all bitchy and hopped up on adderall this year. and next. stupid school.

    anyway, that was a long rant.

    do well in school. even though studying sucks big nasty, hairy balls. ewww..

    -innerchild
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  • From ANON - Sir Magus on August 24, 2006
    wait wat? how? when? why? im so confused i dnt understand it at all too many questions not enough answers-pls update soon so we can get some answers to all the questions this chapter has raised k? oh yea an nice job wit the confusin an stuff it was a really good chapter
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  • From ANON - lo on August 24, 2006
    The plot thickens, I love it. Nice job.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 24, 2006
    OMG! Thats something new! I've read stories where Naruto's grandfather (which would be kyuubi in them) killed Sasuke and Itachi's family. I've also read one's where his parents were killers, but they didn't kill Sasuke's family. This one is a first! It's a great twist! I hope Sasuke doesn't blame Naruto or take it out on him. Poor Sasuke and poor Naruto. I was so happy that everything was looking better for them. Please update again soon!
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  • From ANON - themirror on August 24, 2006
    oh, that was a nice turn. can't wait till you post the next chapter ^_^ Hope itt will be soon! Great fic anyways ^_^
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  • From Houseki on August 24, 2006
    This was a cute chapter... well, at least up until the end lol Gotta love Naruto and his ability to think he is the coolest person on Earth hehe But yeah, so that totally blows about Naruto's dad being the one who killed Sasuke's folks... hmmm guess the boys will end up playing detective or something to figure out who truly killed them, ne? hehe anywho...glad you're back in action! and i understand about the studies... i hate school just as much and am taking a few years off to focus on work... and well now work takes up all my good writing time now so it's taking me quite some time to update my things too *sigh* ah well lol hope to see the next chap out... eventually ^__~

    Houseki
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  • From KrickItat on August 24, 2006
    HA HA!! thats so funny i was JUST checking your authors page this morning to see if you had updated then WOW. The power of my mind boggles me sometimes.

    anyways no worries update when you wanna i know i do.

    Have fun writing
    Krickitat
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  • From ANON - Shadows Call on August 24, 2006
    XD I love it. Your Naruto is so right on. It's not easy to take a character in one setting, and put him into another one without losing a bit of their essence. You've got Naruto, and Sasuke (but you know how much I love your Sasuke) down so much, that I can't find a flaw in their characterization. I hope on a day off you find the inspiration to write the next chapter. I'll look forward to it. Especially since reading your writing always inspires me to do better. *throws Shikamaru cookies*
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  • From ANON - Shadow2007 on August 23, 2006
    OH NO SASKES NOT GOING TO FLIP IS HE T-T, poor saske, poor naruto. HIS DAD WILL ROT IN THE 6th LAYER OF HELL FOR THIS! o.o' sorry, anyway i love this story and hope you continue to update! >D
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  • From ANON - Katy on August 23, 2006
    HOLY CRAP!! When I saw that you'd updated I nearly fell outta my chair, I swear I did like a triple take just to make sure that I wasn't dreaming. I adore this story and it nearly killed my to wait the 2 months since chapter 12. I'm just so relieved that you're still writing it, so many author's just abandon their stories just when they're getting good and I was begining to worry you had dropped this one. First off, I completely forget if I reviewed for this story before so if I'm repeating myself, forgive me. I love Sasuke's character, he varies a little from story to story and there are very few who stay with the original personality (or as close as it can get considering it's a SasuNaru yaoi fic) and this one is probably one of the best so far. Secondly, I like the little joural/naration bit that Naruto gives at the beginning of each chapter, they usually result in a string of giggles from me especially this chapter. I'm not much of a writer myself so I don't have anything constructive to say except that I LOVE the story and I hope it's much less then 2 months before you update again because that would assuredly kill me.

    Also, your Itachi creeps the hell outta me -__-'
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on August 23, 2006
    aah!! somehow as soon as naruto said he wanted to visit his father, i *knew* he'd be the one who killed sasuke's parents! ack! NEED NEXT CHAP NOW *cries* ok.. but i'll try to be patient :p anyway, the chap was great, though short, i liked it.. i like how sasuke doesn't think he needs to keep his hands off naruto in front of people now that everyone knows XD and i loved naruto's comment about sasuke pouting like a girl heheh.. ok, yeah, so here i go to wait for the next chapter...
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  • From ANON - HavocTellenoi on August 23, 2006
    OMFG! i so did not see that last plot twist coming! omg! where in the hell did you pull it from? i love it! love it! and this fic! it's wonderful. so please keep the chappies coming. thanx. byes!
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  • From ANON - Huck on August 23, 2006
    Grr...aff.net cut off the rest of my review! *shakes fist* Anyways to continue the review: It's basically your writing style that has me captivated. Your descriptions aren't wordy-lengthy paragraphs, but short and to the point. I find that each chapter is like a story in itself, but yet the story flows together smoothly. I also really like how you start each chapter off with Naruto's POV. Well, I noticed you haven't updated for over a month, and I hope this story hasn't been discontinued T_T This is one that is definately worth finishing! *tries to be encouraging*
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