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By : KeairaxSeiaa
  • From ANON - questofdreams on September 24, 2006
    ...hmmmm. What a cliffie! lol. So, I'm guessing that Itachi killed their family but framed Naruto's dad. haha. Silly speculation, sorry, lol. Well, I loved the chapter and YAY for Naruto and Sasuke being mostly ok again although now with this tailspin, who knows how Sasuke will react.

    ^__^ I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on September 16, 2006
    As it turns out perhaps Yondaime is perfect,Eh?They are nver gonna %$@#&*^ at this rate.My problem,I know.This is gonna be good,just how much does Sasuke love Naruto?
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  • From ANON - Nomme de Plume on September 13, 2006
    omg, that is just about the best cliff hanger ever, even though it makes me quite disgruntled that there is not another chapter to follow up. ^_~ anyway, i think this story is wonderfully written, not to mention the way you make the relationship totally realistic instead of having them fall head over heels and hit the sack. keep up the excellent job, and i look forward to another chapter!
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  • From ChibiGaara on September 06, 2006
    I love your story! Please keep on writing! Your doing a great job. I love Naruto's POV at the beging, it makes me laugh.
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  • From ANON - Taylor on September 06, 2006
    YAAAGH! YONDAIME WOULDNT KILL ANYONE!! *shakes fist*
    Awesome chapter though! I've been waiting forever for it. And it makes me wonder really (since all of our questions will oson be answered) DID Yondy really do it? O.O *goes into Yondaime induced shock*

    Anyway, great job! Cant wait for the next chapter! ^_^
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  • From ANON - lauryl on August 30, 2006
    So...are the little blurbs by Naruto set somewhere in the future, as he tells the story, or...I don't really understand them. They don't fail to amuse me, however =P I like the story and hope you will update soon! Poor Naruto...why are people so freaking homophobic? And why is Naruto homophobic? Everyone needs to be more open...but I love the fact that Sakura is understanding. Sasuke and Naruto are so kawaii!

    Sorry, that review wasn't very constructive. Sorry, I didn't notice any major problems...Well, whatever--just please update soon! ^^
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  • From ANON - Pandora on August 28, 2006
    I *adore* those icons.. .so cute ^_^

    You make one hot Itachi =3.. you even have that trademark 'get your face away from me before I kick it in' glare xD So cool ::fangirl squeal:: x3

    If you have some time, please send all(and I mean all >3) the pics to me email?
    Its xSasuNarux@yahoo.com...
    I have this unhealthy obsession with collecting cosplay pictures.. seriouly, my cosplay folder has almost reached five-hundred pictures. No kidding xD

    I've just reread the entire story, just so I can get into the whole 'feel' of it again.. and I love it more then when I first started reading it.(if THATS even possible xD)

    You make everyone so IN character, I love it.. and I agree WHOLEHEARTEDLY that Naruto shouldn't be all uke-ish all the time. It makes no sense, since like you said, Naruto isn't like that AT ALL in the series.

    I epecially love those little babbles at the beginning of the chapter from Naruto, they make me laugh so much xD

    Ah... man, seriously, you've probably won over my heart for AU SasuNaru fanfics..
    I might just start drawing fanart for this.. since I've been getting better and all(yay for highschool art classes xD). I have a few scenes in mind~ It might take me a while, but I promise I'll draw it soon or later lol

    I wonder what gonna happen next, with the whole 'Narutos-dad-killing-off-Sasukes-family' thing... ah, cliffhanger, how they slowly kill my soul x_X;

    PLEASE PLEASE update soon...
    I'll love you for it?(not that I don't already love you for this fanfic enough xD)

    PS: Just 'cause of your story.. I think I don't hate Sakura as much as I used to x3
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  • From ANON - Tigera on August 27, 2006
    Yay, an update! *dances happily*

    I just wanted to say that I love the plot twist in this chapter! I thought it was awesome, and I can't wait to see what happens with it next. Though I can really only see two things happening now, but after that twist who knows, you might come up with a third way and shock us all again. Great chapter in a great story, I love it.
    I hope for another update, hopefully sooner than the last, but if you can't because of school then, meh, too bad. Hope you manage to pick your grades up and don't have your eyes gouged out by sporks, cause that would be bad for you and us readers(but especially bad for you...).

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  • From ANON - Darling_425 on August 27, 2006
    Wah! I love this story! Keep updating!
    I will never like homophobs >,> They suck.
    Love is LOVE ^_^
    I hope Sasuke won't leave Naruto because of his father. That would be wrong, because Naruto ISN'T his father. But I shouldn't be worrying about that, right? :)
    You are an awesome writer! Good job!
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  • From ANON - Shadow Walker on August 26, 2006
    I love your story, especially the Naruto thoughts in the beginnings and the fact that Sasuke and Naruto didn't just see one another and fall madly in love. I hope that you manage to pull up your grades so you can keep writing this. Also I looked at your pics and you rule!
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  • From ANON - pawapawapo! on August 26, 2006
    great story! i love the scary as hell itachi...because he honestly scares me....WHAT IS HE PLANNING?? He wants sasuke i know...but to what extreme will he go through to get what he wants? he killed his parents, didn't he? And naruto...i like his insecurities with his manliness...he should just admit that he is bi...cuz he definately likes girls.

    also with the whole school thing...try not to worry too much. don't let school rule your life...you will end up unhappy...i know from experience. I am used to working so hard that i became a humanish robot...but i became really happy when it was all over. I became a human again.

    And I also hope you are not working hard in school just for your parents, cuz in the end it is all for you. The number one priority in your life is to make you happy!

    either way, i will patiently wait for the next chapter because i know the wait will be worth it. So work hard and good luck!
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  • From ANON - Raine on August 25, 2006
    OMG TOTAL CLIFFHANGER LOL!!
    i'm lovin this story, so update soon right...
    i can't wait....please do...

    ^_^
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  • From ANON - Shadow2007 on August 24, 2006
    I know what happened Itachi is LIEING THROUGH HIS OVERLY ROTTING TEETH! *pants* ok my rant is over
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  • From ANON - h on August 24, 2006
    i cant figure out how to get the pics....pleas help me....
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  • From ANON - Dum de dum de dum on August 24, 2006
    Whoa I am like totally, in awe with this story!!! I'll i have to say is well wow lol.... Well keep up the good work ^_^
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