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By : KeairaxSeiaa
  • From Lyndsay on January 21, 2007
    :o Otouto, your Naruto makes me unhealthily happy in my pants *o* I totally blame you! No-name brand douche bag ^~ Great job on the cuteness of this chapter. The last paragraph totally = win! *totally thinks about Sasuke in a mini-skirt :o*
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  • From Lyndsay on January 21, 2007
    *o* Uwaaah~ Otouto, your Naruto is SO good! *jealous* I think I might have a crush on him ^///^;; You're so silly, I knew nothing you wrote could be made of anyting but win~

    Love ya!

    ~Lyn~
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  • From on January 16, 2007
    God!!! >< thats such a cruel way to end a chapter...awwww! T_T I think I'm gonna cry...poor Sasuke and Naruto..."..." O_O ^_^;; so ya...AWSOME STORY!!! *glomps* I really love your story and this is my first actually saying something so ya...lol XD can't wait till the next chapter...XP
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  • From ANON - rei_spirit on January 07, 2007
    yes school sucks unfortunately if you dont want to flip burgers for the rest of your life and get decent pay you have to get good grades in colege which I am now finding out... how unfortunate... I wanted to know first and foremost if you were ever going to update this fic? and second If the finding out that narutos father killed his family thing will make sakuke break up with naruto? I hate angst some mellodrama is great and all but total angst? hnn no. And does naruto even know that his father killed sasukes family? (if he did at all) anyway good luck with college please email me for updates ^^ white_swirls@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - Adi on January 05, 2007
    O_O that did not just happen!
    *is in shock*
    argh wanna hit itachi sometimes!!
    LIES
    im really hoping naruto's dad (who also hopefully is yondy, becauses hes hot) didnt kill the family, is actually a really great guy whos exactly like naruto, they find out it was actually itachi who killed them, and itachi gets locked up, naruto's dad gets out and they all become a big happy family in the uchiha house.
    erm... yeah i just sat here for like 3 hours and finished all the chapters XD
    they're really good and i stick by my earlier statment that the humour is great
    i noticed you havent updated in a while, and maybe hopefully you do soon? would really like it if you did since the story is fantastic, and that was a pretty big cliffhanger there, but its ok if you dont! i know that people always beg for updates and im sure it can get irritating when you've got so much to do. just hope you do is all

    oh and if you do update, hopefully you write smut, because i can tell, you'd be good at it!! XD

    XXX
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  • From ANON - Adi on January 05, 2007
    just read the first chapter of this story
    and i have to say, i LOVE the humour in this
    and for some reason, this line
    "Naruto glanced from Sasuke to Sakura and back again, his expression changing depending on who he was looking at."
    had me laughing for like 10 minutes, in fact i've just started laughing again
    er.. yeah,
    anyway!! im gonna go carry on reading!!
    XXX
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  • From ANON - Amber on January 04, 2007
    >:( They called Naruto a fag! >_< But Sasuke and Naruto's friends scared them away!!!!^_^ I love your story!!!
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  • From ANON - Passing Reader on December 07, 2006
    I had read this story before but couldent remeber it, then I went back threw all 13chapters ^^; I thought it was de'javou *sp?* or somthin till I remeberd I read it, I honestly dont even know if your on your account or plan on updating this story ever again but it would be great if you did :D
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  • From ANON - aina on November 15, 2006
    your humor is catchy. i find myself laughing or giggleing at times. your work is captivating. i was expecting a doom and gloom and naruto's father being the cause of misfortune for his one and only was expected. that not being a bad thing really, from the time that you mentioned the father being a murderer to sasuke's parents being dead i figured a connection. i wasnt surprised but it still was entertaining, a feat carried out by a skillful writer. with that said i have a inkling of how your ending well be, this conclusion solely based on the details you yourself weaved into the story so far. people tend to forget that everything mentioned in a good story isnt just used up for space and that every word written serves a purpose. i will keep a close eye to your updates. but truthfully speaking and take this only as constructive criticism i want to say your story lacks surprise and well, originality. there are no twist and turns and it lacks creativity. you have a humerous wit and timing of situations that will bring you fans but that makes you knowledgeable of the majority of your audience not "good". i accepted your skill of words but cannot praise your talent. please do misunderstand i am captivated by your story i couldnt stop reading from the first chapter but soon your story becomes routine and predictable and thus the glow of your story disappears. i like you though. author wise. i like the story. it's a good way to past time. but not one worth remembering when it is finished.
    if this comes out harsh please forgive me. old habits die hard. this is just a fanfic after all not a novel. the "bedroom football" part was funny.
    thank you for taking the time to read this, if you actually got this far...
    and bty i think it's very becoming of authors to comment their fans back it shows appreciation and a humbleness that is endearing.
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  • From ANON - Nikki on November 12, 2006
    I.LOVE.THIS.FANFIC! It is the LOVE! I adore the SasuNaru, but I also love the Itasasu hints thrown in---cause we ALL know Itachi's a secret Sasuke-freak. And your Naruto--he's perfect, all confused and wanting and yum! And what a twist this last chapter--I did NOT expect such a thing. I like it, though. Now, I'm wondering if Itachi's telling the truth, or what. Maybe he just wants Sasuke all for himself, huh? ::grin:: Anyways, I think your writing is wonderful, and I hope that you continue, although I understand that real life can be a drag on writing. I'm in college too, and MAN, is it stressful. I feel your pain.
    Love this so far!
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  • From ANON - LiardDestrier on November 06, 2006
    Yummy! Naruto seems back on his feet, thank god. Shikamaru needs to be more involved! YOSH! That line about being interested in a relationship...I used it! It was hot. And really funny, since I'm bi and the moron in question is a homophobic female. Hooray for shika...Hook him up with NEJI! Alright, so I'm tired. Super tired. And I just spent like...3 hours on factoring and eating sugary things. So...I appoligize. Keep up the wonderful work, hope to see and update soon, blah blah.
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  • From ANON - crossXmyXheart on October 06, 2006
    well i love this story so update! soon

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  • From ANON - Graves2 on October 05, 2006
    I love your story, and this chapter is now acception. I only wish you would write it faster, but I have no room to bitch. Honestly, the only constructive critisim I have is to MAKE THEM HAVE SEX! THank you. =3
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  • From ANON - Temari on October 04, 2006
    U're gonna write that Itachi killed them, right? RIHGT!? And Narutos dad is inocent. Yeah, that's it.Mhm!
    Are you?
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  • From ANON - Shedding Ink on October 03, 2006
    This is another case where I regret no reviewing sooner. Too often I fall in love with a story but don't bother leaving a comment to the author.. And I know that, for an online author, reviews are like a hit to an addict. So please, if you read this, get the inspiration to continue.

    I'll admit that I was a bit put off by the high school AU aspect and Naruto's POV in the beginning.. But I quickly grew to love it. And your take on Naruto is hilarious. I would have probably stopped reading if I hadn't started laughing out loud to his response at Kakashi's news of his failing. From there I was pulled in..
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