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By : KeairaxSeiaa
  • From Hestia on January 31, 2007
    Hi! Please keep writing! I just discovered the story--I really like it! The class project, community service thing was briliant to recreate team 7. I love your Shikamaru. Naruto's dad in jail is very clever, but poor Yondi! I really like the way you do the kiss scenes. It's pretty hot and nobody's had an orgasm yet!
    I can't wait to see Naruto annoying Sasuke--sounds fun. It might be fun to have a Hinata take the chance to ask Naruto out now that she has "no chance" with him--but two stalkers might be too much for your story.
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  • From ANON - rin on January 31, 2007
    thank god for your resolvement to not use japanese terms. people always get it wrong, and its the most irritating thing in the world. especially when it's english fanfiction for god's sake x__x anyway, cute story. unique quirky writing style.
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  • From sonicstage on January 31, 2007
    WHAT! That chapter was incredibly short! SHORT! I'm getting intolerant! Hurry up with the next chapter you bumb and make it longer!! I don't wait weeks for an update just to get five minutes of story!
    Man Sasuke is gonna be a real stubborn asshole about this aint he? I hope Naruto can manage to beat some sense into him.

    HURRY THE HELL UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't emphasise that enough man!!
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  • From ANON - Emina on January 31, 2007
    Wow...

    I had deffinetly fogotten about this fic x_x

    Such a long and painful hiatus.

    This chapter was okay, if not filler-esque~

    But I can filled the plot building and hopefully you update faster ^^

    I really like this fic, because of its originality and capabilty to stay on-character throughout the fic.

    So, like I said, hopefully you'll begin to update faster!
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  • From celticfx on January 30, 2007
    I usually don't leave reviews, but not only do I want an update, but I think I should tell you how awesome your fic is! Now, I just read every chapter in one sitting and I remember you saying early on how unoriginal you thought your fic would be. Well, erase that thought immediately (if you haven't already). It is VERY original (I've read a lot of fanfiction so I should know) and your writing style really does set it apart. Not only do I like Naruto's thoughts at the beginning, but you've been able to keep everyone in character throughout the entire story (very unlike one fic i just read >_
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  • From ANON - Jen on January 30, 2007
    I do love this story, and... while the chapters could be longer, I don't necessarily mind because I've seen shorter. And the novels some people like to post aren't great either. LOL. Anyway... I hope Sasuke can find it in his heart to see Naruto again because really... Naruto didn't kill his parents... and maybe his father had a reason for killing the Uchihas?... mebbe? Anyway. Keep it going. Or give me joor friend's email addy so I can poke her to poke you into writing more xDDDD. PEACE!
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  • From ANON - lo on January 30, 2007
    I am glad that you are trying to write a real story, nice job.
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  • From ANON - Keina on January 30, 2007
    Yay!!!! New chap. :D
    update soon, I really like Naruto's father although he has only been in half a chapter :P

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  • From ursweetheartless on January 30, 2007
    im willing to poke you if it would help at all, im good at poking! ^_^ i feel weird about naruto's dad killing sasuke's family, i feel like itachi's in the other room laughing, kicking the bodies under the rug or something. anywaysi hope your muses return to you promptly, but i know how it is when fic dies in your head there isnt much you can do but suck it up and write crap or let it die. (though please dont let it die -_-)
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  • From ANON - riddle_me_yellow on January 30, 2007
    Holy crap, amazing fic you have going. Dont worry about the clicheness of the fic, the vast majority of great authors have written a fic that is completly cliche as well. Its almost like coming of age, but for fanfiction! (but you have probably heard all that already) XD have fun writting and please update soon. AH! I cant wait till sasuke confronts Naruto about his father. Personaly, im hoping for tons of DRAMA!
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  • From Adi on January 30, 2007
    you updated!
    i cant tell you how awesome that is!
    and the chapter was really good!
    "annoy her till she gives in"
    yondy always was an uber genius XD
    love your work and im so happy you're carrying on

    XXX
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  • From ANON - avila7989 on January 30, 2007
    ANOTHER AWSEOM CHAPTER!!! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOON!! I NEEF TO FIND OUT WAT HAPPENDS NEXT!!
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  • From SeveredWings on January 30, 2007
    I just love this story....AND YOUR FREAKING AUTHOR'S NOTES!!!!! I think it's amazing when an author takes the time to thank her readers like that. It brings a more personal feel to the story! For all those who tell her other wise....*bends over and waves fanny*...KISS IT!

    Oh..and on a more adult note. This fic is wonderfully done, and I found little grammer errors. I also like the near perverted aspect of Itachi's relationship with Sasuke. It's the barely-there hints that make it sexy. A brush of the hair, a whispered word; it's all wonderously sinful!

    Please keep the torch going with this, I am seriously addicted! And I just have to know how things pan out with Naruto's father being responsible for the Uchiha masacre! Well tatta for now!

    Ja NA,
    SeveredWings

    Ps...*Smirks*...I cosplayed as Itachi for Dragon*con too! *gives a whomping thumbs up to wonderful authoress*...Yeah for us for having good taste!
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  • From ANON - kyandoru on January 30, 2007
    I can just see it now. An annoyed Sasuke and a pestering Naruto. Hehe.
    ja ne
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  • From pasc55 on January 30, 2007
    whouh i hope you will not make us wait very long because i want to know the continue !!!!
    what will happen?
    please please continue
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