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By : KeairaxSeiaa
  • From ANON - Diayma on August 14, 2005
    I love your fic so far, and if you're still lacking a beta, I wouldn't mind. Can't wait for your next update!
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on August 14, 2005
    wow! I love this fic! Your writing is so witty! It's awesome! The characters are so hilarious too! I cant wait for the next chapter! ^_^
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  • From YaoiloverS on August 14, 2005
    awww, poor naruto, having to be hated for a reason like that...well at least Sasuke can "confort" him lol. anyway, I'm happy that you send Saskura home early! tee hee hee beware Naruto of teh horny Sasuke lol I can't until nect chapter!! ^__^
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  • From ANON - silverfox on August 14, 2005
    interesing chapter keep up the great work and update soon
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  • From ANON - kayoko on August 11, 2005
    Hello,

    I think you have a great beginning to the story! That part where you wrote it in Naruto's POV was just..wonderful! *nod*nod*

    If you're looking for a beta, feel free to drop by beta's guild (http://www.livejournal.com/community/betas_guild/).

    I look forward to the next chapter!

    kayoko
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  • From ANON - Emina on August 11, 2005
    I love this chapter... what I especially love is how you keep everyone's emotions and charactertistics in check, cause alot of people who write SasuNaru-ness don't x.X

    Anyway, I'm loving this story more and more, so update soon! ^^

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  • From ANON - WynterMajik on August 11, 2005
    I love it so far. It seems like it'll definatly turn out to be a wonderful story that I can definatly get used to. Please update when you can, but don't rush yourself cause all that usually does is make the chapter seem as rushed as you were to get it out. I will patiently be awaiting the next chapter, and good luck with writting it. :)
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  • From ANON - Sasuke Fangirl #343 on August 10, 2005
    Oooh! You added tension! That's an extremely wonderful thing to add to fics like yours (I don't mean the plot, but the narration. :heart: beautiful). It makes it seem more...real, or something. Gah, I don't know what I'm saying. Pay me no mind. :'D But anyway, I love the way you narrate! It so refreshingly original! :hearts everywhere:

    [[Glad you like mah name. :D I have an account here, but I'm not on except when posting so...yeah. It's an alias.]]
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  • From ANON - Horizont on August 10, 2005
    Hi!

    There aren't too many stories right now that make me laugh like yours does! Naruto is so wonderfully "alive"!
    He appears natural and still in character, very well done! ^_^x Also, the way you explained the behaviour of everyone without the Kyuubi stuff is really good.
    Well, I hope for some lemony goodness in one of the future chapters!

    ~Horizont
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  • From ANON - Sora Jr on August 10, 2005
    This chapter was great and I am a kingdom hearts fan and I am glad tooo hear your a Shikamaru fan. Hes basicly and Idol to all lazy people who watch Naruto.
    (That means me too, I would write a story but I am to lazy.) Goodluck moving into your dorm room!
    -see ya
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on August 10, 2005
    Lol. Yes, you spelled my name right, and yes, I really enjoyed the update. ^^ Still very clever and well written, as was to be expected. Oh, and I'm glad you've decided to keep the title of the fic as it is for now... I'll still try to think of a suggestion if you really want to change it, but honestly, I like it the way it is. ^^ I can't wait for the next (part of the?) chapter. (lol) Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Pink on August 10, 2005
    AHHHHH!!! I LOVE IT!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! I beg you UPDATE!!! I want to read every chapter until its finished!!!! I JUST LOVE IT!!!!!!! Sasuke! come on go get Naruto!!! I CAN"T WAIT!!! As of today this FANFIC is one of my Favorite Naruto fic!!! I"M SO EXCIETED ^_^!!!!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on August 10, 2005
    I recognise me from your other fic now too.So......I really liked that one and I am sorry if I stroked you the wrong way with my reveiw,jesus its my week for that,its gotta be me so I am gonna play safe with a mellow and sincere thank you.Thank you for the update.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 10, 2005
    Yay! I'm glad you didn't wait a month to update! Congratulations on getting almost thirty reviews for the first chapter! =P
    A very interesting chapter, Sasuke gets more and more interesting...as does Naruto. His character keeps making me laugh, especially that part where he asks for the "scotch on rocks". I think it was the imagery that made me smile. I can't wait to see the next chapter, and good luck with the move!
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  • From ANON - yukiko on August 10, 2005
    I never do long review. I never know what to say, I review a story when I like it and I like yours.

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