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By : KeairaxSeiaa
  • From ANON - dark mousy on August 28, 2005
    yay for update. hope you have time to update again soon. and with some of sasuke's thoughts on things. well, i'm curious about what's going on in that head of his. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 28, 2005
    Yay! SO glad you updated! I really like the way you made Naruto so funny, I'd like to think this is how he might be, if he lived in our times. Er, this world? Sasuke kissing Naruto was quite a surprise... I would love to know what he's thinking! I don't suppose you could do a Sasuke POV? I like the way you've make Sakura... you didn't make her someone everyone could hate! And Kakashi... gotta love the man, and what he puts his students though. As always, I can't wait to see the next chapter, and good luck with your computer!
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  • From ANON - silverfox on August 27, 2005
    lovely chapter keep up the great work poor naruto he's so cofused update soon
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  • From ANON - sasunaru fan!!! on August 27, 2005
    go horny-stalker Sasuke!!! :D i shall always support your quests to make Naruto-chan yours!!! XD hehehe, love the fic, looking forward to see more of Sasuke's *cough* molestation *cough*!!!

    i think it's a well-written fic and you must continue it!!! :D

    SasuNaru rules!!!! ^____^
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  • From ANON - Sasuke Fangirl #343 on August 27, 2005
    Oh my god. I've never read such a wonderfully written kiss scene before. So...emotionally detailed. A perfect balance of emotion and action. God, it was beautiful. Best part of the chapter I have to say ((after the begining, of course, now that was just -classic-)).

    "...not in all the ways Sasuke was hard right now..."

    xD That made me giggle really bad. It was such an innocent statement with SO many different interpretations that it was just -perfection- at it's best. That part about Sasuke leaving really surprised me...I never expected that to happen and I was pleased, actually. That was a rather pleasant turn, adding more suspense ((and tension. yum.)). All in all, another wonderful chapter!

    [[I post under "GravityAddicted" but I've been in a slump lately so D':...yah. You think I'm a nice reviewer? Wow. Usually people say I'm harsh...Thanks! :D :::ego. thy name is Bob::: But, really, I'm being nice because there's nothing bad for me to say. :::shrugs::: ]]
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  • From ANON - Sukara on August 27, 2005
    -Gropes fic more- >:] Kakaka, great chapter! ^o^ Now, where did Sasuke disappear off to? xD
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  • From ANON - chi no hana on August 27, 2005
    wow. sasuke's a perv. he should be making more moves on na-chan! yey, go go !!!!
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  • From ANON - Mila on August 27, 2005
    OMG! The kiss scene was jsut... just... *drooling* , ah you know... =)
    Nice chap! Can't wait for the next one! see ya! ;)
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  • From ANON - Sora Jr on August 27, 2005
    lol Well I hope you find a way to have those babies. Poor Naruto all confused...anyway I am glad you made Sakura normal most Yaoi stories make her a total bitch. I mean I don't like her that much but I got respect for her and she's really not mean. HAve fun in college and Update as soon as you can and sorry about your computer it happen to the best of us.
    -see ya
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  • From ANON - Crimson_Revenge on August 27, 2005
    Good story... You write really well. I hope you update the next chapter soon!! I like this so far... Please continue.
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  • From ANON - ky0kichi on August 24, 2005
    hyahaha. Wtf? Sakura in a short skirt?! Noooo..

    Sasuke in a short skirt on the other hand...That's hot. i'm not usually into crossdressing, but Sasuke...In a revealing girls outfit..Would be nice o___o;

    Update soonnn
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  • From ANON - Sukara on August 18, 2005
    -Gropes fic-
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  • From ANON - insert_fetchy_name_here on August 17, 2005
    ...I'm loving it alright... *stares at screen* OMG MORE CREEPY MOLESTER-SASUKE!!!!!! *snicker* *lmao* seriously, i can just see naruto's face getting all weird and sasuke just standing there with cool expression as if nothing happened. xD lmao

    It doesn't matter that it was short as long as you update :) lol, loved the part when naruto 'thinks real HARD'and then 'I'd LOVE to ride with you, sasuke' *eyelash-battering* lol xD Somehow i like the new touchy-feely sasuke that ur presenting... I mean ur keeping him in character and at the same time he's SO OOC! man, how do you do it? lol, please update soon *big eyes a'la puss in boots from shrek* xD if you haven't seen that movie, go watch it... wait how did i get that off-track? Oo; anyway, update soooooooooooon!!!! *glomp*
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  • From ANON - Demon on August 16, 2005
    this is great i can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From AkumaKawa on August 16, 2005
    Hmmm... Love it.
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