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From ANON - insert_fetchy_name_here on September 03, 2005
Yup, definetly loved this chapter ^^ You got sasuke to kiss naruto!!!! W00t!!!! srry bout your pc, what with no Word and all... I really hope u update soon, tho, I'll be taking a look every day ^^
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From ANON - Ryn on September 02, 2005
Applause for keeping them all in character, especially, Naruto. I think you've got his personality down. And also, thanks for not making Sakura into a bitch who is only obsessed with Sasuke. It seems like you've got the right balance of description and dialogue so far. For a high school fic, it's actually not too cliche (in case you were worried about that), because Naruto's inner thoughts are pretty funny and original. I can't wait to hear more about how Itachi is involved in all this. The only thing I have a problem with is the premise for the story. I can picture Naruto being forced to do extra credit. But you never explained how or why Sasuke or Sakura got involved in this. Yeah, it was necessary to get this story going, but it doesn't make any sense right now. I hope things get cleared up later because that's a big plot hole. Other than that, good job. Thank you for making me laugh. ^^
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From ANON - yukiko on September 02, 2005
so he kissed him ? uuuuuuuuh. I hate it when Kakashi is favoriting sasuke. Naruto is good too !!
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From ANON - Lease on September 02, 2005
I love your writing style, this story is highly addicting. Please update soon.
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From ANON - WynterMajik on September 02, 2005
Awesome chapter! You have to love Sasuke! You just have to! Leave it to him to leave Naruto alone in an alley way after almost making him cream his shorts...EVIL IS JUST SO DAMN SEXY! *sighs happily* Take your time, like I said last time and always will-but!-update as soon as you can because i'm going crazy over how they'll act around each other later on.
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From ANON - Bloodyfire on August 30, 2005
omg i am gonna kill you!! how dare you make naruto gay!! or question his sexuality liek that, this is sickning i can't belieive someone woudl do this, you are all sick...

blinks, and turns over cue card

oh oops sorry, thats not mine ^.^'

clears throat

wow this is amazing i really love this story it is so cute ^_^ i love it when naruto gets all flabbergasted and confuzzled ^_^ and the whole makign out ina pubic oplace, beautiful, keep up the good work i am loooking foreward to reading more.

and ignore the first part really i was kidding, i love sasunaru and narusasu ^_^ im a diehard yaoi/yuri fan ^_^
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From ANON - Horizont on August 30, 2005
I just returned from a camping trip so I'm kinda tired, but I should have enough energy left to write a review. XD
It was wonderful! Please increase the rating some more during the next chapter, just to keep the step like path...
*yawns* I should be gone...
Please update soon, it's a wonderful fic! ^_^x

~Horizont
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From ANON - Sauki on August 30, 2005
Whoops.. I was so happy at finding a good story that my grammar sucked in my previous review for chapter one. Hehehe... ^^; I basically said: Reading your other story sounds like a good idea and this fic kicks ass, which I will now proceed to say again. I wanna read your other story and this fic kicks ass. xD
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From ANON - Sauki on August 30, 2005
Naruto POV..Right off the bat. Read it, and was addicted. Second thought was 'Wow..After I finish this I'm reading the other fic I mentioned. Mind if I do a favorite quotes thingy? Of course you dont! You love praise, everyone does!

- I�m-so-sexy-I-could-turn-straight-guys gay. (I paused, absorbed it into my slow comprehending mind, and just cracked. Couldn't stop laughing. Like.. Laughing-so-hard-my-cat-was-scared laughing. That sentance made me understand completely what kind of gay Sasuke was, and was put the best way I've ever heard it put before. (Sasuke's gayness, of course.)

- �If you manage to pass, it will violate all laws of time and space.�

�Well, I feel special.�

�There is only one possible way for you to avoid repeating this course.�

�Wait, what happened to the laws of time and space?� (That was sssooo amazingly clever, I just loved it! You could think 'Oh..She's just easily pleased' but no.. me being easily pleased is going 'Oh..That was good!' not writing a long review with quotes. *grin* It makes me so happy knowing there are more chapters after this.)

- �Wow, you almost sound like you know what you�re talking about." (*snigger* I've had a teacher actually say that to me before! I can even imagine the look on Kakashi's face as he said it. *grin*)

Ok..To lazy to do any more quotes, I wanna focus on the story now. I just want to say that I LOVE YOUR FIC! Thanks so much for taking the time to write it and please all of us fangirls(And boys). xD

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From ANON - lucifel on August 29, 2005
totally awesome fic, extremely funny~!! i love this kinda style of writing~!! keep up the great work, n please update T___T
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From ANON - Carrot on August 29, 2005
AH! FOR THE LOVE OF GOD UPDATE!!! UPDATE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD! GEEZ YOU CAN'T TAKE TO LONG WITH THIS FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT'S FREAKEN HOLY HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT F****** CHAPTER!! Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!
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From ANON - blisblop on August 29, 2005
I liked Sasuke's forwardness and focus.Go Sasuke! Whats Itachi's f'n damage?My fav parts are Sauke having his way and Naruto's attitude towards his teacher and Kakashi's attempts to get Naruto to use his uhhh first name which here seems to be his last name.Glad you where not offended by last reveiw.I f you like Sakura why are you using all the weak/cliche( She is smart and has a propensity for compassion/protection of her fellows are hardly touched on) parts of her character?I am sure you will have her grow.I love Itachi but he could defifitly be a pain here.Thanks and you are doing a boom job!
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From ANON - MultifacetedTune on August 29, 2005
*embarrassed blush* A great reviewer, huh? ^^ I'm honored, really. I just speak my mind is all, and try to tell authors what I would like to hear in a review... if I ever getting around to posting a story of my own, that is. *pouts momentarily* Ah, well. I just think that if you like a story enough to finish reading it, you should let the author know -- even if you didn't like it THAT much -- and that if you DID like it a lot, you should TELL them as much, ya' know what I mean? Some positive reinforcement and a bit of helpful advice (as well as some imaginary chocolate) never hurt anyone, lol. And flames are just so STUPID, gah, I mean, honestly! Not only is it POINTLESS (I mean, lack of reviews kinda' conveys the same message, ne?), but it makes the reviewer look like a (stupid, uncultured, uneduacted, idiotic...) retard, too, and can scar the (young, blooming, adventure-some, brave, possibly talented) author for life, too. SO........yeah. ^^;; Sorry, I tend to babble when I have something worthwhile to say........ I love to debate and share my piont of view, in case you haven't noticed. Which brings us back to the "being a great reviewer" thing, lol. ^___~ Say, who was this "friend", anyway? If I know who it is and what they wrote, I might have a better idea as to why they said that......... But yeah, I'm flattered, so thanks!

And now for the "real" review, lol! Oh, and before I forget, these are for you... *gives you the affore-mentioned chocolates* ^___^ I'm so glad you updated, and don't worry about the wait. I just spent the week moving into my dorm, too. Such fun, ne? *rolls eyes* Out of curiosity, what year are you, and where are you going? As for Otakon...... don't I wish! I actually could have gone with a group of my friends, but my parents are in an "anti-anime/manga" phase at the moment, and I'm kinda' broke because of college starting, and all.. *more pouting* I hate real life....... ^___~ SO, yeah, thanks for the update -- again, a great chapter! I like the fact that your writing style has stayed more-or-less the same throughout the three chapters (okay, so that sounded lame, but it's true...) and the added humor makes this fic a joy to read. Of course, the "action" made this chapter even better, lol. ^___~ Your characterizations and descriptions are still wonderful, and I can't wait for the next update so I can find out what happens next! Keep up the good work!!! ^___^ Ja ne!!!
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From YaoiloverS on August 28, 2005
tee hee hee hot and sweaty Naruto, how can Sasuke resist that?! If Kakashi would've gave them 20 minuets he could have jumped him XD nice kissing action! it even made Sasuke hard!!! do him!!! ^o^/
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From ANON - ky0kichi on August 28, 2005
lol. Man. That was cool......At first I thought it was gonna be like one of those..'naruto is sleeping in class and gets woke up by sakura' things..But thenI was like "O_O" "Wtf? That really happened!" lol. XDDD

I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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