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From ANON - Nekogirl on October 16, 2005
You should be able to reply to as many reviews as you want. If the readers don't like seeing the review responses they don't have to read them. I'm glad you like to respond to each review. It shows that you care what people are saying about your story. Having complaints about you replying to reviews just astounds me. People have a lot of nerve. Anyway, I love your story and I like the clueless Naruto and stalkerish Sasuke. It's hot!
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From ANON - Kenz on October 16, 2005
^.^
Borshica(I have no c lue where taht came from)

LOVE IT KEEP IT UP!

YEP YEP YEP this is really turning out great ^.^
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From ANON - sasunarufangirl on October 16, 2005
1. Sasuke is just so COOL and SEXY.
2. I love the way Naruto thinks and acts. DENIAL is so sweet :)
3. Shikamaru is the laziest ass in the show. And he's uber smart XP
4. Iruka is such a sweetie. Getting hyped up for nothing *snickers*
5. Itachi is a sexy bastard. Yesh.
6. Uchihacest is too dark. no offense. it's so DARK.
7. Kakashi.. hmm, maybe he planned this 'project' for Sasuke and Naruto?
8. Sakura.. well, even though she 'matured' [by an intsy bit] during the manga span of three years, there's still that Inner Sakura..
9. I hope you write more. We readers are in dire need of good SasuNaru fics.
10. I love you and this fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *hugzzz* WRITE MORE SOON! ^___^

Inspiration for SasuNaru: watch the whole series, read the whole manga, watch the opening song videos [Seishun Kyousoukyoku by Sambomaster and Nami Kaze Satellite by Snorkel] --- SasuNaru hints are flying there everywhere. EVERYwhere. Especially the 5th opening song. I simply adore it. It gives off lots of SasuNaru-induced-warm-feelings ^__^

You ROCK!
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From ANON - illumi39 on October 16, 2005
I love this fic! I hope that even though college is such a pain +__+ you'll still find some time to satiate all of your readers' thirst for some more hot yaoi scenes between Sasuke and Naruto and much MORE high-quality scenes transpiring to make this absolutely wonderful story :) Keep up the good work. I shall forever wait for the next updates ^__^

....... I hope it's a LONGER! ^__^

+++++ illumi39 +++++

"I dreamed a Dream of blood and death."
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From ANON - Seto\'s Darkness on October 16, 2005
I'm glad that my review made you giggle. I just tend to babble and yeah... ^__^ So, I'm going to start babbling again about my thoughts and likes/dislikes [gasp! there are dislikes?!] in this chapter :D

OMG I love it!!!!!!! *squeals* the car make-out scene is SO kinky *drools* I think I forgot to say this in my review last chappie [since I was *too* caught up in the babble about Uchihacest...] but I love the way you make Iruka seem to have 'accidentally' blurted out his relationship with Kakashi *giggles* KakaIru is one of my fave pairings in Naruto too.. AND I totally love your Shikamaru *hugs plushie* Lazy smart-ass... Anyhow, I love the way you 'characterize' Sasuke--because you leave almost everything to the imagination of the readers --and Naruto. I could say that it's a wise thing to do since mysteriousness and COOLness is just-so-Sasuke ^^;; Itachi calling Sasuke just because of the five minute lateness is totally... erm... Uchihacest-y? err.. Itachi really struck me as someone who'd follow 'rules' and become the strict 'father and mother model' for dear Sasuke ^__^

I'm glad that Naruto *finally* seemed to have made up his mind [even though he hasn't thought-through it yet] about his feelings for Sasuke. The way you describe his denial and indignace about being equally attracted to Sasuke, and the way his actions and thoughts seem to clash and stuff, and the way you portray his inner turmoil about the onslaught of feelings and emotions thrown at him by the overzealous [overSEXY!] Uchiha :P --I'm talking about Sasuke XD

Happy late birthday! ^__^ nineteen is such a great age [though, I'm biased. I like ALL odd numbers :D] Anyway, I digress [I've been digressing at the first paragraphs too..] So, uhh. I hope there are more often updates! I am also in my freshmen year at the university and it's so damn BUSY! Hehehe, I still find plenty of time reading and reviewing though.. I understand that studies would always come first [that's why I'm holding out my fics till the winter break and just concentrating on reviews]. Though, if you want some plot ideas, feel free to contact me! XD XD my email's the one written above, and I could give you lots of things to think about adding this fic :D

Good luck with writing MORE! :) Waiting for the good stuff :P *cough*more yaoi*cough*

SasuNaru RULES! :D

....Hey, the kissing scenes are really... *passes out from nosebleed*

After an hour... *recovers* uhhhh... just... write MORE!!!!! ^______________^ *cookies for studying and writing the fic!*

>> Seto's Darkness
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From ANON - Seto\'s Darkness on October 16, 2005
I'm glad that my review made you giggle. I just tend to babble and yeah... ^__^ So, I'm going to start babbling again about my thoughts and likes/dislikes [gasp! there are dislikes?!] in this chapter :D

OMG I love it!!!!!!! *squeals* the car make-out scene is SO kinky *drools* I think I forgot to say this in my review last chappie [since I was *too* caught up in the babble about Uchihacest...] but I love the way you make Iruka seem to have 'accidentally' blurted out his relationship with Kakashi *giggles* KakaIru is one of my fave pairings in Naruto too.. AND I totally love your Shikamaru *hugs plushie* Lazy smart-ass... Anyhow, I love the way you 'characterize' Sasuke--because you leave almost everything to the imagination of the readers --and Naruto. I could say that it's a wise thing to do since mysteriousness and COOLness is just-so-Sasuke ^^;; Itachi calling Sasuke just because of the five minute lateness is totally... erm... Uchihacest-y? err.. Itachi really struck me as someone who'd follow 'rules' and become the strict 'father and mother model' for dear Sasuke ^__^

I'm glad that Naruto *finally* seemed to have made up his mind [even though he hasn't thought-through it yet] about his feelings for Sasuke. The way you describe his denial and indignace about being equally attracted to Sasuke, and the way his actions and thoughts seem to clash and stuff, and the way you portray his inner turmoil about the onslaught of feelings and emotions thrown at him by the overzealous [overSEXY!] Uchiha :P --I'm talking about Sasuke XD

Happy late birthday! ^__^ nineteen is such a great age [though, I'm biased. I like ALL odd numbers :D] Anyway, I digress [I've been digressing at the first paragraphs too..] So, uhh. I hope there are more often updates! I am also in my freshmen year at the university and it's so damn BUSY! Hehehe, I still find plenty of time reading and reviewing though.. I understand that studies would always come first [that's why I'm holding out my fics till the winter break and just concentrating on reviews]. Though, if you want some plot ideas, feel free to contact me! XD XD my email's the one written above, and I could give you lots of things to think about adding this fic :D

Good luck with writing MORE! :) Waiting for the good stuff :P *cough*more yaoi*cough*

SasuNaru RULES! :D

....Hey, the kissing scenes are really... *passes out from nosebleed*

After an hour... *recovers* uhhhh... just... write MORE!!!!! ^______________^ *cookies for studying and writing the fic!*

>> Seto's Darkness
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From ANON - chi no hana on October 16, 2005
>.< hot stuff! updateupdateupdate!!!
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From ANON - Shiin on October 16, 2005
Hey! I don't really know what to review, but I just thought I'd write a random post saying that my sister just got married on the 13th.
Oh, and as constructive criticism is generally sought by authors I could say... umm.. well, I can't think of anything, but I will point out that the doors in the front seats of cars tend to still open from the inside when they're locked. But then maybe Naruto doesn't know this >.>;;
Erm.. oh yes: Itachi's need to know exactly where Sasuke is / why he's late. 5 minutes isn't really something to be worked up over, especially because Sasuke's driving... I mean, traffic can't be the same everyday, and if you're unlucky at lights etc... Well, I just think the time-span's a little short. Otherwise though very amusing - I love how Naruto's mind and mouth seem to be at ends with each other. I hope you continue with the fic, though I can understand lack of motivation only too well >.>
Good luck with school! What are you studying? Your education should still be your priority :) (though we still want fics >.< :P)
-Shiin
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From ANON - insert_fetchy_name_here on October 16, 2005
maaah, I really love this story and that scene in the car was just HAWT! You could always make sakura wak in on the, and she'd be like *GASP O_______O* and they wouldn't even notice till she faints xD or soemthing like that... you don't hafta, it was just a suggestion =3 really hope you update soon ^^
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From ANON - Crimson_Revenge on October 15, 2005
Yay!! You updated! Now I'm happy... I love this fic sooo much!! Sorry. My brain isn't working today, so if I sound stupid, I'm sorry... Anyway, It's awesome!! You're a really good writer. Awesome chapter!! Update soon pwease?? I love it!!
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From ANON - Komikitty on October 15, 2005
Yay! An update! I like how you've portrayed Sasuke, and Naruto is just adorable!
Keep up the fantastic work!
=^_^=
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From ANON - nicole on October 15, 2005
i am sooooo glad you updated i hope you up date soon again

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From ANON - Amanda on October 15, 2005
Hi there. Can I say I hope you -really- decide to continue this fic? So far it's shaping up to be one of my favorites. I have a weakness for highschool AU's (can we say Spiral Falling?) and well written ones (like yours) are hard to find. I do hope you decide to continue it.

_Amanda

PS: I am much of a lurker, but decided to contribute to the cause of good Naruto fanfiction and review (I'm also lazy). I hope you get your inspiration back!
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From ANON - Jadejj on October 15, 2005
Very cool chapter. Hope to read more soon :D
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From ANON - Anon on October 15, 2005
Yet another wonderful chapter! Awww, I do hope you don't give up on this story... even though you're writing it for fun, it's just so... wonderful! I -loved- the making out part... I think this is one of the things we've all been waiting for! I hope to see where it goes from here, and how Itachi comes into the equation. Not to mention Sakura and Kakashi as well. Though I do get the feeling that Kakashi might have known what would happen... heh.
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