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By : KeairaxSeiaa
  • From ANON - lo on October 24, 2005
    That last chapter was fun. You have a talent for the more intimate scenes. I like Naruto's internal struggle, but I really like how he is finally coming to terms with his new feelings. Keep up the good work.
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  • From Kativachan on October 23, 2005
    I like long author notes....Anyway, I'm a freshman in college.

    Sasuke and Naruto are just so cute aren't they? And your mom found your stuff? Ack! Scary ^^;;
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  • From ANON - Corvin on October 23, 2005
    DUDE!! you are awesome!! PLEASE DO SO UPDATE SOON!!!! FLIPPIN AWESOME!!!!!! And the Iruka part was wonderful!!
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  • From ANON - Horizont on October 23, 2005
    Woohooo, finally some action!
    Um, right.
    First of all, you never cease to practically glew my eyes to the screen with mostly simple words... dunno, but your story gets to me. ^^x May have mentioned it before, I'm usually into the plain PWP stuff, but you have a way of writing... that shows me once more how my vocabulary lacks adjectives. *lol* It's fascinating and sometimes it gives me this tickling feeling when you just know that ist HAS to be like this, that Sasuke has to kiss Naruto right now and hold him close and it's enough and perfect and it doesn't need anything more to be just right... something like this. ^_^x

    One more thing: I like your Author's notes. I like this stuff in general. And I also like it how you respond to reviewers. *laughs* Even if it's just a quick 'thanks', it's still cool. Whoever's complaining: never mind. ^^x

    Keep up the good work!
    ~Horizont
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  • From bluesun on October 23, 2005
    ok good story but i'm anoyed at how much a/n you have i really don't like it a very little amount is ok but that's ten times way to pushing it
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  • From ANON - kitsunekochan on October 22, 2005
    Yay!That begins to be more and more intersting!^^*although the chapters are a bit short but it depends of the author's inspiration,ne^^;*
    Itachi's in the story too hehe;I wonder if there will be some people of Akatsuki too...And just this last thing*erps...not a greta review isn't it^^;*I love the short paragraph with Naruto's thoughts!^^Really funny!
    Ja ne
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  • From ANON - Orion06 on October 19, 2005
    i luv ur writting please continue and...............write more asap pleeeeeeeeeeeeease
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  • From Houseki on October 19, 2005
    Hoi hoi! I'm really enjoying this story so far, and I hope you don't decide to drop it. It may be cliche' with the school stuff, but you still have origionality in it and it makes it readable and enjoyable :p A stalking Sasuke is a fun Sasuke, inne *smirks* Even though I enjoy a seme Naruto more than a Sasuke one, if the story is done well, it doesn't make a difference. And I'm still reading, so that should say something, ne? ^__^ Anywho, keep up the good work, on all your fics and I hope to see more soon!

    Matane!
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  • From Reyn on October 18, 2005
    oooo! We're finally getting to understand what's going on between them. I still love the way you have Naruto's thoughts run through the chapter. It's really entertaining.
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  • From Tatemshope on October 17, 2005
    Oh, and consider your story Recommend! :)
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  • From ANON - Tatemshope on October 17, 2005
    OH MY GOODNESS! I can't believe you're the ooKeiraoo (I know I did that totally wrong) who reviews my story! That is so awesome! Before I even read your comment to me I read that you used to post under that name and I got totally excited. I absolutely love your story. As a matter of fact, this last chapter was so amazing that I was getting jealous about how easily the make out scenes seem to be for you to write. They are by FAR the hardest part of my story. If I had more money I would be trying to hire you to write them for me. I should be posting another chapter in a day or two and the lemony of it is not what I want it to be. I sure hope my beta can help me with it or I might as well just link to your story and tell people "If you want to read something sexy, go here." ;P

    Anywho, I really really really really really loved this chapter and I really love your story too! When Sasuke started revealing more of his inner self I almost fell out of my chair. It's always so great when people give him a bit more character. Oh, and the funniest thing hands down was:

    "Get in" when used in reference to stalker boy's car meant either a)Get into this dark vehicle with tinted windows so that I can molest you without getting caught, or b)Get into this dark vehicle with tinted windows so that I can murder you without getting caught.

    Neither is good.

    ~~~~

    I seriously almost wet myself when I read that! It was incredably funny to me for some reason.

    Oh well, I've probably worn out my review welcome, although if you're like me, the long reviews are what keep you going, so you might not mind. Please update soon! This is awesome and I can't wait to read more. Congrats on your birthday!
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  • From ANON - Trekiael on October 17, 2005
    I'm not sure I already review your story, but I have to tell you, it's one of my favorite! Really! I've read tones and tones of SasuNaru (ok, so I read only that, and?) and yours is really good. Your writing skills are good and I love the way you make Sasuke and Naruto, they're exactly how I like to see their relationship, any other way can go to little ooc to very ooc (like a NaruSasu is). It usually unerve me stories with short chapters but as in every chapter you turn my intestines into jelly (you know what I mean) It doesn't really matter. I think the one who told you to put this in a community of SasuNaru was right, they might like it very much, not cause I like it, but it's well done, not ooc, funny and hot, what else a SasuNaru fan can ask for? I have nothing else to tell you as suggestion (I love this chapter, the car is such a kinky place and we can feel the sexual tension in it). So, please continue (I hate to tell that but I hate more when a good story finish on trash) and good luck! Love ya!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on October 17, 2005
    Five was well done and compelling inan underwater way,does that make sence?Can't wait!
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  • From ANON - Debbie-kit on October 17, 2005
    NNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO YOU ended the chapie.. damn! o wel..
    update soon 'cause I love the story... seriusely!
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  • From ANON - Suki on October 16, 2005
    Two hours away for a halloween party... sounds like Athens, maybe. =) I'm actually going there this year, haven't been sinse I was like... 16. Anyway, as for the fic, I like what you've got so far. Too bad Naru-chan didn't invite a steamy Uchiha into his empty apartment. That was a really hot little hint of citrus. Update when you've got time.
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