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By : KeairaxSeiaa
  • From ANON - Seto\'s Darkness on November 04, 2005
    Hurray for chapter six!!! ^___^ Whee!!! :) I'd absolutely love to email you -- though right now, because of the finals here in my university, I believe that'd be quite impossible x___x This chapter is a bit mellow compared to the others, which usually involved Sasuke *molesting* Naru-chan XD [See, no complaints? ^_____^] Hehehe, Shikamaru's a psychic!!! :P Though it shouldn't be a big surprise since he's a smartass GENIUS :) Hmmm.... a meeting for a project!!! Sakura and Itachi appears!!! *dark storm clouds hovering* LOL I already gave my opinions about the ItaSasu thing so yeah... :D Very busy right now, so... no long reviews [aka rambling] this time ^^;;

    Keep up the good work!!! ^___^ There're lots of SasuNaru hints all over the anime [it's practically a CANON pairing XD] so---there's your inspiration!!! XD XD

    ---longer chapters next time, please? *puppy dog eyes*--
    ---whoever dislikes seeing so many review responses should just SKIP the segments about review responses. it's not hard [though it may be for some puny-minded people] to know when the review responses start and the chapters end--
    ---So does that mean that Naruto would go out on a date with Sasuke???? Since he didn't kiss him, right, right??? ^_________^ *fangirlish squeals, while thinking of a dark, dark cinema and some hot, hot make-out scenes, and then faints from nosebleed [too much imagination]*

    Good luck with writing more!!! [quests of Sasu-kun to make Naru-chan his! LOL] *more cookies for your amazingly great work*

    >> Seto's Darkness
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  • From ANON - Lady Gray on November 04, 2005
    First, I want to say that you shouldn't pay attention to jerks who whine about the length of the review responses. I personally thank its a nice touch. Second, I really like this story and hope you aren't planning on discontinuing it! I really like the way you write the characters and i find naruto's first person intros to each chapter hilarious. Also I want to say i agree with the uke seme question, what is the deal with yaoi writers being obsessed with one person being in the role all the time. Anyway, thanks for writing and i hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - yianne_21 on November 04, 2005
    Uhmm... update soon?.... well, i'm sure everybody's already giving you good comments so i don't think i need to give the details again. I definitely love the flow of your story, keep it up!

    Then, I read some of your rants and I would like to address the one regarding your age... You really don't have to worry about being 20. I had the same problem before, i even decided that if i were to die, "what a better way to die at 19!" well that's what I thought. but even so, I still ended up being 20 now!

    Hey, hey! don't fret, my friends and I thought up of a solution for this, and its really funny but still a good Idea! don't say TWENTY... that's a very lame age, instead go with TWENTEEN!

    SEE? welcome back to the teen's world! ^___^


    you might even want to continue that! like twenteen-one, twenteen-two....and so on!

    Gambatte!
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  • From ANON - macy on November 04, 2005
    hey there!! i just missed a bunch of your updates!! but i'm all catched up and ready to review ^^ I totally love Naruto's little POV blurb at the beginning of each chapter. it's so amusing to read. also, the steamy make out session in the car was hot. super. i'm a little anxious about the upcoming itasasu, but nevertheless i'm looking forward to the update. keep up the great work, as well as the review responses. i personally favor them. i feel can feel the love from those =D
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  • From ANON - Mari on November 04, 2005
    I really like your story, but I wish that the chapters were a little longer. I feel like I am just getting into it when you stop. But I am still looking forward to the next chapter, of course! ^___^
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 04, 2005
    I'm SO glad you see that you havn't given up on this story! The update was such a nice surprise! I liked how you had Naruto act after the kiss and with Sasuke at school. It seemed... very natural for him. I'm glad you don't have him accepting his sexuality, or sasuality (sorry, had to say it!) so soon, and so eaisly. I have to admit, ItaSasu kind of squicks me, but hey, you said it's one-sided, so it's all good! *cheer*

    I'm not sure if i commented on the car scene so far, but I have to admit, it was VERY well done. I can't wait to read the lemon!

    I just have a quick question. Everyone hates Naruto because of his dad right? Will we ever meet his dad, and/or find out why he did what he did?
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  • From ANON - Sasuke Fangirl #343 on November 04, 2005
    :D I'm proud of you for standing up for yourself. If you want to reply to what your reviewers say, kudos to you. I, personally, prefer you do reply. Makes me feel like someone cares what I say. :'(

    But, alas, that is that. This chapter I felt was particularly "spiffy" (I ran out of exciting words to describe it). :D Naruto's confusion and overall awkwardness is SO yummy and I'm eating it up. Sasuke is just a pervert. :] Not that I mind...
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  • From ANON - ky0kichi on November 04, 2005
    Woot. That was a good chapter. I like the whole cafeteria thing. But I think Naruto shouldn't be ashamed or worried about anything. Who cares what those people say?! As long as he's happy with shmexy shmexy sasuke, then it's all good, right?!!?! ^_^;;

    You do great with the characters personalities too. Lol, Shikamaru was right on the dot. :x

    Can't wait for your next update.
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  • From ANON - uberneko_zero on November 04, 2005
    personally, i don't care what you wanna do with notes and stuff. *you* are the author, so that means you get to do whatever you want. :)
    like you said, those who want to read it will, and those who don't can just skip it.

    i really like what you've been doing with this story. naruto's blazing denial was a funny way to do things, that and laying all blame on sasuke. i really hope you aren't ending it here though, i feel like the story just got going! but i have really enjoyed what you've written so far.
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  • From ANON - Leona on November 02, 2005
    I really love your story so far. Please keep writing! lol Also, could you please tell me if you have any other stories posted on adult fanfction. Thanks
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  • From ANON - Kenz on November 02, 2005
    when are you goign to update this????
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  • From ANON - reb Riddle on November 02, 2005
    THIS STORY IS WONDERFUL!! and bye the way I love your auther responses i think its neet most authers dont bother with it but you know ^^ O! this is the first Naruto story i`v ever read and I LOVE IT im sooo going to read more could u update soon? pweez? Ill be checking in to see ^^ wonderful story
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  • From on November 01, 2005
    Hey! Just wanted to tell you I'm really really anxious to read your next chap! I know I've reviewed twice but that how badly I want to read it!! Please update!!! Please!!!!! *on knees begging*
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  • From ANON - sharingan on November 01, 2005
    I'm normally not a fan of AU stories, but I seem to be stumbling across some very good ones lately. I especially like your portrayal of Sasuke, especially since you don't really show us his thoughts. This basically results in us getting Naruto's perspective of events, which is an interesting way to do it. It makes Sasuke seem darker and more mysterious since we don't have a thorough understanding of his thoughts and motives.

    And on that review response issue people have been commenting on -- honestly, I often enjoy reading the responses to the reviews almost as much as the story itself. It's nice to see how the author reacts to various criticisms and compliments, and how that later affects the story (or doesn't, as the case may be). Since the comments have all been at the end of the chapters so far, I don't see any problem with it. It's clear when the story ends and the responses begin, so it seems to be a good compromise.

    Keep it up; I look forward to reading more. You're a talented writer.
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  • From ANON - naruke on October 30, 2005
    i've read all 5 chapters and i would like to read more!!!!!!!!!!! i'm will be waiting my nose on the screen for your next chapter!!! (even if i would use that time to read for the exams,demo these stories beat maths,english and geography ten to zero!! Don't you agree? stories are better than school!!!!!!)
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