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From ANON - Kenz on November 05, 2005
loved the new fic.

I also wish to add its very rude for those who wish to flame
even if they dont like the fic for a certain reason if you perfer else where go to
other places to flame perferably right now a place where "n00bs" like to flame is
www.Go-Gaia.com I would be more then happy to reccomend here.
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From ANON - dyingstar-elipsis on November 05, 2005
That's another wonderful chapter! I love this fic, it's so hilarious ^^ Please don't ever, EVER discontinue it. I love the way Naruto is so confused about his sexuality and keeps trying to deny that he's gay. I like a pushy Sasuke too. Finally a Sasuke who's not afraid to let everyone know about their relationship ^^ I'm so looking forward to the next chapter!

About the ItaSasu thing right, actually, it might be more IC to have Itachi interested in Naruto instead coz Sasuke is the one who's supposed to look up to Itachi. But well, it's your fic so don't be bothered by our opinions. Much.

About the one charac dominantly being seme or uke part right, I don't know. The two homosexual relationships I know of both work on that principle. ^^ Also, I tend to go along more with the Japanese's view on this kind of relationships, because they have quite a fixed view of who's the seme and who's the uke. It's quite different from the Western's view so it's more natural for me to think of Sasuke as the seme and Naruto as the uke. But once again, it's your fic so it's entirely up to you.

Isn't that a long review? Hehe, I can't wait to see what everyone's reaction to their relationship will be. Will you introducing other charac? Like Neji, Ten Ten, Gaara? This is really an excellent fic. I so love you for writing this ^^ Update soon ne!
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From ANON - Komikitty on November 05, 2005
Whee! Poor Sasuke...But, way to go Naruto!
Please don't listen to the people who complain, your story is really, very well written.
when you said you were thinking about discontinuing it I nearly had a heart attack.
But on the the story,
I loved the way you portray Naruto and sasuke's budding relationship, and I can't wait to see what Itachi will do.
Keep up the good work!
=^_^=
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From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on November 05, 2005
that was too cute. sasuke better get back at him for running away like that later. i'm glad you dont plan on giving up on this. keep up the great work! dont let those bad reviewers get to ya! ^__^
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From ANON - vashta on November 05, 2005
Naruto should tell Sasuke that he just doesn't want people to hate him more for being with their precious Sasuke. I hope Sasu can help Naru with his self-confidence, I am ready for at least Saku to find out and be threatened to silence by Sasu.
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From ANON - Houseki on November 05, 2005
�You�re far too stealthy for them. You should be a ninja!� that line had me crackin up...it sounds like something i'd say which makes me laugh more lol i'm glad you're makin it an equal partnership..it is well overplayed w/ naruto being stuck uke. my story seems to be coming along like yours, now that I notice. Naruto is a bit uke-ish and sasuke seme-, but in the end, Naruto will have the upper hand...well, at some points..then gaara will, and then sasuke, and yeah...m/m/m fics are kind of hard to write...deciding on who gets to be seme/uke/seme/uke lol yikes..

you're also makin sasuke kind of sweet in this..i like sweet sasuke ^__^ he doesn't always have to be a bastard....or a dumb bastard (See Chasing Naruto) lmao

Ah if you'd love to chat with a few fic-ka's on the fundamentals of writing a Naruto fanfic *lmao* then drop me a line on YIM: inuyashas_hoseki69 it's quite interesting to say the least the things that can come out of a simple conversation ^__~

a side note: i usually don't like author's replying to reviewers, but your notes are usually pretty funny, and informative of your thoughts and ideas as well as your life..but my one complaint, which i'm sure is every one else's who totally digs this fic...chaps need to be waaay longer lol i know my first chap was sooo short, but i try to make em longer and longer...ah but you are the fic-ka and the story is in your control ^__~ I will just have to sit back and wait for the up'ds :p

anywho..sugoi chap! Keep it up! Motto motto! ^__~

Mata!
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From ANON - KitsuneFun on November 05, 2005
I really like this story and I dont mind you taking your time with writing it or how you protray the characters since what you have written so far is Great! I look forward to the next chapter *smiles while giving good-guy pose*
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From ANON - Bookworm51485 on November 05, 2005
Hey

I like your story though one of your review kind of soured me a bit. I was curious about the complaints you said you've gotten about review responses so I went to look for loser81's review. What they wrote did not warrant the rude response you gave. They complimented your story, you should be happy with that. People do give other opinions and I think as long as it's not written as a flame you shouldn't respond the way you did. If I was loser I would stop reading your story immediately just because of that response. Now don't take the review badly and think that you should give up the story, but I would apologize to loser because they didn't deserve a "bite me". Maybe thank you for your compliment but I like writing review responses so I'm not going to change it. To talk about your story I do like it and I hope you continue to write it and update soon. I hope to see an apology to loser in the next chapter but really its your choice. I just thought that was really rude and unnecessary. Oh and btw I do agree with loser on one thing, your chapters are kind of short. I don't have a problem with the review responses, I actually do feel special when I see an author has responded to something I said but I do also wish the chapters were longer.
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From ANON - brit on November 05, 2005
When I first started reading this I thought it was going to be like a quick romance with them both screwing and saying " I love you"..yeah...sappy ending lolz. But then it started getting intense and dude it was nothing like a sappy ending lolz. Actually there shouldn't be a ending for this story! I forbid it. xD Really so far I like the plot. Although I feel sorry for Naruto because he has to deal with all that pain. Oo is his papi gonna make an appearance in the story? That would be such a shocker! hee hee....
Hmm aren't Itachi and Sasuke brothers? Lol Itachi likes wittle Sasuke-kun? awww...incest...me likey. As long as there hot and stuff..I won't mind. And yes I agree, I usually do like Naruto on the bottom and Sasuke on top. *shrugs* but I like varieties. ^^. Especially rape...got rape? 0.0..omg is sasuke going to be rape of half-raped by Itachi?! Just curious. lolz.
Oh yeah at first when i read this I did think your reviews were long..honestly. But you know i didn't really care as long as you still continued this story. I enjoy reading this story very much. It'll be a bummer if you stopped now. Great story! O btw..do you read kingdom hearts? >
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From ANON - lind on November 04, 2005
UPDATE DAMN YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! gomen nasai, but i realy like this book so please update.
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From ANON - Yami Jay on November 04, 2005
Took me long enough to decide to read your fic and I'm glad I did read it. Please, update soon!
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From ANON - Amanda on November 04, 2005
I'm again. I went back and read over what you had actually said at the end of the chapter (I have a tendancy to ignore things the first time around) but needless to say, I thought I'd give you some feedback on on what you actually wanted feedback on. If that makes any sense. Yes, another review from the creepy non-reviewer girl.

I have a gigantic problem with Itasasu. But I won't in this story if you've already decided it's going to be one-sided and nothing is going to happen. I can also see how Naruto would be 'uke' and Sasuke would be 'seme' and yeah, if you end up going through with a lemon and then a second or third lemon, you could always switch it around and warm the readers if it isn't their thing. I dislike stories where it's permanent positions as well.

Cough. Oh yes, I also went back and read a few reviews from the last chapter as well as my own. I reallylike the car scene. Mmm, steamy windows. I also liked the very end, where Sasuke cops a feel. I have a giant butt fetish (I have no idea why) and it always seems to come out in rp's, so thank you for feeding my butt-fetish! Lol.

Gone again.
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From ANON - kuroi-sakurapetals on November 04, 2005
This story is really good. Everything is moving naturally and thats what i look for in stories and yours certainly has it. Please do ignore those assholes complaining about the size of your author's notes. I bet if you didn't thank anyone they'd secretly think that your so cold, not thanking reviewers or anything. Sorry but i really can't stand bold people like that. It's you're story so do what the fuck you want!! Anyway Sasuke is just wonderfully sexy in this story and i like your descriptions very much. Keep up the great work!! I'll be looking out for an update!!
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From ANON - inuyashalove04 on November 04, 2005
Hiya, been reading your story in the shadows and not reviewing....shame on me. I like you story. I love the way that you have Naruto and Sasuke acting. About your idea for slight Itachi/Sasuke....I don't see a problem with it; as long as it isn't....um....detailed, I guess. Slight is good, alot is not (oh god, I'm rhyming....that's scary). And for the review responces....tell everyone to f***k off. It's your story, and you can do what you want. You want to answer reviews...go ahead. Stupid people and bothersome complaints. Anyway, nice story...keep it up.
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From ANON - Amanda on November 04, 2005
Ahh, another chapter! I literally squeed when I saw it.

It doesn'tmatter what people say about the amount of review responses, heck, I appreciate them. Especially because I only review once in a while and therefore, getting a nice response from a review I nervously made makes me feel alot better. People are so tetchy! Jeeze, if you don't want to read the responses, just skip 'em, it only takes a few seconds.

I really liked this chapter. The comments you added in were cute (ie/ about ramen and the continuation of Naruto being *not gay*) but you still kept it so it wasn't overly humerous or making Naruto look like a dolt. The small act of running his fingers through Sasuke's hair or getting chokedup about a piece of pizza was lovely! I'm a total hopeless romantic and have wayyyy too much empathy (which is why I can't read angst. Boo hoo.) but tht gave me the warm fuzzies.

Still envy your writing style!

_Amanda
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