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By : KeairaxSeiaa

From ANON - fyredevyl on November 21, 2005
Yay, another chapter!
You know, I'm starting to wonder how Sasuke will react to Itachi's unbrotherly attentions (depending on how you plan to write that). I mean, having a sibling come onto you has got to be scary as hell, esp. with Itachi as the sibling.
And Naruto's so cute when he's trying to be a tease...such a good tease he is too! I can't wait for more! And you're right, writing is a huge stress relief for me and I'd imagine for many other writers too.
I also love what kind of tatoo you got. That's so cool! ^_^
Keep writing more chapters, I can't wait for them since your writing is great. And don't worry about stretching your chapters longer than you want them to go. I did that with Emerald Isle and now I'm having to take a break from it and regroup. But I digress...
Oh, and make sure Houseki can get your YIM id. She talks to EVERYONE! She even got me out of my shell. She'll most likely pester you into joining her club, where you'll meet lots of other interesting people.
Ja!
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From ANON - Anon on November 21, 2005
Might I just add a big THANK YOU for toning down the ItaSasu? I'm such a loser for being a bit hung up about it, but hey, 's all good, at least like all the others have said, and well as yourself, there will be only hints that can be taken in anyway.

This chapter was... awesome. I literally squealed when I saw that you had updated. I know I've said this before, but I can't help but adore Naruto more and more, as the story progresses. He's so spaztic, yet oh so lovable!

I'm excited to see what else the story will bring...the next one promies to be exciting! ( A date! What will Naruto say? What will he do? =D )
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From ANON - The Dark Child[am a girl on November 21, 2005
LOVe Dose Itahi[sp]like Naruto?
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
PLEASE PLOEASE PLEASE PLEASE

UPDATE A S P

THANKS!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Questofdreams on November 19, 2005
sorry me again ^^; I just wanted to add that I also really love that you're going to make their relationship equal in terms of top and bottom and all that. I also feel that the boys just aren't suited for either role permanently. They're both strong and stubborn and can dominate and submit when it suits them ^_^ Yay you!
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From ANON - Questofdreams on November 19, 2005
Hi ^_^ I just recently found your story (I really ought to search for new stories more often, lol) but I'm really, really enjoying it! I love Naruto's sarcasm and dry wit. I love the pace you've set for them because, hey, they're guys and guys are horny a lot XD, even Naruto who is just discovering his sexuality. In any case, as far as ItaSasu goes...well, I've never been a fan of this seeing as I like to think Itachi has SOME semblance of humanity in him (which is so misguided, I know, haha) but yeah. If it's one-sided and nothing happens, then hey, go for it! Especially if you think it'll add to the plot.

I also really loved that we knew right from the start that Sasuke liked Naruto. It enjoy fics where Sasuke is the one pursuing Naruto because while Sasuke is an ass, he's twice as bad when he hasn't yet realized he wants to screw Naruto into the floor. Yeah. Sorry for the vivid imagery there. SO not intended. hahaha...

Anyway, I do hope you will continue this and that you'll update soon ^^ I'm really loving it.

In addition, I just wanted to add that I, like any normal person, skip over your review responses but I do read all the rest of your author's notes. I do not mind at ALL your review responses b/c I really like it too when an author replies to my review. I actually did the same (responded to reviews) in the earlier chapters of one of my fics but the fic has gotten so long and the reviews too many to do this anymore, but I never got any complaints about it. I'm sorry some of your readers don't feel the same way. ^__^ Don't let them bother you. For every one bad review, there are a dozen to make up for it. And those are the ones that should really count, right? ^__^
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From ANON - Rendril on November 15, 2005
I really love this fic you've got going and hope you update soon ^^; I love the whole SasuNaru pairing, especially in an AU school setting, and whoever complains about you writing too much to your reviewers... they're just stupid :P
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From ANON - Justajester on November 10, 2005
I love this story so muuuuuuuchiness!

...can I marry your brain? :)

And I would just like to say that I LIKE your authors notes. Because you are the author. And it is your story. And people shouldnt gripe. Because they are psycholoserbastrds who can't write anyway, only critisize...and I can't spell.

Doesn't it make you feel all happy and mushy inside? XD
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From ANON - Autumn on November 10, 2005
to fuck what they say about your review responses ^_^ i like the fact you respond. oh...and i love this fic to! awesome..i'm always looking for something to amuse me on my sleepless nights and this is a real gem. ;-; i just wish i didn't read so fast!!! it would be rude to tell you to update faster..so i put the blame on myself ^_^. thanks for sharing this with us..i appreciate it
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From ANON - Carrot on November 09, 2005
FOR THE LOVE OF GOD NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN;T POSSIBLY TELL YOU HOW UNBELIEVABLY WEIRD IT WOULD BE IF YOU PUT ITACHI LIKING SASUKE!! THEY'RE BROTHERS FOR THE LOVE OF BLOODY CHRIST!!!!! HE CAN'T LIKE HIM NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*STOMPS ON IDEA* TAKE THAT! AND THAT AND THAT AND THAT AND THAT AND THAT AND THAT AND THAT!!!!
B.T.W I adore your story it's really cute. But please...PLEEEAAAASEEE! *gets down on hands and knees* PLEEEAASE! don't have an older LIKING and younger one! That's just freaken wrong!!!! PLEEEEEEAASE!!!!
UPDATE!^^
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From ANON - Twistedneko on November 09, 2005
^_^ charming...XDD

Naruto didnt give SAsuke his kiss, so, they're going out on a date then? *spazzes*
Getting past my fangirl-ism, I gotta say, you're a REALLY good writer. Seriously man, you had me on the edge of my seat last time, and it's the same now. >_< Aggh, I'm so sorry. I'm rambling on like mad. My thoughts are sasunaru induced now-any other time they'd be much more collective. BUt, overall, you've done a mad-hot job. Keep it up.

~I'm outtie
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From ANON - XaloneXalwaysX on November 08, 2005
Okay...
1. I'm glad you decided to just ignore the reviews where people complain about your personal little messages to your reviewers. I think it's very nice and respectful of the author to individually thank and acknowledge each one of his/her reviewers. So fuck those bitch hoes! Fight the system!...err I mean...O_O..................
2. Your little rant to Dawn...amused me to no end. When I read it, I shouted "PWND!!" Hahaha! It was an awesome little comeback ^_^.
3. Please update?? I am in love with this fanfic. It's just so fucking adorable. I LOVE how you made the characters. It was a bit difficult to imagine Sasuke just planting his hand on Nartuto's thigh and then stroking his thumb on it...but when I got the image nicely set up in my head I squealed =^o^=. There are very few Naruto fanfics that I actually enjoyed reading and yours is definitely right in the top 5, if not the top 3. Keep it up!!! I'm enjoying this fanfic like whoaz!
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From ANON - Mihou Shimofuri on November 07, 2005
"pouncing and fucking."

Bella smirked in amusement. "You have such a way with words." She purred out in a silky voice tossing her long black hair making the braid swing against her back. "Not only are your review answers long and thought out your story is very good considering its an AU, and a cliche one that!" She chuckled and pulled out a kunai with an exploding tag attached to it. "But alas my good authoress, unless you update soon I'm afraid Orochimaru-sama has you marked for death." With a sadistic laugh she vanished in a swirl of leaves and smoke.
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From Sukara on November 07, 2005
Uwah!!! x3 I can't wait to see what Sasuke does to Naruto. -Drools and has a nosebleed- This happened to me more...I thought of SasuNaru smut during first period ((Math)) I started to drool then my nose bled. People started pointing and said I was blushing. I laughed it off and they looked at my strangely. xD
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From ANON - Lady Riana on November 06, 2005
Cool! I think the one-sided ItaSasu is a great idea, it would add alot of drama to the plot. I have a question, if Naruto is questioning his sexuality then the next day technically agreeing to a date with Sasuke, does that mean they're together? or maybe im reading this chapter wrong! If I am sorry bout that! Oh! I think who ever is flaming about these author reviews should just stop because it gives people consideration to know that the author is actully reading these comments and not just brushing them off, plus she (srry if wrong gender)takes out her precious time to respond to her reviewers which I think is really fucking awesome! So if you if have a problem with her, take that up with me!

Srry about the whole rant thing right there but it just pisses me off when people gives authors bullshit about nothing. I hope even though that person might say something again that you continue the stroy cause it kick ass!!!!!!!

Can't wait for your update!!!!
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From ANON - GS* on November 06, 2005
hmm. i dont know how i never found this fic earlier. lol i read all 6 chapter in like umm well i dun really know but yea. lol. hehe and ur 19. lol wow almost 2 decades old. XD haha. j/k ...well sort of casue u r turning 20 nxt yr. haha. umm yea and i have another thing to say. just ingore the people who dun like the responding at the end. cause even if u do take it out its not going to make the fic any longer . so yea. just keep on with the comments. XD hahah and i like the author notes. their fun to read...4 me that is. lol.>_<

ummm yea about the fic itself. its really good. i seems like u portray them to the tee, in my eyes. and about Itachi is that y he was looking at Naruto with an evil glint? oh and 1 more thing the part where Sasuke was sending Naruto home. dosent Sasuke know where Naturp liive cause he sent him home b4? or did he walk?.....if u wort it then i prob didnt chatch it. lol. well i really like the fic. and please do continue! i'm looking foward 2 the next chappi! oh and sry for the really long comment. >_
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