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By : KeairaxSeiaa
  • From ANON - Fox on December 20, 2005
    O.O i have dreams about this fiction so u better finish it. Please
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  • From ANON - Virgo's Kiss on December 20, 2005
    This is a jaw-dropping, amazingly cool, wonderful, and full of NaruSasu goodness type of fic. lol, that probably sounded odd, but whatever. I really like this.^^ Your descriptions of what they think and feel...and do (>.>)... as they (more so Naruto.) figure out their preference is great. I also like those comments Naruto makes at the beginning of the chapters. It's hard not to giggle (and I don't giggle- ever.) at his denial. I really don't see why those reviewers don't like the review responses. I think it's cool if an author decides they liked a review enough to respond to it, and it's also a great way to find out what's going to happen next. X) If you're still looking for that beta, just say so if you give me a review response and i'll hand over my e-mail.^^ Eargerly awaiting the next chapter. =^-^=
    -Anonomyous a.k.a. Virgo's Kiss
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  • From ANON - Mally on December 20, 2005
    *twitches* Damn that Dawn person, and all the ones who yell at you about REVIEW THINGS! --; *deep breath* Anyways. I love the story. I just finished reading it, and I like to review at the end of stories...and at the moment...that seems to be this chapter...X______x pleaseeeee finish! It's so good! Silly Naruto is great, I love him. Anyways, I must go. Ending points: This is a really great fic...I would know. I scour the fanfic worlds, every genre, every, show anime, manga! Ok, mostly...and I love your fic. ^^ Plus, many others seem to as well....wouldn't wnat to make them sad...right? *begs* more, please?
    ~Mally~
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  • From Auroawinter on December 17, 2005
    I just wanted to say how much I loved reading your story so far. I espcially ( god my sp sucks >.
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  • From ANON - kagome 5778 on December 15, 2005
    OMFG when are goin to F ing update i want more of ur F ing story if you dont F ing update i will find out where you F ing live and F ing force it out of you
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  • From ANON - Noirjyre on December 14, 2005
    This is actually one of the few stories I've enjoyed reading--it's endearing the way Sasuke(sp) has taken Naruto to him with out question--It given you the impression he quiet smitten but not in and gushy way-- I have this image of my head of sasuke realizeing his affections for Naruto and being over whelmed with the need to make Naruto his- I can't wait to read more-- Noow I have to cheak ut yur others fics--If they exsist--thank you for writing this and please keep on--

    B
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  • From ANON - Justajester on December 13, 2005
    Well...I could find a ring. It would be hard to get one big enough to fit your frontal lobe [hee - it's a lame joke, shush :D]

    But I am on my knees right now, typing this XD

    Please Update soon. This chapter so kawaii ;)
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  • From ANON - losthimagain on December 11, 2005
    I move that Sasuke asks Naruto if he can live with him and one sided insest would be cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Could you please update soon?!?!?!?! XD I've been looking for this fic forever (One time I found it but my computer spazed out on me befor I could read it then I couldn't remember the name............ XP) UPDATE *the glowing green skoll demands*

    -The Update Monster
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  • From on December 07, 2005
    bottom lip slowly protrudes as I come to grips with the fact that you haven't updated. . . .pouting slightly, and now I'm gonna beg you not to stop, untill it's really finished, Please!!!????? It's really good!!

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  • From ANON - aj on November 30, 2005
    cute
    i love it!
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  • From ANON - The Dragon's Lover on November 29, 2005
    *coughcoughNaruto'saclosetgaycoughcough* Wow, I must be coming down with something.
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  • From ANON - ZoeyJade on November 29, 2005
    Firstly I just want you to know I love your writing. Your style and the writing itself! It's hard to find really good fanfic authors! Nextly...I love love love the way you're portraying Sasuke and Naruto. They're IC but not. I like it and think you're doing a wonderful job. I'm glad I found this fic and decided to read it. I have no real complaints as of yet since I think you haven't done anything wrong. Except the short chapters. :) I like long chapters but you do end them in good spots so I can't REALLY complain about that either. As for people complaining about your reviews.....screw them. As you've said. If they dont want to read them they should just move on to the next chapter. That's what I do. I like it when authors respond to my response but since I don't care to read anyone elses....I just skim ahead. No biggie. So please please PLEASE don't let a few morons ruin this for you. I can't wait for you to post the next chapter! And I don't want you to not because some people are just to stupid! Ok? Anyway keep but the excellant work!!!
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  • From ANON - Carrot on November 28, 2005
    Yay! You updated! I' ve been waiting a long time for an update! i'm gonna call my friend (who also a big fan of this story) and tell her there's a new chapter!
    You really are a good writer! Hee hee, i'm, gonna continue to wait for another update!
    BTW, I love how cute Sasuke is being towards Naruto. You really should keep that up! I thought for sure he was gonna be a jerk but i suppose i was wrong! IN this case though, i love being wrong!! yay!!!!
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  • From ANON - pineapple on November 28, 2005
    HI I REALLY, REALLY, REALLY...ETC. LIKE UR STORY PLZ CONTINUE IT SOON. I CAN GUESS AT HOW IT MUST ME HARD TO FIND THE TIME TO WRITE IT WITH ALL THE CRAP THEY MAKE U DO IN COLLEGE. LUCKLY I STILL HAVE 2 MORE YEARS OF HIGHSCHOOL. ANYWAY TRY TO FIND THE TIME TO CONTINUE THE STORY. IT'LL MAKE ME REALLY HAPPY. IF YOU DONT I'LL BE VERY DISPLEASED AND WILL STUFF MY AUNTIE BERGA'S SOCKS IN YOUR MOUTH. YOU DON'T WANT AUNTIE BERGA'S SOCKS IN YOUR MOUTH. TRUST ME.
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  • From ANON - Shadows_Call on November 28, 2005
    ^^ Of course, another great chapter. Mwa ha ha... >.> Hey, girls do the 'oh we have to go to the bathroom' thing all the time, why not men? Nice touch there. I don't think the story seemed forced at all, by the way. I like the longer chapters as a reader, but respect your need to end it right where you want it. Honestly. ^^; I hate cliffies, but I LOVE inflicting them upon my readers. So I wouldn't ever complain about shortness of your chapters.

    I am a little sad that you went with what the reviews said. ^^; I think this is your story, and you should go with it where ever you want, Uchihacest or not.
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