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By : KeairaxSeiaa
  • From ANON - B. Raven on January 01, 2006
    OMG! This is a very well written story, please update soon

    I'm like this-----> *O*
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  • From ANON - carol-chan on December 31, 2005
    this is such a well-written story~ i really enjoy reading the lil' segments on naruto's thoughts trying to keep his manly pride intact. just wondering...is there gonna be an appearance from gaara? that would make things a bit difficult for both boys. anyways, hope to see more from you soon.
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  • From on December 30, 2005
    ooh.. i love it. You write wonderfully and keep us readers interested. I have found myself slowly retreating from Naru/Sasu fanfics. I got bored of the Naruto pairings so i moved onto something different. You have successfully captured my interest and I congratulate you! I love the peoples personalities. They arent OFC... yet you added something different and more likable.

    I am slightly confused as to your author notes of the Uchihacest. I have no problem with it but i usually feel a bit disappointed when it interups a Naruto/Sasuke moment. Sasuke's brother IS just a protective brother, right? He is not harboring love for his younger brother is he? It would be an alright twist.. but I'd rather you didnt. Course, my opinions dont really matter.. it IS your story. You are doing a wonderful job by the way. Update.. FAST! I shall come beat you with a stick if you keep me in suspense. XD I tend to threaten the authors of the stories that i like. sorry.. *shuts up and leaves*
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  • From ANON - Shadows_Call on December 30, 2005
    Wah, sorry this is late. *glomp* ^^ I liked this chapter a lot! Shikamaru was cute, but then I figured you would do a good job with him. o.o Will there ever be yaoi in it? Or is that something I need to sit on you until you agree to do?
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  • From ANON - Ta-chan on December 30, 2005
    Please, please, please update soon!!!
    I love how you portray Naruto and how he denies being in denial...almost.
    You did very well with getting Shikamaru's character as with Kakashi.
    Oh, I love Sasuke's sexy evil stalker-ness.
    One question, must you always reply to every review, I don't want to be rude or mean, but you make the chapter seem alot longer then it actually is, and I hate being led on like that.
    Aside from that your writing is wonderfull, update soon.
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  • From Jinhito on December 30, 2005
    *falls over laughing* I'm only chapter 3 of your story and oh my god... I nearly snorted a piece of macaroni out my nose... (I'm eating a late lunch and Iruka nearly had me dying) XD This is hilarious, I can't wait to read more, and just felt you should know my thoughts in advance since it could be a while before I actually finish reading. Heh heh, and yeah the food mentioning? I figured you might like that too... I know I'm gonna enjoy the rest of this fic; cliche` or not!
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  • From ANON - Stupidity Unleashed on December 30, 2005
    I REALLY, REALLY like this fic^^ The part with the pizza slice made me smile soooo bad it creeped my lil sister (she was sitting across from me watching TV) out. Lol. Mmm, Itachi's being a bit of a butt. I guess it's just his way of caring? It reminds me of how my dad "inspects" all boyfriends my sisters and I bring home XD Plz update soon! Oh, and happy New Year!!
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  • From ANON - loveslave on December 30, 2005
    yay! what a cute date! I loved that, you kept me up till 4 in the morning and i dont regret it at all! i hope you're updating again soon! you have a devoted fan waiting.

    (i love your Naruto to peices, good job writing him!)
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  • From ANON - LibertyCrusader on December 29, 2005
    I absolutely LOVE your story. I've been following since chapter 4 (and haven't written a review yet which is why this is so long), and I have a friend who's been following since chapter 6. Whenever you update, the day of, or the day after, we see each other and one of us says "She updated Watching" followed by "I know, I've already read it". I usually don't like AUs, but you capture the character of Naruto and Sasuke /so/ well. It's the typical high-school plot, but you've done it very well.

    Also, thank you for what you've done with ItaSasu. I have issues with that pairing, probably because what I know of Itachi is based mostly off of fanfiction as I'm not up to date in the series (And I hit myself every time I read fanfiction, because I keep reading spoilers...but SasuNaru is so irresistible!), but trying to get there, and I haven't seen much of him yet. Anyway, I wouldn't have stopped reading your fic if you included it, I would have skipped over it, but I'm really glad I didn't have to skip any of your writing because I really love it.

    LOVED the initial kiss, by the way; I think you portrayed Naruto's feelings and thoughts really well.

    Please ignore whoever is bitching about your review responses. If they can't handle skipping over them, they aren't worth your time. Do what the fuck you want.
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  • From ANON - kit master on December 29, 2005
    squeeeeelllllllllllllllllllll of glee!! I love this story. Please MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!! I'm like stuck to my chair until you update!!


    je ne

    kitsune master no hentai
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  • From GiGi1o1 on December 29, 2005
    PLESE UPDATE!!I SPENT 3 HOURS READING THIS AND i NEED TO READ MORE!!!CAUSE THIS STORY IS SO FREAKIN' AWSOME!!!!
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  • From ANON - Zane on December 28, 2005
    Zane here! Actually no I didn't, I haven't even heard of that book, but I read an excert from it and it looks really cool. I might read it. Oh! Just so you know I'm female, not male. *no offense just letting you know so you aren't confused* But anyway enough about that, I loved this chapter. It was so sweet and I love it how your making them take it slow! *gets all starry eyed and dream bubbles appear* and they kissed!!!! on the first date! *squeals*

    Question: Does Sasuke feel intimidated by Shikamaru or something? because I sense a little more than * hey! y n the hell r u here, cause im trying to molest naruto here!* hostility here. Then again I could be wrong. Oh and you trying to base their relationship by what it would be like in real life? or are you just going wit le flow?

    I know your probably tired going through finals! I heard college finals are killer!!!!*looking fearful of next year* Hey! at least you get a month off for winter break!!!! And hey! I luv your review responses, don't give those up!!!!! I like reading them!!! Especially when you answer mine! It makes me feel all special! *smiles*

    Enough of my rambles!!!!! Go and type next chapter!!!! Update ASAYC! (As soon as you can!)
    Your number one,knucklehead, hyperactive, fan!!!!!!
    -Zane
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  • From bellemort on December 28, 2005
    gah, so cute! dating at ichiraku... sasuke's a romantic, really, even if he tries to deny it. wouldn't go out of his way to please naruto like that if he isn't.

    i'm not much of an uchihacest fan either, and i'm rather glad that you decided to tone down the content between itachi and sasuke. i'm loving this fic more each chapter. i love the opening naruto monologue too; sorry to hear that you're finding it quite troublesome now after a few chapters...

    waiting impatiently for the next update!
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  • From ANON - Darksilk on December 28, 2005
    MORE! I NEED MORE!!! You have to update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Kagaya on December 28, 2005
    Ahhh...that was so sweet.
    Sigh...their first date.
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