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By : KeairaxSeiaa
  • From ANON - Shedding Ink on July 24, 2007
    I was so excited when you announced that you would be continuing the story. soon after fourteen folllowed and I loyally kept watch for the following fifthteen.. But it still hasn't come and I'm starting to doubt that it ever will.

    I love your story and I'd love to see more of it.
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  • From on July 23, 2007
    Oh my god, your story is absolutely amazing! I read the entire thing today and I couldn't stop! It's so well written and I love how you make Naruto talk at the beginning of every chapter. I can't wait until you update and I hope things at school get easier for you (By the way, do you know how I can put this story on alert or something? Sorry, I'm new on this site. I've only used FF.Net =P)
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  • From Tokyogirl21 on June 30, 2007
    Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - riddle me yellow on June 23, 2007
    OH NO! ITS A CLIFFHANGER! I love the ending to this chapter, its so suspencfull. NO SASUKE, DONT THINK LIKE THAT! haha Please update soon, the way you left their relationship is KILLING me
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  • From ANON - Kenny on June 23, 2007
    I LOVE it! Wonderfull work, im completely in love with this plot. It would be a real shame if you were to not finish it, you have tons of talent! PLease update as soon as your able and good luck with writing and life in general
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  • From ANON - Kenny on June 18, 2007
    Great job on this chapter, and fic in general. I could not believe the last chapter, it was so sad an frusterating! PLease update as soon as you can so my mind can be set at ease XD
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  • From monrque on June 12, 2007
    this is a good story
    so when are you going to update

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  • From ANON - Anon on May 25, 2007
    argh you took wayyyy too long to update! and it was short! i feel cheated! tempted to never read anything you write again!(end dramatic rambling...) unfortunately i love this story and your ideas....lol. pretty please with sugar on top update soon!!
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  • From ANON - jude on May 25, 2007
    awesome
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  • From Vague on May 09, 2007
    Hello Author,
    I am a huge fan of yaoi and have started a site archiving all the good yaoi fiction. I am glad to say that your story has made it into the archive. Congratulations on telling a truly moving tale.

    About the Archive:
    The archive is nothing more than a site which links directly to good stories. I do not claim your story as my own but rather I encourage others to read and review it as it deserves that recognition.

    Your story is linked at http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php?showtopic=52. If you would like it to be removed from the archive or are concerned about anything then please send me an email. I will be glad to answer or remove it. Thank you.

    Vague
    Administrator of the Yaoi Fanfiction Archive (YFA)
    http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php
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  • From ANON - Chirimen Bear on April 18, 2007
    Please update. I'm in love with this story. Naruto is so adorable. You really bring him to life. Normally I wouldn't have gone for the high school setting but I quickly fell in love with the story. Please continue..
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  • From ANON - Blood White Panther on April 17, 2007
    I love this story. The irony gods have certainly done a number on Naruto. I can't decide if Yondaime is actually the murderer or merely connected in some way to the incident and wrongly blamed for it. Or, I guess it could all be some plot of Itachi's. Kudos on complicating their lives so heartwrenchingly. And now, of course, the Avenger side of Sasuke is rearing it's bloody head. And poor Naruto still has no idea what's going on. It's really is a beautiful web so far.

    I adore you characterization of Sakura. She is much more believably real while still seeming IC than the homophobic bitch she's someimes writen and ruined as. And despite the potential clicheness of the scene where Naruo's friends stnad up for him, I loved it. Especially Sakura being the first to step in for the couple, and the fact that Kiba and Choji finally grew some balls and took a stand for a friend (I'm referring to how you wrote that they avoided Naru-chan in the caffeteria). It was just too cute, and perfectly IC, when Naruto claimed credit for the victory and assumed he was just THAT amazing.

    I love the fic so far
    ~Panther
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  • From ANON - Tokyogirl21 on April 06, 2007
    Are you going to update soon. I'm waiting to see what happens lol
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  • From ANON - Seto's Darkness on March 26, 2007
    OMG! I'm very happy that I managed to find this fic after so long ^^ I became very busy, and since aff.net changed servers and all the links changed~ Anyhow! :D Actually, I haven't read the recent chapters yet, but I'll leave another review for them next time ^^

    This is one of the fics that made me want to write for the SasuNaru fandom, so I'm very, very, very happy that I managed to find this again :) Good luck with your subjects! :D *will review later*

    --Seto's Darkness :)
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  • From Tokyogirl21 on February 28, 2007
    New chapter?? Love the story
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