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By : KeairaxSeiaa
  • From ANON - Houseki on January 20, 2006
    Nya!! Naruto crawling across the table was hot and the makeout session even hotter!! Ah I wish you'd up'd more, but I know how things go...still haven't up'd mine in quite some time...the writing bug is sleeping or squashed or something cuz I can't get in the mood. But at least you up'd and it was a pleasently good chap. Poor Sasuke though..I can't believe Sakura told someone..who told someone..who told someone... yeah.. that's how rumors start ya know? lol aww it was so sad!! i wanted to see what would happen in the theater!!! *sigh* let the drama begin ^__~ Believe it!

    Mata ja!

    Houseki
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  • From ANON - Emmy on January 20, 2006
    O_O Sakura is such a little bitch!!! *whew* sorry, had to get that off my chest, I can't believe her. Poor Naruto! I so wanted Sasuke to beat them up, I hope he at least hits someone in the next chapter, please? But if Naruto is gonna get all mad about it, maybe that's not a good thing. Eh, either way, Sasuke sticking up for Naruto would be hot! Grrr, I really do hate Sakura, so maybe Sasuke telling her off while he's at it would be nice. Oh man, i'm so mad at Sakura right now it seems that I can't get violence off my mind, hehe. Well, this is a really good story, and i'm VERY glad you didn't stop writing it. You know what I think about this review response thing? First of all, I am also a fanfic writer, and so I know how every review can seem like a great gift at times. The fact that you would go out of your way to respond to them is not annoying or anything, it shows how much you really appreciate each and every review. Second of all, and it all comes down to this, it's your story. You take the time to write it, so you can do what you want with it. And you have done an amazing job so far. I can't wait for the next chapter, and the *crosses fingers* ass kicking Sasuke!
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  • From ANON - mE on January 20, 2006
    “Pleasantly plump.” !!! So cute!! God I love your writing!! love love love! Keep up the good work!
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  • From Reyn on January 20, 2006
    (eyes are currently the size of golf balls)

    Whhaaa~at?!? You can't jest stop there!! That's evil! Wah! poor Naruto!!
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  • From ANON - Kagaya on January 20, 2006
    How could you make Naruto into such a coward. He would have at least given a semblance of a fight.

    But I was glad you didn't make him do something stupid like saying ugly words to deny and hurting everyone's feeling.

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  • From ANON - Kali S. on January 20, 2006
    *cries for Naruto* *kills Sakura, who no doubtedly told* *hugs Sasuke, for being so GOSH DARNED CUTE*
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  • From ANON - himeyume on January 20, 2006
    YES next chapter I want to read about how naruto will over come this and be with sasuke
    pls pls update soon asap thank you
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  • From ANON - Shadows_Call on January 20, 2006
    Honestly, you should stop listening to what people complain about. Especially when it really has nothing to do with the story. ^^;

    Anywho, now that that gripe is out of the way... Aww, poor Sasuke. He was just about to get some movie gropage when the evil people stepped in. I like the chapter, and their community service. *snerk* That had to be a pretty out of it elderly person to fall asleep around Naruto. *cough* That is, if he were real, and... well yeah, you get my point. ^^; Just write more soon. And I'll repay you with porn. Of your choice.
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on January 20, 2006
    wwwaaaaahhhhh, I want more, I want more damn it!!! Anyhoo, Im loving this, keep up the good work and update soon. TaTa
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  • From ANON - Kiaralana on January 19, 2006
    I love it and I want more! :3 No, honest do update soon! Hm, sorry, I don't like it when reviewers order writers, I should just thank you for this story, but I
    just read it and aw...I want the next chapters.
    I'm sorry there have been dumb people complaining about your review responses. I skipped them, but I think it's great of you to response to as many as possible.Sorry to comment on that again XD, I'm going to comment on your story now.
    I looove ItaSasu, so I'm very happy to know that's what you've got in mind even if it's very very (well too much for my part lol) light. I'm a dead SasuNaruSasu fan girl, it's the most romantic couple I know -btw, I completly agree with you, who cares about who's the uke and who's the teme? Another good point for you!- but I love to think of Itashi's impossible love and yearning for his little brother. I find it so romantic. So even if we don't have much of
    Itashi there, I love the way you picture him. Btw, you succeed in keeping everyone in character, that's nice.
    I find your story has got a melancholic feeling, it's a bit strange as the plot isn't melancholic. Maybe it's the dark Uchiha's mansion and Itashi hovering around. And Sasuke's very quiet too, *and* I've been reading in a very silent room in the middle of a winter afternoon, so maybe it's just me lol. Anyway I did laugh at many points, it's also very funny ^^
    About the tittle, it's nice I find, though of course, it doesn't cover the whole plot, but so what? that's how everything started, ain't it?
    I hope to read the next chapters soon ^^ Have you got a mailing list for updates? If so, can you add my email please? thanks!
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  • From ANON - rachi(lazy enough not to log in) on January 15, 2006
    Please update! I'm really engrossed in this story. I do hope you continue soon. I'll be watching.

    By they way, very well done!

    rachi
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  • From ANON - Arcana on January 13, 2006
    first off, really good story. Love it, love it. Your characterizations are fantastic. I especially love how you write Shikamaru. Any chance we can get more of that Shikamaru-Sasuke interaction? That was very funny. Also denial!Naruto (I love the opening paragraphs in Naruto POV) and NervousJittery!Naruto when Sasuke goes for the public displays of affection. As far as Itachi goes... I'm at first squicked by the idea of him with Sasuke, then decide that I could tolerate to more-than-tolerate the idea, but only if Sasuke is... fairly consensual... Does that make sense? Did I even spell that right? LOL I'd read your story anyway. It's so rare to see this degree of characterization.

    Well, I'm anxiously waiting for the next installment. The link to your story is in the "WIP" folder in my favorites, so I check it every day. :) Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Gaki on January 10, 2006
    Teehee. I have been waiting a long time for this update!!! You're great!! YOU'RE GREAT!!!
    I hope you enjoy writing this as much as i enjoy reading it!

    Lol, first, I thought there was going to be slight ItaNaru, which I don't mind at all. Hm, uchihacest, haven't really read much of them. Well, 1 to be more exact. It wasn't that attractive...

    Anyhoo,,,, I'll be patiently waiting for a lovely update!!!


    -Gaki
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on January 08, 2006
    urg! *whines* Itachi is such a biiitch! some one should beat 'im. beat him gooood. Your fic is just so cute! It is just hilariously witty! (I think I said that once before in a review, but i'll say it again cuz it's true) I forgot all about it for awhile, but I'm so glad I found it again! I really hope you get a chance to update again soon! I just love your fic! >____< oh yeah!
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  • From ANON - Vegeta's slave on January 08, 2006
    I love it I love it I love it. Thats all i can say!!
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