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By : KeairaxSeiaa
  • From ANON - fiberchick7 on May 21, 2006
    Yea! Actually, I did want to review this chapter (quickly) a long time ago, but as you know, couldn't. But now, finally I can.

    I was both happy and unhappy with this chapter. Unhappy that it was Sakura who let the secret out, but happy that she didn't do it to be mean. I'm not really a Sakura fan, I just hate all the bashing. But seriously, is she just stupid or what? Everyone knows that as soon as you tell one person (especially Ino, who for some reason I feel could never keep a secret), eveyone will know! I hope she makes it up to them.

    I look forward to more ItaSasu if you're promising it, just because I like a creepy Itachi.

    Poor Sasuke! And after he got Naruto to open up a little, too. Even worse for Naruto. I knew he wasn't ready . . .

    And again, I adore Shikamaru. He doesn't play a huge role, but I love it every time he appears. And on this note, you've made casual mention of others (like Kiba), are they ever going to show up?

    I'm excited AFF is up again and hope you update soon!

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  • From ANON - Reemu-Chan (not signed in) on May 21, 2006
    It's really nice to find you back as well. Even though this story is "cliché" as you put it, I find that I enjoy it a lot. Especially b/c you have those nice juicy twists. I sorta thought that you had given up on the story b/c even before the site went down, you werent really updating. I'm glad that I'm wrong. I can't really remember if I even commented you back then. And that makes me feel bad. Sorry. The story is depressing at the moment. I remember feeling hurt at the end of chapter 9. I mean, Sasuke JUST got Naruto into feeling relaxed around him, but then those jerks at the theatre ruined it all. And now, just reading chapter 10 .. . . *shakes head*. I feel really bad for Naruto. If I was him (I have loads in common with the dork. Well, not at the moment. For one, I'm hyperactive, and I enjoy getting to know people, . . .why am I giving you a profile about myself? Hmmmm, oh yeah, going off topic again. -.- So yeah, I would just switch schools. Thank god I don't have and haven't had any probs at school yet. I can't imagine getting into anything like him. Can't you have Hinata stand up for the guy? She's always crushing on the Kitsune. Just a thought. Or you could have another male that shows up to school as a new kid *cough* Gaara *cough* and threaten the idiots at school. Did I forget to mention that I always add what I think will happen in the story along with my comments? I do that a lot. Anyways, I read that you had already finished another chapter and a half while AFF was having its probs. Can't wait to read them. Keep up the interesting work. I'll be back for more ^^

    Have a Nice Day!


    Redwitch05



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  • From ANON - Mally on May 21, 2006
    I gotta admit...I totally forgot about this fic! Good thing you updated. ^^
    So, I like this fic so far. AU kind of things aren't usually my fave, but this one is pretty good! I only say that and not kickrocking because I hate ItaSasu. Just always have...I can't help it. I mean, COME ON! During the whole manga/anime (depending which you prefer) it's like they are trying to make us see SasuNaru. Plus I think that's the most uber cute. ^^ Poor Naruto loves him more than anyone. I do love the internal thoughts Naruto has at the start to each chapter. Nice touch! Right. Well, I must be off to bed. I hope you continue this fic, because I want to see a happy ending for Naruto and Sasuke. Even if he also pisses me off. Whiny little...*grumbles* Anyways, great job, please keep writing! ^^
    ~Mally~
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  • From ANON - ranni on May 21, 2006
    I liked it, and i hope sakura and the rest of the school either get beat to dust or feel so damn guilty it hurts...Hope to see more soon!
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  • From ANON - Daze on May 20, 2006
    Truly, honestly, I would rather you not post the ItaSasu shorts in your story...I'm pretty sure I'll be outnumbered, though. ^^;; It would be lovely if you posted them as a separate story or something of the like, though!

    A new name? Hm...eh...I don't know! ^^; I bet you'll get some good suggestions, though, good luck with that. ^^

    Another awesome chapter! I just love your writing style, everything is so intense! *ahah* Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - PurplePinstripeDevil on March 14, 2006
    Ugh! I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - ladywolfTerri on March 13, 2006
    GAH! I sat down today and read this from start to now... and I need MORE!!!!...^^... really great job so far! I hope Naruto chooses to follow his heart and forget the rest! They hate him, denying it now won't change that, so why shouldn't he have the bit of happiness somewhere?!!
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  • From ANON - blue_genjutsu on March 11, 2006
    Great story and can't wait for more! :)
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  • From ANON - Sarong Luv on February 06, 2006
    Dear Author,

    I really really like this story very much and I hope you continue the story (grin).
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  • From ANON - Drake on February 06, 2006
    OMG!!! THATS SO MEESED UP!! WHAT THOSE PEOPLE SAID! i understand how Naruto feels. hurry and write the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Pat on February 06, 2006
    Next chapter! next chapter! NEXT CHAPTER!!! I NEEED CHAPTER 10!!!
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  • From ANON - Manda-Kun on February 06, 2006
    omg. I love it. Mostly the begining or Naruto ranting about his manhood. Ahh, good times. I hoooope you update soon, you'd make me shed some tears if not.
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  • From ANON - Stupidity Unleashed on February 05, 2006
    Oh no!! That sux so bad :( Those poor babies...People can be such asses sometimes! (huffs) Something tells me next chapter'll be a dozy XP Nice job. Keep up the good work! I understand how time-consuming and sleep-depriving skool can be. Hehe. You take Spanish too? Do you have Spanish relatives or are you doing it for the heck of learning another language?
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  • From ANON - dream breather on February 02, 2006
    i love the story
    please update
    i feel sorry for poor little naruto his one hope for happyness and it is being so tough on him

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  • From ANON - nessSachiel on February 02, 2006
    oooooooooooo...I can't wait ^__^
    update, girl! I really like that fic.
    I must say, that I do not like Sasukes with Itachi (becouse they are brothers? o.O), but in your fic, to me Itachi is like father to Sasuke. The one, to worry to much :P

    Your fic is really good, and I would hate to hurt you, for not finishing it ;)
    anyway
    update soon, please! :*
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