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By : KeairaxSeiaa

From ANON - Nekogirl on May 24, 2006
eee! You're back!! I missed this story so much. The part where Sasuke is telling Naruto he's stupid for acting like he doesn't miss him if my fav. I would never expect Sasuke to say something like that. But in this fic it works. Thanks for the update!
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From ANON - Mystie on May 23, 2006
oh gosh! this is depressing!!
they obviously have something between them, but Naruto is being so ignorant.
aw shucks, now what? Would Sakura ask for Naruto's forgiveness (seems like it)
so does that kiss mean that they've made up?? or they still apart?
updates soon! (o^_______^o)
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From ANON - Anon. on May 23, 2006
OK. I have so much to say. First of all, you are such a GREAT writer! This story is very romantic, but you still manage to keep everyone in character. You have just the right amount of make-out sessions, but you balance all the physical stuff with emotional stuff. It is so difficult for many writers to do that. I think it's so romantic how Sasuke cares so much for Naruto, and how he cups his cheek. I almost blush when I read all that. Anyway, I just wanted you to know that you have a very big fan out there.
Oh, yeah, it is so nice of you to reply to all the reviews. You shouldn't stop just because some people said so. If they don't want to read it, then they can skip it! And don't change your plans for the story because others want it. Write what you think is right, okay?

Well, I think I've said everything. Just keep writing great stuff and I'll keep reading it.

From, Your #1 fan!

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From ANON - Anon on May 23, 2006
YOU'RE BACK!! *glomps Keaira* I'm sorry, but I have been in love with this story since the beginning, and when I saw that it was updated I almost squeed!! This story actually cemented my love for the SasuNaru fandom, now a proud favorite of mine. Which was also strangely enough, my first favorite malexmale pairing. It's kick ass storied from authors like you, Questofdreams, Trollmia and Fyredevyl that make SasuNaru the BEST pairing in fanfic. ^_^

This chapter didn't disappoint, and the wait was well worth it - I hope Sasuke and Naruto get everything resolved in the future. You do such an amazing job conveying their feelings and emotions, it was hard for me to read without getting all choked up. They are both in such a horrible position, I feel so bad for Naruto! What Sasuke said to Sakura about only wanting Naruto made my heart melt, and finding out how deeply Naruto really feels for Sasuke was great. I just hope that Naruto tells Sasuke how he feels soon, since I hate to see them both suffering so much. And as much as I usually adore the ItaSasu pairing, I really wish Itachi would just go far, far away. Forever. You know?

Anyways, no matter what happens, good or bad, i'm sure the next chapter will kick just as much - if not more - ass than this one. Keep up the good work, yeah?

- Mimi
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From ANON - MeLaiya on May 23, 2006
well its about damn time!!! *SIGH* its always the good ones that decide they like to update once every two years or so. Well anyhoo, keep up the good work and please update soon. I love this.
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From ANON - faux nostalgia on May 23, 2006
yes, you are stalked. by me. heh, just kidding. but i check for your fanfic to be updated every week because im in love with it. no matter it be complete or not, this is definitely a fanfic i can read more than 5 times (laughs)

ps: my account has been deleted. must make another one^^
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From bluegenjutsu on May 23, 2006
Love this story, I think I had read up to chapter 10 on fanfiction site and I'm glad to find a new chapter here. It was very good. :)

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From ANON - ladywolfTerri on May 23, 2006
Poor Naru-chan!!! He needs to just accept it and Sasuke should do something sweet to help him... maybe leave roses on his desk... admitting how deeply his feelings run??..

Please update soon!
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From ANON - Houseki on May 23, 2006
Awww Naruto is SO in love with Sasuke *heart eyes* nya...I really hope this isn't coming to an end!! It almost sounds like it...

Sakura's scene was played out really well...Sasuke forgiving her in his own way was cool. She seems to be one of the only fangirls that can come to her senses.

*sigh* MORE!! lol I'd hate to complain, but I REALLY wish your chaps were longer hehe I guess I'm really used to reading my beta's fics..and her chaps range from 15-31 pages!! hehe i'm just being impatient..I wanna know what happens next!!! *whines* ^__~

Well I'm glad you're happy with your new girlfriend and that you and your ex are cool with each other. I'll definitely check out her stuff soon too btw!

Now, on to YIM: go to yahoo.com and on the top of the page it'll say 'messenger' so click on that, and then basically you just follow the directions. It might give you a few choices on which messenger you want..I have "messenger with voice" it rocks ^__^ so yeah, you click on that and then it'll just tell ya what to do and within about 2 mins you'll have it! and then you sign in usin your email minus the @yahoo.com and then you can add me!! my screenname is inuyashas_hoseki69 And that's it! pretty simple! So, until you get yim, and/or until you update next...

signing off ^__~

Houseki
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From ANON - Sarah on May 23, 2006
Firstly, this is the first review I've ever given on here and pretty much its only because you were still gonna update even if you didn't get reviews (well, that and this is a fantastic story). Strange, I know. Secondly, this is by far one of the best Naruto/Sasuke fics I've read. I'm a big fan of AU's because I love seeing how authors interrpret the charcters. You do not only a wonderful job of showing their outer personalities, but the way you show their inner selves is both heart-warming and heart-breaking. The way you balance out Sakura's bad and good points is an intriguing dynamic. Not quite bashing but entirely realistic. I'm very happy that you brought up the issue of Sasuke doing this to Naruto almost if he wants to make Naruto more selfish. I just hope that as you have Naruto's character develop that you deal a bit with Sasuke's obvious selfishness. That should be all. Oh, and if you still need a BETA, feel free to email me.
Bravo to you on the fantastic fanfic!
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From ANON - Daze on May 22, 2006
Aha, I'm sorry! I guess I did miss the first note! *completeidiot*

But really...I mean, it's not like if for some reason you DID post the one shots in your story, I'd suddenly be all "nu way lyke dat story sux now i h8 it". Ahah, that would be silly and lame. I hope my comment didn't suggest that I would go into some crazy SasuNaru fanatical rage if you included them. *reads her comment again* Wow...I sure did say 'though' a lot in that...

Well, anyway, I'd still be interested in reading your ItaSasu shots. Even if it's not my 'super favorite' pairing, I just love reading anything written by you. Ahah, does that sound weird? Na, that's okay with me. Your writing could turn any devout SasuNaru fan into...well at least a reluctant ItaSasu lover.

Once again, super intense! Poor guys...aw, I can't imagine how hard it must be for...well, really any homosexual in a homophobic school. It must be awful! *grr* Damned homophobes!

Oh and...I'm sorry if my comment is too muddled and confusing. ^^;
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From ANON - Chaos_Mar on May 22, 2006
I usually don�t leave reviews but since this is so good and you have threatened to discontinue it several times, I have decided to review.

I really enjoy your writing style. I love the way you build up their relationship and not just made them fall dramatically in love in two seconds or stretched it out for thirty chapters. Your characterization is also very good. The way they think, the way they interact with the other characters, and their reactions to the situations they get into are excellent. My only complaint is that you didn�t keep the Uchihacest. Besides being my second favorite pairing, it would have provided a very interesting dramatic twist.

Please update soon. ^_^

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From ANON - mE on May 22, 2006
I love Watching. It's SasuNaru at the best. I can't wait to what's going to happen with Sasuke and Naruto and how will Naruto cope with everyone knowing about his relationship with Sasuke. And How will they end up. Keep up the good work. Sasunaru yay!! :D
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From ANON - Sato-kun on May 22, 2006
This by far is one of the few highschool AU SasuNaru stories I actually like xD Drama * w*! And not just about sex! 'Cause Sato does enjoy a good plotline at times! >=( Anyways~ Continue with the good work and I hope to see more of this store~

Oh yeah.. o__o; Uchihacest? =D
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From ANON - Houseki on May 22, 2006
Hey! 'member me? ^__^ It has been sooooooooooooooo long since I've left a review..*sigh* Thank the gods that AFF is FINALLY getting sorted out and now we can post our stories again.

It had been so long since I read your story, I reread it ^__^ And, I still love it :p Nya!!! Chap 10 was so sad. ahhh love that sasuke called sakura a bitch...he had every right. she shouldn't have opened her mouth. Poor Naruto though man...he is just soooooooo confused!! But I feel really bad for Sasuke too, cuz he's crazy about Naruto and now Naruto wants a..."break" hehe

*sigh* Post the next chaps soon!! I really really wanna see how things go now. Well, I guess I have always wanted to see where things go :p

Sorry to hear about you and your partner breaking up...a new name eh? Yeah, choosing new nicknames are always fun lol I've been using "hosekit" "houseki" now for a couple years...hmm ever get YIM? heh I can't get AIM...cuz I'm pretty good with the nicknames...*shrugs* get YIM! haha

Until next time!

Houseki
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