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By : KeairaxSeiaa
  • From ANON - Innerchild on June 17, 2006
    i freaking loved this story. and your style of writing. it's hilarious how naruto tells his side of the story in the beginning, or his thoughts, whatever, it still makes me laugh like an idiot. i'd have to say that by far, my favorite scene was when naruto made sasuke call a cab just so he could walk sasuke to his front door. and then itachi being all... overprotective. it's really good so far and i can't wait for more. seriously, i've been checking like everyday to see if you've updated. and i don't even have internet at home. so, i'm breaking into other ppl's houses.... quite literally. anywho, i heard that you liked itachi and sauske together, and i can honestly say that i've never really thought about them beind together, but if you have any good stories with the pairing, then send it my way please. i'd be happy to check them out.

    hope to talk to you soon,
    innerchild
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  • From ANON - sie on June 13, 2006
    wow great work! i hope to read more and again GREAT WORK!
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  • From ANON - FireonIce on June 12, 2006
    I hope you get your laptop back soon. I feel so bad for you, you always seem to have some sort of computer trouble! It seems that if you didn't have any bad computer luck, you wouldn't have any luck at all D:

    oh man, I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. I adore the way you've written Shikamaru and that comment to the guys blocking Naruto's locker was GENIUS. I can totaly picture Shikamaru doing that, everything about his character is perfect. Keep up the damned good work and I will wait as patiently as I can for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Kajia on June 08, 2006
    hey!
    really like your story
    well written, with my most favorite pairing, sometimes funny (I loved the PMABM list ^^)
    I usually don't really like high school fics but you made me love this one
    I wish you luck with your computer (those little things can get so capricious sometimes...mine too has come back not so long ago but it was the screen that was off for me)
    well i'm looking forward your new chapters
    just a little question : how long do you intend this fic to be?
    oh and really like your shikamaru too, I already likes him in the manga but your fic makes me likes him even more.

    so good luck for the next chapters and keep on writing please ^^
    (I'm sorry if I made some (a lot of ) mistakes but english is not my first language so.. I supposed it still be understandable anyway even if in an awkward style ^^)

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  • From ANON - Linku on June 03, 2006
    EEEE!! I wish I was in that courtyard when they were kissing. *front row seat*
    Oh, please update as soon as possible. I want to know when Naruto finally gives in to Sasuke... and the action begins. *evil grin*
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  • From ANON - Ta-chan on June 02, 2006
    I...love...you, so fucking much!!!
    Your the best in the whole wide world!!!!
    I can't belive that talent like yours could actually exsist!!!!
    Writing: amazing, characters:amazing, story: a-freaking-mazing!!!!!!!!!
    Take your time sweet heart I could wait a life time for an update!!!!
    Lotsa Love!!!
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  • From ANON - REI on May 29, 2006
    FINALLY!
    AFTER WHO KNWOS HOW LONG!
    PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!
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  • From Inuzuka on May 29, 2006
    O_o How'd I miss this...?

    It goes without saying that this is one of the best AU fics I've read (I've never really gotten into many fandoms aside from Naruto), and it's also one of the best fics overall I've read, too. Maybe if I go back and read it again, I'll hate it a little bit for being trite or something, but as it is, it's really well written, and just pulls you along (yeah, I just read it through). I kind of feel bad thinking "yeah, it could end like that," but the fuzzy feeling in my belly says that you should continue.

    Or, more honestly: ^_^ More!
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  • From ANON - mimi on May 28, 2006
    Hello... I am sooo glad you continued writing the story. I could not wait to see how Naruto continued to deal with the situation. ( I go between laughing at the situation and feeling sad for him... poor Naruto he is really confused) I am also glad to see that sasuke made another attempt to get Naruto tocome around. I do feel bad for Naruto *grin* and I can't wait to read what hapens next. Keep up the great job!
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  • From ANON - dawn on May 28, 2006
    oh god yes hurry as fast as u can,, oh man i can't focus lol me go nighty now
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  • From ANON - dawn on May 28, 2006
    sorry bout complainin i'm glad u didn;t stop the story i woulda houndid u it's to good of a story
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  • From ANON - Risa on May 28, 2006
    I'm so happy that this has been updated *does happy dance* It was the highlight of my day to be able to read a well written sasunaru fanfic. Thank you so much. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Shu-chan on May 27, 2006
    Great chapter! Please write more and update soon. Your story rocks. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Shiin on May 26, 2006
    Waii, FINALLY AFF.net is up again. Knowing my luck it's probably been up for ages, but I've been too busy/annoyed with it to check.

    SO - sorry the review for chapter 10 is... well, a chapter late, because when I read it AFF wan't letting me review -.-

    ANYWAY:

    "The older man gave a soft chuckle and shook his head, looking back down at his meal. “You can’t help the way you are, Naruto. The way you feel. And if acting on those feelings won’t hurt anyone, then there’s nothing wrong with doing so.” Besides… while Naruto and Sasuke were complete opposites in nearly every way, Iruka got the feeling that they… needed each other. Both had difficult pasts, and though Iruka wouldn’t have thought they would end up together, it made a strange sort of sense."

    That's the only thing that bugged me in this chapter - why do we suddenly get a flash of insight into Iruka's reasoning when the rest of this part is Naruto's PoV? Maybe what you could have done instead is have his reasoning remain a mystery, then add in another short paragraph after this one where Iruka's staring after the closed door where Naruto just left and thinking over his reasoning, as it were.

    And now for chapter 11:

    Again, only one thing that bugged me, and again to do with Sasuke's car. I've no idea why - I never usually pay attention to autos - but there's something about the way they go around with their cars that bugs me.

    "He grabbed his books and opened the door, Sakura jumping backwards quickly to avoid getting hit with it. “And second, I’m not the person you should be telling all of this.” He slammed the door, gave her a curt but accepting nod, then walked away from her without another word, shoving his keys into his pocket."

    He didn't lock his car. >.>
    I know, I know, I'm nit-picking, but the story's so good I wanted to offer some sort of criticism to make it that bit better >.
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  • From ANON - VampireMaru on May 25, 2006
    ok, I am so not a fan of ItaSasu. NARUSASU ALL THE WAY! But I looooove your story>< Its so good! :hearts and lots of love: But yeah, update soon pweeeeaaaase! luffles!
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