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By : KeairaxSeiaa
  • From ANON - NessSachiel on June 27, 2006
    hej
    I just find your fic again :)
    I did not know, that AFF net was back :)
    and I liked those chapters. Sasuke is soooo nice :P
    will there be more od Iruka? He's funny o.O
    and Kakashi, from chapter one, is funny too :)
    write!
    and post!
    :*
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  • From ANON - Vixenia on June 26, 2006
    aww that was sweet. I liked that chappie. hope you update soon. Bai bai
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  • From ANON - CaramelCamel on June 25, 2006
    So nice to see Sakura not portrayed as villanously bitchy. Kudos.
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  • From ANON - Maronaslave on June 23, 2006
    booyah ^_^ teach those people to bully naruto *air fist*
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  • From ANON - Gonrie on June 22, 2006
    I don't know how you were and still don't really know but GOD, I know one thing. You are W-O-N-D-E-R-F-U-L! That story is like... eating ananas in summer! *Something I really like to do:P * I love how the relation is going between Sasunaru. Very well written. and one more thing... I LOVE SHIKAMARU! God, he's always there to help Naruto and I really love the idea that now chouji and kiba will since I always thought they were his friends anyway. :P
    I can't wait until you update! Sincerelly yours, Gonrie!
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  • From ANON - Assassins_Kiss on June 22, 2006
    That was definetly kawaiiness. This is now my favorite Sasuke/Naruto story ever >
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  • From ANON - Novi-kun on June 22, 2006
    *does happy dance* yay!! another chap!! PLEASE MORE MORE MORE MORE!! *hyperventalates*
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  • From ANON - mimi on June 21, 2006
    Yay!!!!!!! a new chapter! I was just about going craaaazzzzzyyyyy ^-^ waiting for the new one. I also like how Naruto's friends stood up for him. I also liked Sasuke's reaction to Naruto's asking Sakura out on a date *big grin* oh yes! Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - love_slave on June 21, 2006
    Happy?! what do you mean happy? they've been super angsty from the beginning, what with the "everyone hates me" "I'm not gay!" "okay, maybe i have the hots for you..." "oh no everyone found out!" Don't worry the cheese tastes good, I can't wait for more!

    to sum up this chapter; AWWWWW!

    can't wait for them to get together.
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  • From ANON - ded (too lazy to log in) on June 20, 2006
    WAIIII! That's sooo cute! I love this story, like really really insanely obsessively love this story! I love how you write them, they interact so well with each other, it's freaking great! -goes into angirl ranting- XD I just foud this one, i've seen it around but haven't been able to read High School Sasunaru for a while because none could meassure up to 'Spiral Falling' But i must say, this is definitely a close second, equally interesting and equally entertaining! I adore it and can't wait for another chapter of this Sasunaru goodness -droolz- :D As for the complaints you've been getting, i say a long wait between chapters is a good thing when the updated chapters make you dizzy for more and reply's to your reviewers are nice, they show that you care we enjoy your story so much. So i say reply away and i will wait forever for another chapter! Beauty damn it! It's just beauty! Plus i think you've turned me into a complete Shika fan XDD Anyways well done, keep up the good work and i will wait on baited breath for the next chappie :DD

    Ja for now.
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  • From ANON - lo on June 20, 2006
    This story has more depth now. Nice job!!
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  • From ANON - lo on June 20, 2006
    The later chapters are less chat with your friends and more good writing...I like this new trend. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Joshua on June 20, 2006
    Hi. This is my first time reviewing, so please forgive me if I sound a bit akward. Well, first I'd like to congragulate you on making such a fantastic story. The use of each of the senses creates a vivid picture. The emotions you display are well written and so are Naruto's thoughts (I've been having those thoughts my self and if you don't know, I'm a guy). I can really relate to his wonderings. I also really like the kiss scenes. Grrrrrrrrr. Can't wait for chapter 13!
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  • From ANON - FireonIce on June 20, 2006
    >8U another curveball?! AAGH, the suspense is KILLING me. I've checked everyday to see if the new update was ready and at long last, chapter twelve was up. YAY! (I'm not being impatient, I'm just excited from reading the new material.) I adore the story so far and I only wish your chapters were longer, I really wanna get deeper into the atmosphere you've created. It's very well written and I cannot wait for the next update
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  • From ladygizarme on June 20, 2006
    soooooo i finally got around to reading this! i must say, i'm glad i did!! Houseki told me about it.. ohh.. probably AGES ago.. *has terrible memory* but, well, i was working on a project in a different fandom and fell off the narufics for awhile.. now thanks to Houseki (again) i'm suddenly ravenously craving it again (not good for my fics in other fandoms, since i now have story ideas for no less than 5 naruto fics...) ..took a lil while still for the hunger for sasunarusasu to hit again (i'm still consumed with Uchihacest but now s x n x s is vying for the OTP spot again..), but now i'm hit hard and when i saw this fic on the up'd page and the summary was familiar from houseki talking about it, i just HAD to read it

    now.. 12 chapters, i should've known from the beginning that i should just open up another tab on firefox and type my review AS I READ because now i can't remember everything i wanted to comment on specifically!! there were a lot of lines in here from the beginning that i loved and made me giggle (a lot of the lines about sasuke looking like he wanted to devour naruto--who doesn't love that XD) anyway, knowing what i SHOULD'VE done and actually DOING it are two different things, ne.. and i'm a bit off track..

    so my best now is: i love the story! i like your writing style and the way you write sasuke and naruto is great! i like the way each chapter opens in naruto's 1st person pov.. and i love how you write shikamaru too! i'm glad he's your fav char cuz he cracks me up. i really like reading his "thoughts" on situations--especially he and sasuke's "banter" during the game show at naruto's house (the line about not doing two things at once *doesn't remember the exact wording anymore*) ohh! and it's nice to see another person that appreciates sakura how i do! i really love her character since the time jump and when people just mindlessly bash her character it's really irritating..

    oh yeah! and sasuke and naruto's first kiss? naruto's rambling mind? SO PERFECT! a good first kiss is so that way ^__^ (not that mine was that good unfortunately but.. a first kiss with a new person is that way too, ne!? so i could totally feel what he felt during that)

    ah! and i just FREAKING CRACKED UP both times iruka insisted "LIES!!" XDDDDD

    ok.. well i've said my peace (as much as i can manage right now--i'm really supposed to be beta'ing something and should get on that before my blurry vision turns complete double--it's bordering on 1 1/2 right now.. or.. something.. )

    i look forward to more (and i'm glad there's much more in store! even if it IS gonna be angsty *has a sadomasochistic love for angst*)

    ~ lg
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