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By : KeairaxSeiaa
  • From ANON - Huck on August 23, 2006
    I've had this story bookmarked for the longest time, and I regret not reading it sooner. This is a wonderful SasuNaru fic :) Your writing style and the way you've arranged this story fits perfectly, I love it! I love the humour, drama, and your characterizations of Naruto and Sasuke are entertaining. For some reason I can just picture this story as a doujinshi ^_^
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  • From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on August 22, 2006
    Wow, ok first of all, this is a great fic and please tell me that wasn't the end! Second of all, I realize these issues are over and done with but I feel I should say something anyway. Alright, I don't understand why people are so upset about you responding to the reviews in the new chapters. I mean at least you acknowledge your reviewers, which is more than some authors can say. I do have to agree that it is a bit of a tease though, making us think the chapter is longer than it really is. To be honest though, it’s not that big of a deal so people really just need to deal.
    Secondly of all, I can respect that Itachi/Sasuke is your favorite pairing, but I appreciate that you didn't include that in this fic. I realize that I am on ADULT-fanfiction.net but incest just creeps me out. All of that aside, I have to say that you are a very funny author. I honestly could not stop laughing throughout the entire fic, and that’s mainly why it doesn’t' bother me that the storyline is a bit cliché, because you've given it your own dose of originality. I’d also like to say that there were minimal spelling/grammatical errors which I appreciate a lot. As a result I’d like to salute you and your beta if you have one, on a job well done.
    I'm kind of curious though; does it ever come into play who the people are that Naruto's father killed? It doesn't matter, I'm just curious. Anyway, I hope you update soon. I'm dying for the next chapter!


    Dryad1789@hotmail.com

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  • From ANON - Havoc Tellenoi on August 16, 2006
    OMG! Is so cute and sad and wonderful....makes me laugh and cry. and i'd like to see more, so hurry and update! i'm liking the story! even if it took me a little to find it and start reading. it's really good! keep up the updating! ^____^
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  • From ANON - Sir Magus on July 29, 2006
    aww they're so cute together! just like in the anime naruto gets into more trouble than he can handle an all his friends come to help him out-itachi seems to be as much of an asshole as always(somethings never change huh?). i really enjoyed ur story and i cant wait to read the next chapter i hope u update soon-are u gonna go into wat happened to Sasuke's parents and why Itachi is such an asshole?
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  • From ANON - Ann on July 27, 2006
    Not to cliche at all I think, well at least you wrote it with a not to cliche atitude/air around it so it worked out great!

    please update soon, I love this fic, I printed it out and tool it to the Dominican with me last Winter ^^!
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  • From ANON - kuu-ish on July 26, 2006
    NAruto's coming around, eh?! Good! Those cheeky bastards would get pwned by Sasuke And Naruto and..The others. -cough cough-

    ANYWY!!

    Update soon, would ya! Yo're killing me!! lol ^_^
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  • From SubaruKayoda on July 25, 2006
    Hey,

    You're doing awesome. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Haru-chan on July 23, 2006
    .....Where's the hot sex? T_T
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  • From ANON - sadistickiss on July 14, 2006
    This is the coolest SasuNaru fic I've ever read ^^ Kyaa~~!!! Sasuke is so super, super cool - ah, and so are you ^^!! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Sakura-Laurel on July 13, 2006
    Gods, it's been so long since I've read your stuff keaira. Is there a site or something with some of your old works that were on ffnet? If there is, and you know of it, could you send me the site? Or possibly some of the stories if you still have them? My email address is sakura underscore laurel 6 6 6 at yahoo dot com. If it's not too much trouble of course! You wouldn't believe how many people miss you from ff! I can understand your reasons for leaving though! I've thought about it a lot myself! Well gotta go! Oh, and also, it would really help if you could send me an email when this is updated, please. If it's too much though, I understand. Thanks for listening to me rant! Love this story; it's just as good as the rest of them! Ja for now!
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  • From ANON - me,okay? on July 12, 2006
    This is so cool!

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  • From ANON - Wounded Kitsune on July 11, 2006
    This is by far the best naruto fanfiction out there!I loved every minute of it and i'm sure i will continue to.Please continue it soon!
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  • From narutowillwin on July 07, 2006
    ^_^YAY! THIS IS ONE KICK-ASS STORY MAN!! I highly reccommend that you update asap!!
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  • From ANON - Inus_Kagome_Forever on July 04, 2006
    ACK! You hooked me in the first chap damn it! And I've spent two LONG nights catching up. (Yes for some reason, no other time was I available to read your great fic, nope it had to be so late in the night that its already morning, lol) Though, I must tell you, Sasuke is OOC... then again, I probably would too if I was around Naruto. The shy girl people see would turn into a nose bleeding girl, trying to... erm.... not take advantage of a cute, adorable Naruto, no, just trying to show him how much I just really really love him! hehehe!

    Anywho, great great great! more more more! Are they going to do it before the end? Okay... -_-" I had to ask... yes... i'm perverted I know. I love lemons, especially m/m. ::blush:: but lets keep that a secret! No body heard us! I hope you update soon and I'd really like to see what this next... um... idea of yours is going to do their relationship. At first I thought your story was already complete, but I'm happy and sad its not. Mostly happy! I'd really rather more than less (chaps) and the sadist or w/e, "I'm lovin' it!" (just like Mc Donal's fries, mmmmm! Had some today.)

    So please, please please, again I ask, update soon! I will be awaiting the arival of your next chapter.


    So until then
    Inus_Kagome_Forever~~
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  • From ANON - adelmira on June 28, 2006
    this story is awesome its so real. i love your work. please please update soon. ^^
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