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Reviews for Beside You in Time

By : Desdemonal
  • From ANON - Boomanda on July 25, 2006
    This is about the best fic i have ever read... i absolutely love the writing and the way you make them so in character! you my friend are a true genious! I hope, no i beg that you write more of your story! you much hurry and write!
    (Ps: thank you for blessing us with this gift!!! XP XD)
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 23, 2006
    Awesome! *thumbs up*
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  • From ANON - Super-spy-guy on January 17, 2006
    oh please write more the story is great
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  • From ANON - Mally on January 13, 2006
    Mer...don't know if I reviewed before....But if I did oh well. It is so good! Lee and Gai are two of my fave characters...and gods above are they cute. I mean, in the Manga it's more of a son/father relationship....but the yaoi lover in me wants it to be more. ^^ Anyways, I have to go...but please post more! It's such a good fic! I love it!
    ~Mally~
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  • From ANON - Chibi-Neko on October 28, 2005
    Very good about leading us into the story, but where is the hugging? the kissing? the....yaoi!
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  • From ANON - Bakura on October 26, 2005
    it's...


    so...

    CUTE O_O

    update ;.;

    pleeeeeeeeease ;.;
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  • From ANON - snowfrostwinter21 on October 17, 2005
    I love this plz update, don't quit writting like so many others do on stories i like. The plot and the direction your taking it in keep it up.
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  • From ANON - LeeXNaru on October 03, 2005
    Konosakubunga daisukidattebayo!! I really like the way you keep with the original personality of the characters, and add some new depth to them as well. Also it's good to see someone writing stories which explore yaoi themes/pairings, but without being either plot-less porn stories, or overly cheesy love stories. So anyways...hopefully we get to see a part four soon?? But on that same note ignore us pesky and impatient readers and take as much as you fell necessary, after all it's worth waiting if the result is better quality literature.

    Ja Ne
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  • From ANON - DL on September 03, 2005
    I love you! Purely in an adorative sense. Gai and Lee are my favorite pairing and Lee is my favorite character. Too many times their characterization in fanfiction has been rushed, OOC, or just flat and 2-dimensional. Your feeding my addiction with this story and I hope you keep updating. Please keep writing!
    Sin.,
    DL
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  • From ANON - Lover of Green Beasts on August 15, 2005
    AH!! WAI!!!!! ::glomps you fericiously and purrs, cuddling against you:: You UPDATED!!! So happy! And Lee-sama, ::giggles:: he's so cute. I can imagine him laying on the counter going 'fooooooooood'.....Hey wait, I DO THAT TOO!!! ::tiwtches:: Wow, I seem to be odd, affectionate, and hyper all at the same time.....that could get scarier than it already is.

    So I'll just say, I love the way you've written the characters, I LOVE the drunken Lee-sama thing even more now because him without inhibitions is great!! And I LOVE THE PAIRINGSS!! KakaIru SasuNaru and GaiLee are some of my faves. (KakaGai and GaaLee are among the most faves of faves, but I'm starting to like GaiLee better >
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  • From ANON - serenia on August 14, 2005
    This is good! I like that you are actually exploring the complexeties of both characters.
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  • From ANON - Mysterious S on August 14, 2005
    I like the way you portray Gai and Lee as three dimensional characters that have their ups and downs in their lifes, just like everybody. One thing I was confused about. You say Gai's apartement is on the fourth floor but it has a grassy patio that they can spar on? Sorry if I'm misunderstanding something but that struck me as odd. Otherwise leep up the good work. Gai and Lee need more love. d^_^
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  • From ANON - Mitziginger on August 12, 2005
    This is a trly enjoyable fanfiction. It captures the happy with a touch of angst essence of Naruto quite well. Everybody was in character, and the dynamics between them were perfectly depicted. The relationship between Gai and Lee is one of the most blatant, yet least explored. Kudos to you for not only delving into this pairing, but for also doing it so wonderfully. You're writing style is very real, and forces the reader to look underneath what we would expect of Lee and Gai. I look forward to the next chapter of this. Please do continue.
    Mitziginger
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  • From ANON - Lover of The Green Beasts on August 06, 2005
    WAI!!!!! I can't believe someone else likes this pairing!! This is so awesome! I can't wait to read more!! You wrote this amazingly well so far, too! Woot, again, more please!
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  • From ANON - Wendytigges on August 05, 2005
    Great work so far! Perfect mix between humour, drama and romance; good writing-style!

    I can't wait for chapter 3... keep up the good work!
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