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By : lostinthought
  • From ANON - silverfox on July 26, 2005
    interesting fic you have here i like it so far so keep up the good work and update soon
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  • From ANON - moonprincess90 on July 26, 2005
    Woot! m-preg! can't wait. i love naruto with a big belly lol. he'll looks so cute. lmao
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  • From ANON - kieshar on July 26, 2005
    A good chapter. I definitely like how you are developing the characters. Nice and slow. Not too slow and not TOO fast. Thank you. Can't wait until the next chapter and MPREG is great. All the way baby!
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  • From ANON - yukiko on July 26, 2005
    it's starting kinda sad, damn noble, think they can do anything they want *pout*

    sasuke is cute, and the way he reacted isn't ooc I think, more in charactere of a true human. I can't wait to read more of this, good work you've done.
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  • From ANON - vampchic on July 26, 2005
    Well, I think that that is a very good reason for Naruto to hate nobles. Having them have their way with him for three years would certainly haunt the poor boy. And now Sasuke knows. What well Sasuke do exactly with this information?? And how will Naruto react when their relationship starts to get physical?? Being raped for three years has got to cause the boy to have some issues about sexual contact. The fic's pretty good so far, though a little more detail would still be nice. Anywho, update soon please.
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  • From ANON - bookworm51485 on July 26, 2005
    Wow, poor Naruto. I kinda figured it would just be a one time thing but for 3 years, that sucks. Good job again, only thing is the grammer needs a bit of work. I'm glad that you've continued the story, was happy when I saw the new chapter. Now I'm waiting for your next one. You said the mpreg is going to be later in the story, how much later were you planning on it being? Also you said the pairing is going to be NarutoSasuke, not SasukeNaruto, does that mean that Sasuke is going to be the one pregnant? You know I just realized I'm probably being too nosy and you don't want to give your story away so I will stop asking questions now and just end with a good job, maybe find a beta to help with grammatical problems and please continue

    PJ
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  • From Nonny on July 25, 2005
    lovely
    update soon
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  • From ANON - moonprincess90 on July 24, 2005
    oh, i like the beging of you fic. its real good. I can't wait for chapter two. ^_^
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  • From ANON - vampchic on July 24, 2005
    Sounds like an interesting start. Interested to know just what is going on with Naruto. And just how is it affecting him physically?? What are the changes that Sasuke and Sakura saw?? A little bit more description would of been nice. But so far, its pretty good. You have my attention. Update soon, kay?
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  • From ANON - bookworm51485 on July 24, 2005
    I like, I like a lot. I've been looking for more Naruto mpreg stories. They're not very common. I'm guessnig from the warning and Naruto's dream that he was raped, is he going to tell Sasuke about it in the next chapter? Also is he already pregnant (by the rape Im assuming happened) or is that going to come later? Is the story going to be SasuNaru or are you looking at other options? I'm sorry I'm being so nosy I'll stop now. Anyways I'm looking forward to reading more of your story and I hope you update soon. Thank you:)
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