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By : lostinthought
  • From ANON - blisblop on September 15, 2005
    Sasuke is being pretty cool, his concern ,its attractive...I hope they get left alone for awhile I wanna see if emergent Nar/kyu will molest/be molested by Sas,he deserves a treat no?Good yarn.
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  • From ANON - anon on September 12, 2005
    I love this story update soon please
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  • From ANON - blisblop on September 12, 2005
    Okay,not bad...gotta keep Sasuke frosty with others,he was very OC when in the Hokages office,remember,he has no reason to trust authority,then never did anything about his family's massacure (sp) nor did they help him get over it.The boys self reliace and reliance on just team mates (not Sakura ,unfortunatly Sasuke left before she took anything too seriously )but no big,as long as his soft is on Naruto...
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  • From ANON - nicole on September 11, 2005
    i have read this story befoer but i dont think i reviewd but if i did i'll tell you agian keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - vampchic on August 30, 2005
    Really good babe! There were a few grammer and spelling mistakes, but nothing major. So now everyone knows whats going on with Naruto. 'Bout the merging I mean. Wonder what his changes will be? How will it effect his appearance and abilities, besides the fact that he will be half demon? Obviously he'll gain major streangth, correct? And inhanced chakra? Cant wait to read about Naruto's birthday. Just how different it will be from his previous ones? Cant wait to read more, hope you update soon! The fics going great! XD Ja!
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  • From ANON - Erika on August 05, 2005
    SWEEt!!! GREAT chapter...I LOVE Iruka he's just so CUTE!!! oh man I'm ENJOYING a Naru/Sasu fanfic...now I know the world is going to end...LOL...oh my..>THANKS:D
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  • From ANON - vampchic on August 04, 2005
    I find myself getting more and more drawn into this story. Its really good stuff. I love how the two are slowly getting closer to each other. And I also love how much Sasuke is worrying over him. The two really are made for each other. Cant wait for the next update. Hope that it'll be soon. Really, this is a great story here.
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  • From ANON - bookworm51485 on August 04, 2005
    I definately like your story, really like the plot and I like mpreg stories. They keep saying that Naruto looks so feminine, does that mean that Naruto is going to become a female? I think the only problem I have with this chapter is that some things are awkwardly worded and I wish that a bit more had happened, but the second isn't really so much of a problem as the first. Of course there was the other problem I had earlier, I think Naruto was a little too quick to give up his secret. From what I've seen of rape victims, the either tend to be more than willing to talk because they want the rapists to pay or they tend to make it really hard for anybody trying to find out what happened. Naruto being quiet for three years while this happened and then quickly giving it up to Sasuke seemed a little unrealistic to me. But nevermind, I could be wrong. Anyways good job and please update soon:)
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  • From ANON - Erika on August 01, 2005
    that was AWESOME GREAT GREAT chapter...But YIKES Poor Naruto man oh man...can't wait to see his reaction to moving in w/Sasuke
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  • From ANON - moonprincess90 on July 30, 2005
    yeah anther chapter. I hope this will help him. he needs to know that poeple care. ^_^
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  • From ANON - vampchic on July 29, 2005
    Nice long chapter. Hope the other chaps will be just as long. Pretty good chap too. So now Naruto is to stay with Sasuke. How will Naruto take this news?? I get the feeling that he'll be relieved, at least once he gets passed being pissed at being off activing duty and all. In the summery, you said that Naruto is merging with the Kyuubi. Is the merging why Naruto is having all these nightmares and all?? Hope you update soon, cant wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Mizuka on July 29, 2005
    Oh please please continue this story, is so cool!! I love it!! It will have lemon?? I hope it will have!!! I love it!! But Sasuke-kun is a bit out of character.... Naruto is perfect!! I understand it, Sasuke is more difficult than Naruto :D

    My rate for you: +++++
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  • From ANON - Leasan on July 27, 2005
    Hey, nice fic!
    Though you made some typos such as "were" instead of "we're" or "there" instead of "their"/"they're", I guess.
    I don't really like POV's changing all the time but well... I guess I can cope with that. I'd prefer if the narrator told the larger part of the story.
    Oh, and isn't it a bit strange that Naruto told sasuke his terrible story so easily, all of the sudden he opened up and told him everything and in such a straight and dry way... God, rape is such traumatic experience...
    Well, I like the story anyway so keep writing!!
    I'm curious what's going to happen next and how the Sasu/Naru realationship will evolve!
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  • From ANON - Erika on July 26, 2005
    damn he was only NINE and it happened for 3 yrs...Poor NARUTO...Man I hope those ASSes SUFERED ALOT...Great chapter
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  • From ANON - Erika on July 26, 2005
    interesting Beginning...why is a good title cause it definately brings up that question ALOT
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