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Reviews for A Thousand Miles

By : Nielenon
  • From ANON - Shiro on September 25, 2006
    M/M in the het section...gtfo
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  • From ANON - kitsunekochan on September 05, 2005
    er..i don't know if someone has already corrcected but kage no yoru means shadows'night or night of shadows...if you want to say shadows of the night it's just "yoru no kage"...voila~
    keep writing that's good stuff!^^
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  • From ANON - rocielsama on September 05, 2005
    When I saw the title of this fic and then reading it I just couldnt get the song "Gonna Be" by The Proclaimers
    When I wake up, well I know I'm gonna be,
    I'm gonna be the man who wakes up next to you
    When I go out, yeah I know I'm gonna be
    I'm gonna be the man who goes along with you
    If I get drunk, well I know I'm gonna be
    I'm gonna be the man who gets drunk next to you
    And if I haver, hey I know I'm gonna be
    I'm gonna be the man who's havering to you

    But I would walk 500 miles
    And I would walk 500 more
    Just to be the man who walked a thousand miles
    To fall down at your door...and so on


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  • From ANON - Jena on August 04, 2005
    This is getting real good! It's cool that you've read Melek In Olum, I love that story too, but updates are sooo slow...hopefully you won't keep us waiting as long? Your writing's great and enjoyable to read, can't wait to see how your tale unfolds. Later! ^_^
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  • From ANON - SpasticShinigami on July 26, 2005
    Hey! I saw your review on my fic and decided to drop by! Anyway, this is very deep, I like it, and I want to see more of it! You've got talent now show me the money! *Wink*

    Huggles

    SpasticShinigami
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  • From ANON - Anon^^ on July 22, 2005
    I think more people read this then you know, just many don't review. Melek in Olum is a great story, and I know what idea you are going to borrow, but I want to see your spin on it. I like your setory, and you have a unique way of telling your story, especially the first chapter. I hope at some point you can go back to that style, because that is what brought me into your story in the first place. Well anyway, I'll be waiting for your next update. Ciao!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on July 22, 2005
    What purpose would be good enough?To kill for people who hate you?i recognised the idea,i hope you are gonna have better action in yours,the other had Naruto as a beyond perfect samari jesus christ in it.No sex at all,lots of promices but it was just a huge tease.This sure is a challenge you have set for yourself.good Luck and thanks.
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on July 18, 2005
    this is so sad! but your writing is very poetic and extremely beautiful! I can't wait for your next update!
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  • From ANON - Anon^^ on July 18, 2005
    Wow. I have to say I love these kind of stories, because it doesn't seem plausible that someone could grow up all alone, with people glaring and whispering behind someones back and not be affected ina bad way by it. I can't see a child growing up alone, with people hating him, and not becoming depressed. I think you have a great start going here, and I hope that you continue. The style in which you tell the story is a nice change from the norm, and I do greatly enjoy how you state his thoughts. Good grammar, nice word choice, and great descriptions. I hope you continue, and that get many great reviews, because I know i'm already a fan of this story. Ciao!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on July 18, 2005
    I think" soft" is a better word for what i mean than" gentle".Sorry.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on July 18, 2005
    The human condition is not something we can ever find boring I think.You have a grasp on one we all share(funny that) loneliness.The warmth of self desruction (is it that,or the joy of finally doing something that makes a difference?),you have presented these with a gentle yet compelling(sp) voice I feel.I want you to continue .And don't knock yourself,thats our job!(kidding,I think...)Whatever, Good Luck,be persistant,this is worth it.
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  • From ANON - poo_n_pee on July 17, 2005
    your writing is very good and smooth. i like the description, keep it up~ would love to see naru and sasu meeting once again.
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  • From ANON - just_me on July 17, 2005
    Ah, that was so sad. I really want to walk up to naru-kun and hug him... and kick Sasuke as soon as I can find him.
    I really like the story. Everything is fluid and easy to follow. The ending was so sad too... "Am I still yours?" *wipes away tear*
    I was ready to push the button for the next chapter...just to find there was only one... so... *fidgets* Whens the next chappie comin'?
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  • From ANON - ~**~Chealsea.R on July 17, 2005
    WOW..That was AWESOME,SMASHING....GREAT...
    Pleasse continue this fic......Its simply addicting.....Im rooting here for you so do
    please continue^ ^
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  • From ANON - Jena on July 17, 2005
    Wonderful start! Your writing draws one in smoothly and I was somewhat dissappointed when the chapter ended because I wanted to continue on right away. So don't stop there! Onwards to the next chappie!!!
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