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By : Potemkin
  • From ANON - Anon on November 30, 2007
    Hmmm... this is a tough one. I didn't like the beginning or the ending too much, but everything in between was really good. So... I dunno. 3 and 1/2 stars out of my five? o_o'
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  • From ANON - Arcander on February 10, 2006
    Very nicely done! I'll have to go read the others later... but for now, I'm going to go sleep (although I really should be in Japanese right now....)
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  • From ANON - Cj on September 19, 2005
    omgosh.. poor Naruto.. Sasuke just left him. thats so cruel.... it made me cry....
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  • From ANON - lo on September 11, 2005
    That was well done. First of all that was hot, and the psychological drama was great. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Mercedes on September 06, 2005
    Smut. Pure unadulterated PWP-ness. ^.^;;; Yet, despite the fact that it starts out startlingly abrupt and continues to keep you off-kilter with OOC-ness and the characters flips in attitude, there's something oddly captivating in the fic. *L* Your description of the sex is refreshingly blunt and straight forward, even if we are just thrown right into it.

    And, like Naruto, we're left wondering just what the hell Sasuke was up to. *blinks*

    This fic could almost do with a sequel to explain it, or even just Neji and Sasuke having their way with Naruto, who's all confused and wants to dom but is out numbered. *L*
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  • From ANON - R on August 18, 2005
    Hah. Sasuke, you whore. :D
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  • From AkumaKawa on August 16, 2005
    Is that all there is? No, another chapter?

    Oh well, I loved the little twiseted story, coolsa.
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  • From ANON - Balafeo on August 02, 2005
    Poor Naruto! All the way through, right up until the end I thought Naruto was being a bit... forceful...
    But Sasuke was so horrid! But he'll be back, (She tells her inner self, to try and calm the rage!)
    Damn, but I still can't hate him... he's just too cute!

    Balafeo
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  • From ANON - Iris on July 20, 2005
    aww the ending was so good for some reason XD sad but good. Very nice scene! Good job ^^
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on July 17, 2005
    Oohhh......an unexpected ending! ^___~ very well done -- keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - jaaf on July 16, 2005
    Wow, that was excellent! You must continue. Very good smut :D
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  • From ANON - vampchic on July 15, 2005
    Okay me not happy, I just wrote you a review and it sent itself before I could put my name in. >.< The review I wrote is the one with the email address vamp_blood1@yahoo.com. Not too happy about that at all. Great fic you have here. Waiting for more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 15, 2005
    Damn. The lemon was so good, but the ending...so sad. I hope that there is more to come, the ending there left me kind of...depressed. Really though, this is really good so far. I look forward to future chapters. Update soon kay?
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  • From ANON - Fan on July 15, 2005
    Ooooh. BURN. LOL. Please say this isn't a oneshot??? I mean, its fun enough to be one... but I want to see what happens next. :) Ja na!
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  • From ThePhraseThatPays on July 15, 2005
    WOW o_O...that's fricking sad. >_>;;..Sasuke's such a fucking tease and a bastard leaving Naruto like that @_@;;.
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