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Reviews for Break the Seal

By : AshtonRose
  • From ANON - meg on July 15, 2005
    awww! so sad! i have this doujinshi too and i really liked how you expanded the plot. please write more :)
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  • From ANON - snow887 on July 12, 2005
    O.O!! OMG THIS FIC WAS AMAZING!!! you need to update soon PLEASE!!! i loved it the lemon scene was hot. i remember seeing that doujinshi too, I hope this ends happily i a big fan of happy endings ^__^
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  • From ANON - Arashi Kibou Shirou on July 11, 2005
    OMG, I love it!

    I read the doujinshi long time ago lol but at that moment I was sad that didn't have a sequel ;______;

    now I'm so happy =3 nyan!!!!

    X3 I want another chappie~~!!

    X3 I want a jar of cookies~~!!

    just kidding... about the cookies >_>


    Sorry if my english sucks XD *proudly*... n_ñ i'll wait for the next update


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  • From ANON - telos on July 11, 2005
    I hate to be a nay sayer, the story is decent it just seems an awful lot like a doujinshi I've seen. I believe the doujinshi can be found at http://www.fighting-dreamers.org/ .
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  • From ANON - Bianca on July 11, 2005
    I love it! Very well written. Good character development. I definitely look forward to reading the rest of it. Awesome work!

    Bianca ;-P
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  • From ANON - gold-silk on July 11, 2005
    I read that doujinshi before! I loved it and I was actually thinking of writing a fanfic based on the doujinshi my self. It's nice to know some one beat me to it (I'm more of a reader than a writer.) I even recognized most of the changes you made to it (there wasn't any sex in the doujinshi... naughty naughty! :D)
    I'm in love with your story so far, and I can't wait to see what you yourself will write. It shall be very interesting!

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  • From ANON - jemu on July 10, 2005
    O incredible. I just read this doujinshi not too long ago and let me tell you, you did an excellent job. I loved the details and the characters. It's kool. Please continue, I would love to know what happens to these two !!
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  • From ANON - ayachan on July 10, 2005
    omg, noooooooo.. they have to fall in love!!!!!!!!!!! wow, great beginning! please update asap and keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Raiko on July 10, 2005
    WWWAAAAWWWWWSSSSOOOOMMMMEEEEE!!!!!!
    SERIOUSLY!!! WOW! *Okay enough with the yelling thing here..^^*
    Damn! That was really fantastic...*would you mind letting me recover from your fic a sec...all I seem to be able to say is: awsome, fantastic, incredible and awsome...well you get the picture..héhé*
    That was a cute and pretty original. Jeez, you're a great author!...Shish, I really loved your thing and sincerely, I rarely get 'that' overwhelmed by other stories, and I have to say that yours did the trick BIG TIME!!!
    I really don't know if I'll be able to wait for your next chap...I know I'm asking a lot..but PLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEEE HURRY UP!!!!HÉHÉ=^_^=
    Oh and one more thing...if anyone ever flames you for this fic (though I personnaly think it's just impossible)..let me know I'll hack their systems and tey'll get real flames alright!!!!Mouaouahahahahah..*okay a little carried away here...sorry stupid brain took over..*
    Well..keep on going...IT'S AWSOME!!!..*I'm sure I already said that somwhere..*=^.^=
    See ya
    Yurikai Kurosaki
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