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Reviews for Break the Seal

By : AshtonRose
  • From ANON - Cim on September 19, 2005
    A sequel would be awesome ^^ I would love if you'd write one
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  • From ANON - Turin on September 19, 2005
    Well... that was one fine fic, I HAD to review! The story was good, and the end was great! I like the idea of them becoming life-bonded as well as Soul mates. n_n Kakashi better be careful... BUt a sequel with that premise is a great one, what with Iruka, suddenly having premonitions, etc..
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  • From jdauss1 on September 18, 2005
    Please make a sequel!!! I really liked this fic and I hope you decide to write more. You left ways to do it - that's for sure. You can have Mizuki come back and cause more havoc and/or you can put them in a situation where Kakashi needs to tell Iruka about the seal, how he had to take it off, and the effects. I guess what I'm saying is... please write more!!!
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  • From Irukichan on September 14, 2005
    Iruka as a seme! I never thought about that, or read it, for that matter XD It's very interesting though, for sure, and sweet, too. This is a great conclusion to an excellent story, and I'm sad to see it end (although, I think there may be a sequel in demand from what I've read ^_~), but I've really enjoying the ride! Even if Mizuki dragged himself off somewhere, or someone else drug him off somewhere, It was awfully satisfying for him to get the smirk wiped off his snide face. I like the fact that Jiraiya popped in, too--Jiraiya and Tsunade both seemed a little surprised at Kakashi's lecherous acts with his sensei, but who could resist? It's a perfect angsty match made in heaven.

    All in all, this whole story has been fun, angsty, and steamy, which sets it up for one of my favorite all time KakaIru fanfictions. Hope to catch a sequel from you if you're not too busy and I'm very likely to be re-reading the first and last chapters a lot in the meantime. ^_~ *gives you dolphin and scarecrow cookies*
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  • From ANON - vivacious on September 14, 2005
    OMG! I have been waiting for someone to write a iruka-seme fic!! I was beginning to lose hope. THank you so much! I hope you continue this fic in a sequel. I'd like to see what happens when iruka finds out about the downside to the breaking the jitsu. plus he deserves to know that he was what kakashi went through for him and how much he is loved.
    '
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  • From ANON - Ivory_Stone on September 14, 2005
    Omigawd...That was the most awesome story I have ever read. And it kept me on the edge of my seat too...Seriously, I would check back every day just to see if you had updated. I BEG of you! Please let there be a sequal! KakaIru is my favorite pairing and I just love how you were able to write for them. And everything was perfect. I could picture everything in my mind as if I were watching the anime. Keep up the awesome work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 14, 2005
    'little' :P? Heh, cuteness.
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  • From ANON - Kakashi_Dono on September 14, 2005
    It was totally worth it. -two thumbs up.- It made me cry..yup. Old Yuminori cried.
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  • From ANON - Yurikai Kurosaki on September 13, 2005
    The final chapter!!!
    That was nice!! The whole fic was amazing no doubt about that!
    Well, whatever you do, don't stop writing! Even if it takes you 2 months to write one chap I don't care, but don't waste your talent...
    You're an awsome author!!
    I'm happy I could read great fics like yours...Looking forward to any other stories you might have in store...Naruto, Gungrave etc..
    God, I think there's not a single one I didn't like!
    Anyway...Keep on going!

    Yurikai Kurosaki^^
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  • From jdauss1 on August 25, 2005
    I'm glad you didn't abandon this fic! I've been waiting to see what would happen! I'm sorry I took so long to review - I'm in law school now and I can't read fics as often as I'd like. This chapter was great and I can't wait to see how it will end! Update as soon as you can - this is an awesome fic! And I'm glad Iruka and Mizuki will fight later in the series - that'll be so cool!
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  • From ANON - Polka dot on August 23, 2005
    I don't quite get how Kakashi got out of that, but that's okay, let's move forward to the Kaka Heals Iru part of the fic, yeah!
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  • From ANON - sunnysideup on August 23, 2005
    Ah! I remember reading that same doujinshi. You have made an excellent story out of it. The sex Kakashi and “Iruka” had, made me blush. I can hardly wait till the next chapter.
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  • From Irukichan on August 22, 2005
    First off, I must say... Horrible, horrible cliffhanger, shame on you. XD Now that I got that off my chest, I'd say that the chapter turned out very well. I like that a lot of the fight scene focused on Kakashi and Mizuki's attitudes and feelings towards eachother (especially Kakashi's scary anger and Mizuki's irritating ego) instead of just being a plain fighting chapter. I think it turned out much better than if the fighting would have been the main focus. The scene with Iruka and Naruto was very sweet and it made me laugh a little when Naruto was being comforted by poor Iruka despite the situations! ^_^

    I feel sort've sad that this is almost the end for this fanfiction. I love it so much that I want it to keep going XD I'm looking forward to the big climax and I can't wait to see how you write everything in. *Gives you a heaping hand full of chibi-Mizuki-with-kunai-through-head cookies* Oh, and can't wait to see Mizuki (hopefully) get his just deserts next chapter!
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  • From ANON - snow887 on August 21, 2005
    NOOOOOO!!!!!!! damn you!! DX the evil cliffhanger of doom haunts me. *sigh* please update soon or i will most likely go through withdrawl ^__^
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  • From ANON - Kakashi_Dono on August 20, 2005
    Damn you and your cliff hangers. >O So many questions roam my mind. You must update as soon as you can before I go crazy!
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