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Reviews for Object of Twisted Affection

By : ChidoriAmie
  • From ANON - Anime_Crusader on August 01, 2005
    Hey, this is pretty good. This...I like...
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  • From ANON - ed-chan on July 23, 2005
    I wonder ....Will you focus on a specific pairing ? I mean... Hinata x ?

    maybe I'm imagining things ^^ but Sasuke is observing Hinata a lot lately , sasuke/hinata is a interesting pairing ( personaly, the best )
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  • From NarakusKoi on July 22, 2005
    You have an excellent ability. You got me, hook, line, and sinker. I loved just about every aspect of your story. While I noticed the small discrepancies between your Konoha and Kishimoto's Konoha, it did not, like some stories, affect readability. It was very clear and concise. An exceptional read. I was pleasantly disturbed by Neji's actions toward Hinata. I'm a big fan of Uchihacest and usually go for the more incestual pairings, but you made it seem like the horror it really is. Great job in that ^_^ I'm feeling the ShinoxHinata brewing and am hoping for a happy outcome in that area. And I must say, I hope Neji gets a good kick in the teeth, so to speak. I'll be placing this story in my recommended reading and will be back for more. In short, I love your work!
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  • From ANON - coolandhot on July 22, 2005
    Great story, great plot, update soon, just wanna make sure though, will the main pairing be Neji/Hinata or you had another plan of pairings beside Hanab/Konohamaru? Neji here is really being a bastard, not that I blamed him, he suffered a lot. His and Hinata's relationship are really twisted, but hey, that can work actually.
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  • From ANON - xans on July 20, 2005
    This is nice. A peek into a rape victim's mind and it doesn't seem to be contrived. I do not have much experience with this but you seem to be getting the visceral reaction down well.

    I like where you are taking this. Neji's twisted desire for her, the lust and concern mixing, it's all well portrayed. I'm very excited to see how you do the upcoming sexual encounters with Neji. He lusts for her body and he wants to have her but he can't. I think I see how he will work around that. Bad Neji. But very sexy.

    It's a complex relationship you have spinning, and I hope it pans out ok in the end. I do wish they would be able to comfort each other somehow. He needs her forgiveness more than anything. And her acceptance of his twisted affection. But can Hinata be so giving.. I hope so.

    I like the Sasuke interaction as well. Everyone fawns over him but who does he think about? He is quiet and stand-offish, fronting the cool exterior, but what does he feel? Maybe the one person who does not run after him..

    He could add another dose of angst as well, or maybe help Hinata with her own. Or maybe Hinata can help him. I would love to see what you do with it.

    The Shino interaction works less for me. I don't really feel it. Maybe because I'm a boy. Thinking on it from another perspective shows a little more of the chemistry. But I'll have to see what you do with it.

    Anyway, please do continue. You write well and prolifically.
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  • From ANON - Redsliver on July 20, 2005
    Chapters 3 and 4 were excellent. One thing that was a little off was when Hinata had entered the dark she didn't immediately use her Byakugan to find her way, just seemed a little odd is all. Anyway update often, I love this fic.
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  • From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on July 20, 2005
    Yes! *thumbs up* No bulimic Hinata!! NOW GIVE US A CHAPTER!!
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  • From on July 14, 2005
    Hey! Thanks for your review! It was nice to have someone's opinion, but I was pleasantly surprised to see it was so positive! Sorry about the small inconsistancy with Shana's injuries. That didn't quite register with me when I was writing. lol. I got to read a bit of your story. (I'll get to read a lot more later. Gotta meet my friends on Guild Wars!). But for as far as I've read, you've got some great description skills. From character's action and reactions to Shino's house, its really great! I can't wait till later when I can read it all! I've leave a review once I get back on AFF. And thanks for the RR!
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  • From ANON - madlightning on July 14, 2005
    That's some serious angsty plot you got here, well older age makes the fic more makes sense so that's good. Can't wait for the next development. I do hope Neji/Hinata still ends up together (maybe in a better term?). Yeah call me sick but I like those Hyuugacest, well, update soon.
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  • From ANON - Saico on July 12, 2005
    I'm a bit worried. Are you gonna torture Hinata much further? It's just I can't enjoy stories that go beyond a certain point, no matter how well written, so I want to know if I should stop reading.

    I hope Neji is caught, at the very least, and his skills sealed.
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  • From ANON - Redsliver on July 12, 2005
    Damn good.

    I love Hinata fics and while all of your characters seem a bit over emotional they are teenaged homone bags so there's nothing I can argue. A couple of spelling, grammar errors, nothing a proofreader wouldn't fix though. I'll be recommending this for certain.
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  • From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on July 12, 2005
    NOO!! Don't make Hinata belimec!! UPDATE SOON!!
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  • From ANON - vegetakaiba on July 11, 2005
    Wow, this story was well done. Written in the style of the manga, yet revealed only enough to keep you interested. Plus making Neji a typical jealous jerk added emotion to the story. Excellent job with this, keep it up.
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  • From ANON - lainofthewired on July 11, 2005
    Great story. Kinda weird that they're still going to the academy, even though it seems that canon events have taken place (like the Chuunin exam). They would have graduated already and not be going school. Just wondering if it was intentional or not. But a very interesting story, well done :)
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  • From ANON - Pastel on July 11, 2005
    It's a very interesting story. For some reason, I feel like Sasuke has a thing for Hinata. I sure hope he does. I hope that he finds out what Neji did to Hinata and beat him up (even though he is my favorite character). Update please.
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