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By : SakuraHikari
  • From ANON - Sherab on July 07, 2005
    lol....that was great please write more I would love to see what happens ;)
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  • From ANON - Yugiko on July 07, 2005
    NUUUUUUUUU!!

    Dun change Sasuke-teme!!

    I like his personality like this!!

    VERY bold~~

    ^^

    *squeals*

    And Naru-chan with his cuteness!!

    >v
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  • From ANON - Raphael Argai Thanatos on July 07, 2005
    YAAAAAAAAY!!!! u updated! me is so very HAPPY!!!!! ^^ kyuu! keep this going, onegai shimasuuuuuuu!!!!
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  • From ANON - Trek on July 07, 2005
    I think it's cool. I just don't like very much when a story is a charcter's pov one, especially if it change. But exept that, it's cool. And no, Naruto and Sasuke are not ooc, exept maybe Naruto doesn't slap but punch, it's all. Good luck for the rest!
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  • From ANON - kai on July 07, 2005
    hehehehe, funny ending!!! anyways, new reader!! i totally love it already!! soo, naruto officially belongs to sasuke now, hmmmm....oh all the fun he'll have, let's make it consentual with bondage!! XDDD update soon!!
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  • From ANON - - on July 07, 2005
    no no. dont change anything (other than spellings!) lol :) i dunno why, this fic isn't like other fics, but for some reason, i want you to keep continuing. i can't explain it! so keep writing. something about it attracts me ^^
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  • From ANON - ghost on July 07, 2005
    NOES!!! YOU STOPPED! T_T well i'll say i'm very pleased with the chapters so far. I like how you brought Naruto into this. ^_^ keep it up. *waits for the next chapter*
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 06, 2005
    hee! I have a weakness for these types of stories! (Just don't make Naruto all feminine a d weak and weepy, please. ^^;;) Great fic so far!
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  • From ANON - minjin00 on July 06, 2005
    lmao..thats a pretty good chapter right there..cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - nacht kind on July 06, 2005
    Love it, but you may want to consider a beta, you sometimes switch tenses, they could also check punctuation and just help polish it once the gem's been cut. I wouldn't be unwilling if you're interested. I really am enjoying it though; I find the characterization very accurate. Sasuke's actions hold true to his natural cold and aloof personality while maintaining his determined intensity, not so easy to do. However, his various actions toward Naruto convey his feelings toward our foxy blonde in a very realistic manner, because I believe Sasuke would, most likely, be resevered amongst others, especially outsiders (even if he did once work with them) and therefore be more likely to express more intimate affections when in private. Even the kiss makes sense to me, it was most likely derived from two major things, 1) an urge to portray some form of distinctive affection and 2) the desire to convey his dominance and possession. (which is not at all bad, I like it, and had to think he would be dominant and possessive)

    Wicked cool, can’t wait to see how it progresses.
    ~Nacht
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  • From ANON - Sekkei on July 06, 2005
    Update soon please!

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  • From ANON - ku on July 06, 2005
    lol, I like it so far ^^

    More chapters!
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  • From ANON - hinshihoushi on July 06, 2005
    I really like the idea and look forward to more. I do highly suggest the use of a beta to at least correct the spelling, grammer and just plain wrong use of words, if nothing else.
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  • From ANON - dagget on July 06, 2005
    i think you've got the characters pretty well nailed down, but you could REALLY use some help with the grammar. keep going though. you've caught my interest.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on July 06, 2005
    Sasuke after Naruto's ass this bad?Ok I will try.Thank you.
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