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Reviews for Forced Fate

By : insomniac247
  • From ANON - Hinata101 on July 31, 2005
    Though Im not much of a Sakura fan, but the way u wrote this and still try to keep in character is pretty awesome.

    Please continue on with this story. ^^
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  • From ANON - Paradise__Kiss on July 31, 2005
    I luv this pairing and I luv ur fic. Keep up the good work. Okay?
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  • From ANON - KISSINGKATE on July 31, 2005
    Hey this is an interesting fic.

    Hope u continue with this. I luv it.
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  • From ANON - PRoyalAngel on July 31, 2005
    Yay u updated.
    Ur writing makes me cry.0__0
    Poor Sakura.WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

    I luv it. Please continue and don't give up on this fic. I'll give u a cookie if u don't.

    Here...*tosses u a virtual cookie*.............see.MWHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHA.

    o__o

    ^__^

    PEACHES AND CREAM! PEACHES AND CREAM! PEACHES AND CREAM! PEACHES AND CREAM! PEACHES AND CREAM! PEACHES AND CREAM! PEACHES AND CREAM! PEACHES AND CREAM! PEACHES AND CREAM!

    KEEP ON GOING! KEEP ON GOING! KEEP ON GOING! KEEP ON GOING! KEEP ON GOING! KEEP ON GOING! KEEP ON GOING! KEEP ON GOING!
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  • From ANON - DeadUchiha on July 31, 2005
    Heh! That was a nice little battle you had there! Love the way you unabashedly destroyed a very popular character so early in the story! I'm talking abour Kisame btw...hee hee...Death and destruction. Always fun! About the Hokage thing, i can't really remember too clearly what i was talking about, but i think i might have just misread something, maybe i thought i saw Hokage used as a plural or something. Ah well...on to better things. This chapter was good! I liked the new take on the Infamous "Sasuke leaves the village" scene. Very true to what a normal boy might be feeling under those circumstances. Bravo! Things are looking like they might be getting pretty interesting very soon. The mention of Itachi and Naruto peaks my interest. Was that meant to imply that the two are off somewhere fighting at that point? That would be nice. I just love drama.
    OH! was that the two powers he sensed? HEE HEE! I CAN ADD! maybe... In any case, I'll be waiting to find out!
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  • From ANON - Raina on July 31, 2005
    Now THIS is getting interesting! New words of praise will need to be invented to describe the originality of this engrossing piece of work. I said it once and I'll say it again, I love your characterization of Sasuke so much. As a verteran reader of SasuSaku too often people have overplayed Sasuke's angst to the point of ridiculousness. No human being is that emotionally cut off or not have a capacity to change in some manner. Most fics have him all consumed on his quest for revenge, which is probably about half true. But man the guy's got to think of other things once in a while....his thinking about a girl would be for him a pleasent reprieve from a life on the run. Your theories into what Sasuke might have been feeling and thinking during his goodbye with Sakura (that scene was hard to watch simply on grounds that Sakura's voice actress was such a damn good crier!) were close to what I was thinking of what he was thinking. Gah, that's a tongue twister. I always liked to think his saying "You really ARE annoying" was his way of showing affection, not that poor Sakura could understand. Overall I have to say this is the most realistic in the vein of the canon, more believeable than a lot of the other scenerios I've read. Happy writing.
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  • From ANON - Cutio on July 30, 2005
    I love, absoluetly love your story. I'm so glad you updated. You've just made me the happiest girl in the world, lol. I've been hooked on this sotry since you first posted it up. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Raina on July 23, 2005
    Whoa, whoa, you have got to keep continuing this. You've captured the essence of Sasuke... this sounds exactly the way I would imagine him thinking. Like the last bit. :)
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  • From ANON - The Gandhara on July 11, 2005
    Excellent. I love how wonderfully you depict everything.
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  • From ANON - DeadUchiha on July 11, 2005
    Well, that was another nice chappy! Liked it a lot! The beginning was a bit slow, but the pace picked up quite nicely. (It wouldn't be Sasuke-kun if he was not angsting, yah?) It was nice to see a bit of action at the end. I do so love a good fight scene. Heh. The battle was nicely done too!
    I did notice a couple of minor spelling errors, one at the begining, i think, and Sharingan was spelled wrong once somewhere towards the end...
    Also, I could be wrong, (((actually, has been known for it on more than one occasion...*snicker*))) but I'm pretty sure that the village leaders are simply refered to as 'Kage'. Hokage/Fire Country, Kazekage/Wind, Mizukage/Water, Raikage(i think)/Lightning, Tsuchikage/Earth, and Otokage/Sound. Blah! And now i'm babbling...*sigh* Sorry...Don't mind me...I'm sleepy...and i have a tendancy to go off on tangents sometimes for no apparent reason...there i go again! LOL
    Can't wait to see what will become of the fight between Sasuke and Kisame!! And i wonder what he was doing attacking Sakura in the first place! Gah! What will happen between Sasu and Saku?!? And ...for real...i just can't wait to see Naruto...I just love him...heh...yeah, yeah, I know...the story aint about him...sigh...But you do have to mention him at some point, right? Hee hee...*is curious to know HIS role*...and can Sasuke summon snakes yet? *Quiver* Sasuke and snakes...Mmmmmm....heh.
    Anyhows, can't wait to see the next update! And thanks for letting me know about this one! Yay!
    *snuggles*
    d(^-^)b
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  • From ANON - PRoyalAngel on July 11, 2005
    Take ur time on this. Sorry to rush u, but ur fic is soooooo good. hehehehe. ^__^

    Have u considered putting ur fic in fanfiction.net?

    OOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!. SUSPENCE.MWHAHHAHHA. AND A CLIFFY TOO. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHH! I HATE CLIFFY. UR EVIL.

    .....chirp....chirp....heheh....JUST KIDDING!

    MWHAHAHAHAHA...............fruits......................MWHWHHAHAHAH!...............

    (PRoyalAngel running around acting crazy which got her enlisted in the asylum.)
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  • From ANON - PRoyalAngel on July 05, 2005
    Update please. How old r they in ur fic?
    yeah another sakuXsasu fic. Luv the storyline. ^__^
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  • From Kusachu on July 04, 2005
    Well i'm a little pissed that i read this. Heh! Not at you, at myself for not waiting until there was more of it. This is really good. Your writing style excellent. You've done a great job with Sasuke's emotional state and how it affects his decisions. I'm very pleased. Not that my opinoin is worth more than the time it takes to read it...heh, but seriousely, this is a great start. *clapping for you!* I am very intrigued. I love the way you describe his feelings for his teammates and contrast it with the overpowering hatered for his brother. It's heart-wrenching. I think it fits with his character and the canon perfectly. And thank you! It's het! There doesn't seem to be enough of those around here. I hope that this story continues on in this fashion, and I'm looking forward to seeing where you are going with it. If it wouldn't trouble you too much, i would be happy if you would email me when there are new updates. Of course, i don't expect it, but it would be nice. Thank you for providing a quality piece of entertainment, I can't wait to see more from you!
    d(^-^)b *two thumbs up*
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