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By : insomniac247

From ANON - DeadUchiha on October 08, 2005
BWAH! I thought you had updated...*makes sad face* :( well, consider this a poke *poke*poke* ah but still...sigh...i guess I'm not one to poke...blah...anyways, looking forward to more! (PS: sorry about my last review...i may have gotten a bit grumpy, but i really do think this is a very good story...so don't let my ranting and babbling annoy you...i have a problem with such things...ie...i tend to do it a lot...*blush*) BRING ON THE ANGST! XD
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From ANON - DeadUchiha on September 27, 2005
I'm very angry with Sakura... RAWR!!! *Godzilla stomps Sakura* Ah but i know that this story is Sasu/Saku....It's just...so hard...not to...release...the hate! That awful bitch! Using my adorable Naru-kun like he is some kind of...RAWR! LOL sorry...Oh man i can wait to see how all this going to turn out...*quiver*...angst and pain! Angst and pain! Revenge! Revenge i say! Mwahahahahahahhaha! Blood and gore and death! Bring it! Nyaaaaaaaaa!

I'm really not a Sakura basher...I just tend to not like her in fanon...Your portrayal of her is very nice actually, which is why i hate her...lol...keep it coming!
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From ANON - Saku-chan on September 19, 2005
I'm SOOOOOO Inlove with this fic! I love the way you can spend an entire chapter explaining a character's emotion and the way you explained Sasuke's I especially loved [like the night he left and everything]. It was so in depth and personal. I really hope you update soon... I want to see more Sasuke too!!!! This fic is amazing to me so I thank you for writing it! ^_^

Awesome and keep up the good work. *peace fingers*
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From ANON - DeadUchiha on September 18, 2005
Nya! I just got done with chappy 5...It's getting pretty interesting now! *grin* I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your big update! Alas...time is of the essence and i must do study type things now...but i will be back to check out the rest as i have time...*wink* Right now: I'm wondering if you plan on incorporating the effects of Orochimaru's cursed seal (Level 2 O.o) on Sasuke's psyche...after all, he WAS supposed to "lose himself" to Orochimaru's control after he ate...heh...the red pill (or whatever...Matrix moment...sorry...) That would be a nice wrench to throw in the design...So far, it seems that Sasuke has a lot of free will, but i wonder how much he can resist "Orochimaru's desires" if it came down to a real battle between himself and his ex-teammates...gah! Babbling now....I'm going to study...Laters! Keep up the good work! *hurries to study*
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From ANON - Raina on September 16, 2005
Whoa... that was intense. Of all of the phychological explorations of Naruto I've read, this one is by far the most well-written, in depth and original.... and not at all hinting of yaoi in the least! This made me smile, it really did. This is the way I think Naruto thinks of Sasuke; the whole love-hate thing they share is so tangible. You portrayed Naruto's struggle with understanding, examining, feeling and trying to look at things both through the lens of logic and the color of emotion was amazing. You made me feel his desperation, his desire to GET SASUKE. How Naruto's character changed is realistic and dramatic.

Nice little shocker there on Naruto and Sakura dating (I felt sad for Naruto esp. when he realizes he still can't hold a candle to Sasuke even three years later). Sakura's lust filled dream is a delight *turns red*... Sasuke is probably having the same kinds of dreams, LOL. I wonder if either will ever come to know that their love is and has always been mutual? I guess that's why I want Sasuke and Sakura together so badly. I've always found unrequited or next to impossible love to be one of the most powerful themes of storytelling. I remember a line from a favorite show of mine: "Are you kidding? You're the love of my life. Everyone else is always going to be second best."

These three chapters were a nice treat. And thanks for emailing me to let me know about it! God, I can't even update my own Naruto fic that fast (that's because I'm anal retentative about keeping everyone in character). Looking forward to the rest of this as usual.

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From ZiriOkamiotoko on August 29, 2005
Looks good, there are a few places where the spelling slipped a bit, but it's okay. Also, chapter four seems to be written a bit confusingly. That might just have been me, though.
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From ANON - Sasuke_Rose on August 27, 2005
Lol. You added humor in ur story to eased the mood. Awesome. I love the scene where Sakura gets a show of Naruto's behind.
Very amusing. Continue soon
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From ANON - PRoyalAngel on August 27, 2005
Omg! That is really funny. No fair I wanna see Naruto's backside too! >.
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From ANON - DeadUchiha on August 24, 2005
AH! Nice chapter! Poor Naruto! All tortured and such. At least it's in a way that's suited to his character though. His soft spot for Sasuke is obvious in canon, and Itachi has used Sasuke's image to torture him before. (Ita! YAY!) Well, I can't wait to see how this is going to come into play later in the story, and I really can't wait to see team seven back together again! NYA! Thanks again for letting me know about the updat! Keep the chapters coming (but not at the expence of quality though). *awaits new chapters* ~Dead
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From ANON - Raina on August 24, 2005
I'm assuming Sakura was healed before Naruto woke up, which would explain her being up and about. That's the only way it would make sense. Liked the "bare bottom" scene - the humor was very in sync with Naruto. As for Naruto's torture scene.... hmm, could it be a delayed type of torment Itachi had inflicted on him? Like if he realized he couldn't torture Naruto right then and there, maybe he's developed his Sharingan to trigger it on an off moment, Sasuke's name being the trigger. But he did torture him beforehand but as you can see, it didn't break him. Maybe he planned two sessions to do the trick. Blech, all this speculation makes my head hurt. I'm probably wrong. Hope Naruto wakes up....or not, making Sakura the hero of the story, lol. That'd be a nice switch... her having to save him for a change. Interesting that she has not mentioned her encounter with Sasuke. Does she want to keep it to herself? Honestly nothing would change if she mentioned it since it's too late to know where he is. It would be perfectly like Sakura to not say anything honestly.... as the anime has shown, her heart's loyalty is to Sasuke. Up until it was necessary for Naruto to know, she kept her mouth shut about the Cursed Seal. I know many fans hate her for mooning over the dumb bastard and being "useless" I don't see her that way. She reminds of Azmaria from Chrono Crusade.... seemingly useless until you realize what her true purpose was in the end: to carry the torch for her comrades. Because she was with them and shared such a profound friendship she became stronger for it; that these people were important enough to change one person's life. Sorry, went off on a tangent there. Oh and speaking of symbolism according to a Japanese story about the slug, the frog and the snake, the snake is stronger than the frog, the slug is stronger than the snake and the frog is stronger than the slug. This parallel fits perfectly. When you think about it, Sakura is mentally a lot stronger than Sasuke. She's got that steel clad interior not even Orochimaru could manipulate.

Anyway.... been waiting for this chapter forever. Your story is addictive as hell and still possessing of a different flavor than the other Naruto fics. Or maybe it's because I've read so much Naruto porn that my brain overloaded! LOL. Gah, I've blathered too much. Looking forward to the next installment as usual.

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From ANON - Hinata101 on August 24, 2005
This is starting to get interesting. Good Job! Can't wait for the next chap.

It's not that I don't hate Sakura. Well in the beggining of the Volume 1 of Naruto, She was so mean to naruto saying that he didn't have parents and all that. Makes me mad, but as the story progress her character changed and mature kind of. She's okay I guess. I luv Hinata more cause she have a huge crush on Naruto, but Naruto have a crush on Sakura, which she have a crush on Sasuke. NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!

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From ANON - Dark Phoenix on August 05, 2005
Awesome fic! Would love to see what gonna happen next, especially with that last sentence hanging in the air like that.
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From ANON - blisblop on August 01, 2005
We see eye to eye on Sasuke's treatment and motivation.Cool.I am glad he gets something from Orochimaru,it makes sence doesn't it that they would have similar capacities.I am really getting into this fic.No matter what however I believe Sakura is just not emotionally solid enough foe Sasuke.She was/is a bully,cruel to those she considers beneth her,even Sasuke doesn't do that.She just seems shallow and it takes so long for her to wake up to facts but then she doesn't use them.I hate that this is the way she was written but its true. She is obbsessiveyet does nothing with it which is paculiar because she has examples, good examples in Naruto and sasuke when it comes to getting strong for your goalShe uses a weaklings moves emotional abuse,peer presure,god she can't even be trusted,she turned on Ino after Ino helped her and over some guy?She is trash for that at the very least.She is in the story however and I see you have to use her so this is my take on her not a citicism on your fic ,eh?So I am caught up in your fic,what about Naruto and Naruto?Itachi has Naruto right?!
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From ANON - Sasuke_Rose on July 31, 2005
EHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I like how this is going.

I'll wait for the next chap if u don't mind.
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From ANON - Itachi\'s_Whore on July 31, 2005
I love this. Don't stop now!
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