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Reviews for Forced Fate

By : insomniac247

From ANON - Sarri-chan on December 10, 2005
You HAVE TO CONTINUE!! I mean, Sasuke still has to claim Sakura as his in one hot, passion filled night! I GOTTA find out!! Will Sasuke make Sakura his?? I hope he does...
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From ANON - Dark Phoenix on December 10, 2005
Oh, and the Tayuya thing? I'll pass. Seriously, I can't stand the thought of Sasuke and Sakura anyone else but each other. *waves SASUSAKU4EVA banner madly* And with Tayuya, it's too easy to turn it into a Mary Sue.
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From ANON - Dark Phoenix on December 10, 2005
Ahh~~!! Cliffhanger!!! How could you stop there!! *cries* But phew... Good thing Sakura didn't let Naruto go all the way, huh? ^^; Thanks for updating! You're a dear! *HUGS* Now GIMME MORE! XD
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From ANON - no name for now on November 29, 2005
Oh my god, you're making me like Sasuke/Sakura! I have nothing against Sakura (actually I do but I still like her). And I do believe that her and Sasuke would work yet I can't read fanfictions about them. But your story is amazingly (?? is that how you spell this? I'm french) well writen and the first chapter just sucked me in. You wrote Sasuke's pain and anger in a way that I've never seen in stories before and then I cried. Even I couldn't describe it so well. And you manage to show why I adore Sasuke even thought people think that he is a spoiled arrogant power driven brat. That guy got seriously messed up and I understand why he did the things he did. Go Sasuke! Kill (sexy) Itachi!!

And I'm upset that naruto's jealousy has reached that level. I don't like that, the hate must never surpass the love or my little yaoi heart will break (you so should write more yaoi, I really appreciated that Orochimaru fic.

Loving the Tayuya/Sasuke thing too. Never saw that before (but I wanted too). I hope for more of that later, it's hot yo. Ohh a Sakura vs tayuya catfight. That would so rock. Shit, I think I really like Sasuke/Sakura. Shit, I like 2 het couples.

And sorry if this was long, I have to review for 9 chapters you know. Anyway, you rule, you rule, you rule (yes, i had to say it 3 times. The story really made me happy. And hyper) and the story kicks-ass. That's it.

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From ANON - KataiMiko on November 19, 2005
/i just wanted to let you know that you are by far one of my favorite amature authors. "Forced Fate" is everything that I have ever wanted in a fan fic and more. Your writing style is amazing and the story progression is superb. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. ^_^

Keep up the amazing work.
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From ANON - krickets on November 14, 2005
wow you know my research is starting to show that sasuke
might be closer to ten or eleven when he leaves
think about it....naruto didnt graduate from the school
the first two times he tried. but he did pass the third time when he was 12
but sasuke and sakura passed their first try.
which would make both of them a year or so younger then naruto
they dont emphasize it but there it is.

i dont know i could be wrong but im not so sure anymore
he ACTS like he might be 12 or older its kinda hard to come to
terms that he could be that young

anyways GREAT fic! i love it
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From ANON - Saku-chan on November 12, 2005
OMFG!!!!! Jeez~! This fic just keeps getting better and better! I'm so anxious to read the next chapter! You're like... the number one ninja of cliffhangers! I'M DYING!!!! But GYAH! Sasuke-kun is alive!!!!!!

I'm glad you like my reviews. lol. You should know I don't reply to just every fanfic I read! But yours, oh man... I check quite often to see when it's updated and what not. I reallylike it. And still I am SO in love with the way you write, and how descriptive you are, especially with the characters emotions. You left me hanging on the edge!!!! I want more! SOON!!!!! PLEASE I BEG OFF YOU!!!!

but grrr... as a writer I know it sucks to be pressured so I will wait patiently....

*pouts*
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From ANON - dabid on November 11, 2005
i don't mean to be a suck up but... this story just keeps getting better and better! i actually read the one-shot awhile ago but didn't even know that you were the same author. i love the way you made these two (stories) connect. a perfect blend. and the way you ended it... let's just say i can't wait until the next chapter come ups. will there be more tayuya? having sakura open up to naruto just to make sure he didn't notice sasuke... brillant! oh, i don't know if i metioned this before but excellent work on describing sasuke (1.his feeling 2.his motives for what he did and is doing) everyone is always bashing him because of his personality and and leaving konoha but they don't seem to want to understand his predicament. all they say is "stop being so sulky" and "get over the revenge thing" but come on... his entire clan was killed by his only brother (who he looked up to). after going through that, anyone would be like him. i think chaper one shows him how he truly is. it's the best sasuke (description?) ever.
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From ANON - Raina on November 10, 2005
I already reviewed the fic on the other site but heck I'll do it again just cause. Three times from scratch do you say? Man, that's more starting over than I've ever remembered having to do! Very sensual this whole story it is (no I swear I'm not trying to be Yoda here). While I can't wait for the fireworks to ignite and mix up a whole mess of crap like an atom being split, I can't help but wonder what Sasuke thought waking up to someone yelling "Stop!" In reality a person who wakes up in an unfamiliar place, regardless of what they hear may be going on outside the door, wouldn't barge out until he got his bearings. I'm guessing the thunk is him falling out of bed? LOL. That would be funny: Sasuke coming to, wondering where he is, hearing stuff he knows he shouldn't be hearing going on outside of the room before suddenly someone screams "Stop!" Either that or he just turned over in his sleep one time too many!
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From ANON - BballAnimeLover89 on November 10, 2005
Oh please Sasuke, just stay in Konoha!!! UPDATE SOON!!!
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From ANON - Saku-chan on October 19, 2005
O.o

I'm so inlove with you're story. So descriptive, so in depth. I hang on every word, and the way you write is amazing. A Sasuke chapter? THANK YOU I LOVE HIM SO MUCH!!!! Wait... did you kill him...? NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! Sakura will save him right..????

*cries*

Keep up the good work. I'll keep reading even without Sasuke. It's just that good!
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From ANON - dabid on October 17, 2005
this story is great!! i've read all of it but for some reason my computer wouldn't let me review. please update... it doesn't really matter when because a story this good, i can wait for. just make sure you don't leave this story unfinished. too many good authors do that. just wondering... why did you pick tayuya to be the person to live, was it because she looked like the only that might have survived? it's not that i'm mad about the decision, i was just wondering. and just before, i leave... is there going to mentions of a sasu/tayu, like the naru/saku in this?
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From ANON - Dark Phoenix on October 17, 2005
YAY! Sasuke and Sakura together again! PLEASE let Sakura find Sasuke before anyone else... ;_;
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From ANON - Raina on October 16, 2005
Oh wow! You're so evil, leaving a cliffhanger. Honestly though you've gotta do stuff like that to keep the readers coming back for more. This had a little mental picture of me falling to my knees yelling a prolonged "Nooooo!" to the sky. The only thing is...maybe I'm just confused so please correct me. Is this banging on Sakura's door the same time she woke from her dream, decided she had to go see Naruto NOW? Because if so...damn she is going to come home and wind up hating herself forever if she finds a half-dead Sasuke sitting outside her door, maybe with a little sign reading: "I WAS HERE WHERE WERE YOU?" hanging around his neck.

Honestly I can see this scenerio happening, wherein in an act of desperation and out of options, I think Sasuke might actually seek out Sakura for help. Unless he does a three hundred and sixty degree personality and character change when he returns back on the scene, I can see him doing this. And sadly I can see him doing this even if he DID change like that.

Interesting involvement of the Sand siblings. I was wondering where Gaara was while all this was going on.

Big risk returning to Konoha like that though. I feel really bad for the poor kid. Hope Sakura comes back in time!
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From ANON - blisblop on October 13, 2005
Bloody fantastic.Strong well thought out plot,love imagry of Sasuke.So easy to flow into this reality.Boom fight with Kisame and a truly tight grip on Itachi's reactions(as far as we know him).Poor Naruto but he knows and the knowledge doesn't seem to make a difference,he still lacks some insight.Your death threats scare me.Blather rave,you get the point I approve.
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