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Reviews for Forced Fate

By : insomniac247
  • From EnchantedFaery on September 05, 2007
    You are a good writer, but there were parts in the story that kind of made me lose interest...I can tell you right now that I got bored on chapter 7, angst is good, but too much of it makes it kind of tedious,unless of course the reader is an angsty person...heh heh now I'm not saying that this story sucks, far from it in fact I like it, I like where's its going and I can't wait to see how it ends...as far as grammar and spelling go, I don't think I saw any errors...so anyway I'm about to read chapter 8 can't wait to see what's next!

    EF
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  • From ANON - ~neL on October 25, 2006
    please don't abandon this! it's too damn good to let it go to waste! please do continue! i'm keepin' my fingers crossed..!
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  • From ANON - Dionysos on October 14, 2006
    finally they get it on! i love this fic!!!
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  • From ANON - ~neL on September 15, 2006
    oh sh--! I LOVE IT! I love this two! please let it end up as SasuSaku, they are obviously made for each other!

    And for the other two, Naruto and Tayuya... gosh I feel sad for Naruto., in my point it wasn't Sakura's or Naruto's fault that leads to things the way they are. Things just happened.. And for Tayuya... grrrr... hate the bitch now that she's Sasuke's fuck buddy. errr.. I just wanna strangle her!

    Enyweiz, please do continue! and please let it end as a SasuSaku,. if not ...**teary eyed**... please post a warning before I start obsessing about them!!
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  • From ANON - Uchiha-san (NLI) on September 11, 2006
    I'm sorry to say but I didn't love it. Because there just aren't words strong enough to explain the awesomeness of this chapter and I'm so thoroughly glad you took your time and put out this amazing chapter. And now I feel like shit because I owe a chapter too... I think reading your work helped. You still rock hard, I mean oh so hard and you keep everyone in character so well. This was awesome. Keep it up. Maybe we'll squeeze another chapter out of you before next year. lol. I kid. But for real, it's been a minute since I posted too.

    ANd yeah you rock, this was awesome. I'm so excited. Sakura's a complete whore for Sasuke. He's a complete whore for her too. XD
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  • From ANON - Zelha on September 03, 2006
    Ok, you NEED to update, seriously, because those stories of yours are TEH GOOD!
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  • From ANON - Tomi on August 06, 2006
    i'm really loving your story!
    i admitt, at first, it was a bit .."slow"
    but it go much better after the first few chapters!

    since this is a sakura/sasuke pairing, i was hoping you could include a little more of them :)

    i am a little bitter about tayuya being sasuke's first xD

    oh well~
    continue to update!
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  • From ANON - Talho on June 18, 2006
    Very well written Fic, great job =) Can't wait for the update!
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  • From ANON - Jenna on June 18, 2006
    I love this fic!
    Please update and soon! ^_^
    -Jenna-
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  • From LadyNightshade on June 08, 2006
    Freaking awesome, wonderful job, can't wait to see some more.

    I love the long narrative aspects of it.
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  • From ANON - Chelsey on May 23, 2006
    OO I've been reading this since you started it. I've just been lazy about reviewing, but I've fixed that now and I'm so caught up! Update as soon as you can! I want to know what happens when Sakura wakes up! and seriously there should be a lemon soon enough with the suspense and angst. I'm so deparate for the next installment. Update soon and awesome writing!

    -Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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  • From ANON - TellesAgnes on May 21, 2006
    Hiya!!! This fic is getting excited! When you update please send me a email telling me! So Hope you UPDATE soon! Sayonara!!!
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  • From ANON - azuuei on February 10, 2006
    I've read a lot of fanfics before, and to be honest, this is only the 2nd fanfic that I am/was anticipating like crazy. My goodness. You have a way of getting into people's emotions with words, which is something I find truly amazing.

    Oh yeah, vampire-ish sasuke is luuurve! *throws heart confettis all over the place*

    Good luck on the future chapters. We're looking forward to it. =)
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  • From ANON - lunatic stabber on February 03, 2006
    please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Beulah Page on January 31, 2006
    Another stunning chapter. It didn't seem forced or lacking; you're being too hard on yourself. Rewriting again and again makes you doubt yourself unless you have the luxury to set it aside for at least a few days before going over it again. At least that's how it always seems for me. Internal conflict is always delicious, and this chapter was absolutely exciting. I really love how Sasuke is rethinking everything, especially his realization that all those goals are really important to him and how he's the only one who can accomplish them. A bit saddened that he thinks of Sound as home, though. And the last bit was truly heartwrenching.
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