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Reviews for Who's Your Seme?!

By : xxdedxx

From RyuuOokami on February 28, 2008
At least you made Naruto a really cute seme. And Sasuke had been a good boy, buying lube. But they should be more careful with each other, it really doesn't have to hurt. But then... it's Sasuke and Naruto. It's more in character that they fight all the time, even in a true relationship. *smiles*
But actually I liked that you as least tried NaruSasu. Usually in a relationship you take turns a little. But then of course; some like better to be bottom and some better like to be top and then that's the way it usually goes but even then they use to take turns a little anyway. It just doesn't seem natural for me that someone is always the uke and the other always seme. That's not the way it have been in my relationships anyway. *smiles a little*
Eh sorry, got carried away here, I can discuss such things forever, especially when it's around thoe two (Sasuke and Naruto). Hehe.
Anyways. Thanks again for giving me something pretty nice to read.
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From Sugary on August 12, 2007
I'm a fan of both SasuNaru and NaruSasu so this chapter was a slice of both and I LOOOVEED IT!!!! Your stories rule :)
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From kagome1303 on June 15, 2007
Nice. I know As I said in a review before, Sasuke's personality makes him suited for seme, but I can't help but have a love of Naruto being seme. Oh well. I have my dreams for that I guess, but a NaruSasu pairing is rare (some people don't even know SasuNaru and NaruSasu are different, some people think it's the same thing, even though it's really not... Oh well.)
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From ANON - Menow on September 16, 2006
Cute story, however, if Naruto is going to always act like that then he is definitely the uke. Also, I think the word you're looking for is necro�philiac (one with an unnatural obsession and erotic interest in corpses), not necromaniac.
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From ANON - cibiboy on January 28, 2006
hey i really like ur story dose neji suspect anything lol update soon
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From ANON - Neko-chan on October 02, 2005
XD Oh, my...Those poor boys...Trying to out-do eachother will wear them out to quickly for us fan-girls!! xD I must say i'm kinda on Naruto's side in the Sasuke looks like an uke at first glance idea. But, then again so does Naruto...I loved this fic alot. You now have my full fandom!(Which isn't completely full since i'm a fan of many writers here BUUUT i am a fan of you too now so...Congrats?...) Hee Hee. If only Neji knew why, i think he'd either nosebleed or faint from shock. xD Neji: OI! Me: o.o......gtg now, BYE! *runs away* Neji: COME BACK HERE!*chase*
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From ANON - blisblop on August 18, 2005
Hi.Thanks for responding to me.Props for that,people tend to get irrate but I thought it was constructive.i like this fic,I love them both bed ridden and sore.The whole thing was very cute.I know tons of gays and no it does not affect their self image as men to bottom,you are not taking into aacount the amount of attention a well treated bottom gets(no pun intended,really!) Alot of people top from the bottom.Only some,not all,straight guys and sadistic gays/women think that its unmanly,gag.Gender is a really twisted issue ,its not only biological.Many are convinced there are more than two sexes.Anywho, rock on oh writer that makes my day brighter,um,yeah!
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From akiravadel on August 11, 2005
Hey deb. Ya know what? I'd like to draw this one too. Many sex sceans I'd like to see on paper. Of course it's up to you! ^-^ I'll wait to hear from you. Keep it up gurly!

~Akira~
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From ANON - luvily1 on July 24, 2005
Ooh, i likey very much! =^-^= You write very well and i really liked how you wrote everything.

I just wanted to say that i read the reviews written before me and your responses to them and wow-wee was i surprised...In a good way, don't worry =]...well mostly. I understand how everyone had their own opinions of *The Prefect Story* they prefer and invisioned; to me, this story was considered one, hehe (is secretly a worshipper of Sasu/Naru). Everyone has the right to express the opinions of what they liked and how they liked them to be.

In this case, you and MOSTLY everyone else (including myself, of course) seemed comfortable with a Sasuke-seme and Naruto-uke because most preferred this OR if not, then there was also a Naru/Sasu (Naruto-seme & Sasuke-uke) so there was no need to complain about being biased to one pairing or anything since the story clearly states it was a Sasu/Naru mostly. Every author has the right to express whichever pairing they liked and how they liked them to be. If the author wanted an adorably cute and rather submissive Naruto as uke and a teasingly hot and mostly dominant Sasuke as seme, then so be it, i don't think many people would object to that ;).

What got me really riled up was that one review was rather insulting and biased; to YOU, to EVERYONE who liked this sort of pairing and how it was presented, and EVEN to Naruto and Sasuke! First off, a review is a privilege given to people so that they could respond with what they thought of the story/or anything else you could review, it is meant for either praising, or constructive critism that doesn't hurt or offend the author in any way. It is not shallow to like a character in a particular personality since this is FANFICTION and anything could happen.

I agree that you didn't really define on the words, "Girl Part," but it was obvious that you were referring to it as the submissive role, (maybe it would be better in the future, if you wrote that instead, much clearer). In a het-pair, it is often said that the girl is submissive and the guy is dominant, BUT there are couples who like to switch roles because they liked to explore different things or is more comfortable that way, and that is something to respect and not critisize or else we'd be hypocrits. It is just an unspoken rule and even though it is sometimes offensive to other people, i don't think most people meant to do that. I give PROPZ to independant couples who do things that THEY are comfortable with.

Getting off topic now, hehe. Okay, secondly, the person who reviewed before was also biased because they stated that a typical girly-girlish-girly-girl thing was a barbie doll. Just because the doll is replica of a girl does not really make it a girly-girl thing. Don't children play with them? They play with them because they are TOYS! Regardless of a girl or boy, a barbie doll is played with small children because it is a plaything. It's true because i see boys and girls play with barbies and etc. because it's a toy.

WOW, i typed a lot! I hope you don't mind, but at least you have something to read when you're not busy^^;.

Just wanted to say, the person did not have the right to insult other people on their view of beliefs and morals. It is not respectful to say that you are going to lead a boring sex life just because you are not adventurous. Just because people do not choose to think the same way, does not deem them worthy for that disrespect. I chose to be open-minded to other people's choices; i agree on same-sex marriages and that of its like because i respect the people who disregard the image of "How things shoud be" and be with the person whom they love because that is the only thing important.

One last thing, I promise, hehehehe. I really think that you wrote Sasuke as seme is because the way you wrote on how he feels and thinks is portraying that he PREFERS Naruto under him (or on his lap)...naked...moaning...begging...Oohh, yeaah, lol. I don't think that it was a macho thing that made Sasuke refuse at first, i think it was because he either liked it when he was in control and dominant (i would damn well let him have his way with me ^^) or he preferred Naruto at his mercy. Luved your story, hope you update soon and i'm sorry i took up this much space, forgive me? *Stuffs a pouting and near-tears Naruto to you* Great fic by the way, good job!
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From ANON - kataru on July 20, 2005
hmm... i like the last part...... hmm it looks like sasuke sucks as a seme... and better be the UKE! did i get it right? *uh yeeeeees!* sasUKKE~
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From ANON - MultifacetedTune on July 13, 2005
Oh-so-incredably-adorable!!! I loved this!!! ^___^ Very, very cute idea, and quite well done -- you had a nice mix of humor and...welllllll....... ^___~ Keep up the good work!!!
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From ANON - Arryelle on July 11, 2005
Yes I share your pain but your so good to your revewiers The nara /sasu pairs give me shivers of just not rightness but you made it more than bareble for the sasu /naru fans and that takes a great writer. That was so funny with Naruto's thoughts..... necromanic greatness lol
Your are so good at yaoi's I'm a coward I really want to write one but I don't want to mess up; I have a sick mine though I was going to make a Kabuto/Orochimaru pair since there so few out there but it makes a great couple too even though he's 50 lol.
but back on track YAY you gave us a taste of the wonderful sasuke being the seme but don't you think it's funny that sasuke has uke in his name lol
And the mirror part so damn sexy and in-genius *Drools*
oh and the whole thing with them going all night switching that was awsome oh the images in my head happy dreams tonight. I'm a Chou-Hentai alright..
And last but not least (intill your next great fic)
Thankies for the iruka/kakashi in advance I know you will make it great

Loves Arry
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From ANON - MeLaiya on July 10, 2005
well, even if you did have to force yourself you did an excellent job. I thought it was wonderfully written and the boys were in perfect character. Keep up the good work.
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From ANON - Anon on July 10, 2005
er... I think you mean nymphomaniac, but nymphomaniac is used with women.

Necromaniac means Sasuke likes dead people -_-;;
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From ANON - Kativa-chan on July 10, 2005
Me no likey Sasu-uke. But I'll read it because you're such a good author ^.^
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