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Reviews for Who's Your Seme?!

By : xxdedxx
  • From ANON - :) on July 03, 2005
    loved it!
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  • From ANON - Obi on July 02, 2005
    Me again! Aff decided to EAT half of my review. EVIL. anyway, what I wanted to say was that I really REALLY love the way you write the conversation between Naruto and Sasuke. It's oh so so Great! I love when they have there whole rival-thing going on, it wouldn't be sasuke/naruto (or naruto/sasuke) without it! So GREAT when Naruto thought something like, he would hit him but Sasuke would probably see it as forplay (something like that)... gaah! I love the whole thing! just wanna let you know! *sends you love and cookies* Let's hope aff.net doesn't eat my review this time... Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Obi on July 02, 2005
    Wow! That was great! I'm actually really looking forward to the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - maria on July 01, 2005
    There's no "uke" in Naruto...

    Okay, that was a REALLY bad pun. XP
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  • From nejinee on June 30, 2005
    Very good fic. You write fantastically well. Your grammar is clear and your explanations are awesome. Keep it up. My favourite line was "under several layers of denial" or something like that. I like hints of humour ^^ I won't correct you on spelling because whenever people do that to me, I feel like gagging them. So here's to you writing awfully well!

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  • From ANON - FlamesEmbrace on June 30, 2005
    Heh... I agree with you and Sasuke. Naruto-seme? Ah, well, all things must come to pass. (Where the hell did that come from...?) I loved this; so in-character. Especially Naruto. ^^ Kudos~
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  • From ANON - just_me on June 30, 2005
    Fics like this one makes life worth living. I love Kakashi and his clear observations. *giggles*
    But geez... girl part... like that's a bad thing. Even if the seme is the one doing the invading, uke can take controle.
    I can't wait to read the next chapter. Let's see if SasUKE does his name honor. *evil smirk*
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  • From ANON - Arryelle on June 30, 2005
    Well your lemons are awsome I love sasu/naru it fits the part like naruto is always messing up and clumilsy and you can't be that way during sex verses sasuke who does almost everything right. lol well I love it and I'm happy you are continueing do you think you could throw in a little kakashi/iruka lemon in there please.

    Oh and your stories are not long in fact I wouldn't mine if they were longer. so please do not downgrade the length

    Well update soon

    Loves Arry
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on June 30, 2005
    absolutely loved it, cant wait for the next chapter. Im a naru/sasu fan myself so i really cant wait. Keep up the good work and update soon
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  • From ANON - blisblop on June 30, 2005
    Girl part.Jeez sexist much?Naruto,you sound like an utter Barbie Doll,girls do this boys do that.Attitudes like that make me bitter,why force people into boxes based on their appearance,very shallow.You are gonna have the worlds most boring sex life and like most people who do not experiment or allow that there is more than one way to do something you will think rotten sex is really good and everyone else is making things up cause sex is nice but really....Yup,I sound bitter,you can ignore me of course (at your own peril)Here is a reveiw.I like the fic.It is amusing but the big dramatic point is lost on me,why wouldn't Sasuke want to get fucked?Is this just because he thinks Naruto will mess it up and damage him ?I know he isn't scared of a little pain,It can not be a macho thing cause everyone knows this is where" taking it like a man" comes from(in fact really macho guys fist,now thats scary.) and huge big strong guys get fucked all the time.This isn't a fetish fic so being on top in missonary doesn't matter and most people know that you can top from the bottom,I am totally confused.
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  • From ANON - Kativa-chan on June 30, 2005
    HAHAH! Awesome! I love Naruto as the uke. I really, really, hate Sasuke being the uke in the relationship. Haha, I loved this ^.^
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  • From ANON - Athea on June 29, 2005
    Hehehe poor Naruto, but Sasuke does seem more like the seme in their relationship. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - la Contessa on June 29, 2005
    I really like the idea and the dialogue (I was laughing so hard at the conversation between Naruto, Iruka, and Kakashi!), but you might want to watch the run-on sentences. There were several times that by the time I got to the end of a sentence, I'd forgotten how it had started. Maybe you could turn some of the longer sentences into two. Other than that, I really enjoyed it!
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  • From AkumaKawa on June 29, 2005
    Wow. Love it. So next is Naruto's turn, YAY!!!

    Keep up the great work, Coolsa.
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