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By : NexusW
  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on July 31, 2005
    OMG, you are AMAZING!!! That was HILARIOUS!!! *can't stop laughing* My family thinks I'm insane now, but honestly, you rock!!! *gives you chocolates* Oh, and I LOVE your characterizations and descriptions; yeah, I know I probably already told you that in an earlier review, but I'm telling you again! ^^ And as for the "what should Sasuke do to Naruto" question, I think you already have a fairly good idea: chocolate. Thus why I gave you some. ^___~ You know, you can do the darnest things with meltable chocolate......or chocolate surup, for that matter, but I'm not a big fan of that, sooooo............ *shrugs* Anyway~ I can't wait to find out what happens next, so keep up the good work and update ASAP, k? ^___^ Ja ne!!!
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  • From ANON - Darkness-Consumer on July 30, 2005
    Ooooh, brilliant story! :P I couldn't stop laughing at some parts, it was so funny! I can't wait for your next update :)
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  • From ANON - iie on July 27, 2005
    OH MY GOD, i'm going to freakin' die of laughter!!!!!!! Ahh this story's great, so good, original, funny, and kinky. Yay for everyone hitting on naruto. Btw, loved the neji-is-a-herbal-essence-godly-icon-and-has-a-orgasm-inducing-voice! Your fic is great entertainment and pure genius! I'm really looking forward to what sasuke will do to naruto (or what he'll make him do XD). Unfortunately, i can't think of anything i'd want sasuke make naruto do. That dress idea is great though. I also loved the part with naruto lookin' like a sex god in sasuke's clothes....and comando-ing in his shorts!!!! XD so great so great. Your 1st person pov is really well done and narrated, sounds like naruto. Very satirical. anyways, sorry about work, but i hope it'll be much lighter! Good luck on the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 26, 2005
    i will forever demand my naruto/neji or naruto/garra pairing oh and if u could through in an odd pairing like shikamaru/naruto but only a little XD
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  • From ANON - Yukio on July 26, 2005
    More SasuNaru and NejiNaru. its not GaaraNaru right? Please not. More Updates
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  • From ANON - kkkkkkkk on July 25, 2005
    Hahahahaha!!! It's a jealous Sasuke! The best kind there is! I think that it would be amusing if he either tried to jump-attack Gaara, or corner Naruto in one of their class to "punish" him. Then you would be able to work in a jealous Neji too! And possibly bring in a suspicious Itachi since Sasuke had been planning to keep his perferances for Naruto a secret. Well, that's just what I think. Can't wait for the next chapter, good luck.
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  • From ANON - naru-sasu on July 25, 2005
    WOW! You're good at writing, but stop the neji/naruto & gaara/naruto, because NARUTO & SASUKE BELONG TOGETHER FOREVER! well, that wasn't excepted, wasn't it? but stil more sasuke & naruto action! then i'm a happy little rapid fan, who just loves naruto & sasuke, but sucks at thinking of a name to myself... can't help it!
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  • From ANON - BlacKat on July 25, 2005
    WHOPPIE! Another chappie UPdated! ^_^ -> T_T Felt 4ever!
    SO I'm guessing Gaara likes Naruto! XP Obviously! The nice hot kiss during rehearsal is a dead give away if you ask me! :P
    Let's see... burning eyes from Sasuke to Naruto usually isn't a good sign...:shrug: I don't really care what happens next to what Sasuke is going to do to Naruto as long as it's exciting and HOT and maybe something that could give me a good laugh! ^_^ K can't wait for the next chappie!
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  • From ANON - Ryouke-Tezuseme on July 24, 2005
    XD hahahahahahha omg that was fucking funny! Lol the whole Neji with herbal was totally turning me on XD~ jeez id give anything to hear him moan XD~ i like the gaara and naruto relationship its so cute >,
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  • From ANON - ^^ on July 24, 2005
    hell yeah! an update!! oh man I LOVED it!! the way you ended it made it seem like Sasuke was jeaaaalllllooouuss!! and I loved how Gaara and Naruto semi made out. cheyaaa! update soon!
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  • From ANON - dreamsraven on July 24, 2005
    OHHH!!!! yay!! gaara got to make otu with naruto!! GaaNaru is like my ultime favorite pairing. Then comes NejiNaru and lastly SasuNaru....then Everyone and Naruto becuase Naruto is my little Naruhoe...did i spell hoe right or is it ho???....whatever....please update soon! ive been reading your fic and was thinking how realy well writing is is! i love the whole first person thing...you make Naruto hilarious in fact this whole fic is hilarious!! please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Tiina on July 24, 2005
    Goddamnit!! You can't cut the story like that!! It just..cruel...Now, hmm, is this NaruSasu fic of Naruto/every guy on this fic..? Well, can't say I don't like when Naruto is being harassed by his friends, it's just so fun to read and especially when they're at school!! xD
    So: When. Do. You. Update????
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  • From ANON - macy on July 24, 2005
    oh my gosh! I can't believe this is the first time i've read this fic! i was so sure i've started it before. however, it's all cool, coz i was pleasantly surprised!!! this is so awesome. naruto's POV is fantastic. i like the sarcasm. it's very entertaining to read. very witty and amusing. i cannot wait when sasuke gets back into the picture *evil fangirl laugh* awesome job so far! oh! oh! i especially liked naruto sending neji's demo tape to herbal, hahahaha XD soooo funny!
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  • From ANON - yuki-chan on July 24, 2005
    go nexus-sama, go!!!! i like your fic!!!! IT ROCKS!!!! HELL YEAH!!!! hope naru-chan will always be botttom, ne?... oh please, dear author, PLEASE?!?!?!?! and please post the updates soon. drives me crazy when i check my fave fics every other day only to find them still not updated. i'm looking forward to chap. 6!!! "Who do you belong to, Naruto?!?" Mwahahahahahahahahah!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Nissie on July 24, 2005
    Waii! I love this fic! Yay for a Vanilla Neji (haha, I can SO imagine him listening to Gackt!) and yay for a Naruto who thinks he's straight but reeeaaally isn't ^^

    Yeah, I didn't really understand what you meant by that small chapter thingy, but if it means reading more of your works I say YES! GIMME GIMME! Please? Okay, I hope you'll update a lot! I like your style and the storyline is fantastic!
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