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From ANON - Sukara ((Not signed in)) on September 17, 2005
OMFGWTFBBQ!!!! >=O This fic is fricken smexxi!!!! Update soon!!!!
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From ANON - needmoreanime on September 17, 2005
wahhh(.-_-.) im crying here i so wanted more neji/naruto its so good but all it is,is sasuke-teme. its not fair. i dont want naruto to end up with that evil, mean, traiter. i really want neji/naruto or gaara/naruto even itcha would be better although his name sounds like he has a really bad scatch.
so my request is please put more neji/naruto in i hope u update soon because i do like the fic. as to what narutos going to do at the party hes going to flirt with all the guys but sasuke-teme
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From ANON - blisblop on September 17, 2005
OK MY REQUEST;ahem, Sasuke is seperated from Naruto,maybe Naruto ends up hiding in a room,Sasuke comes in,looking for a shirt to change into but low and behold its Itachi's room,Itachi verbaly spars with Sasuke and comes on to him(having already noticed Naruto is gloming(observing closely) Sasuke big time from his hiding place in the room,Itachi gets closer,dazing out Sasuke, goes in for a kiss and whispers that Naruto is watching,like he wants to help him imobilize Naruto with a show,Sasuke half bombed with lust and frustration and Itachiness and Naruto's nonsence goes for it (maybe Itachi caught Sasuke in a blind fold with his shirt...nah,maybe)they dance...teasing one another ,shirt off Itachi,and after general verbal teasing ,where oh where is your girl friend yadda,yadda,blackmail,I know your girlfriend is a guy..dialogue .Sasuke plays along,just cause he wants to teach Naruto a lesson .coughrightcough.Itachi pins him right where Naruto can see everything cause he is hidden at hip level Itachi gets Sasukes pants around his knees and is grinding him into the wall?desk?velvet chair? custom spanking bench that just so happens to be there? his pants undone to his hips(another joy of silk underwear bit commences) and torments him unto.... now does Naruto "save" Sasuke interupting and getting dragged in or does Itachi help Sasuke catch Naruto who is in a daze,drooling?... .before they break many more legal/social customs... then proceed to do so with Naruto absorbed into the mix?Do both of them torment Naruto(though Itachi is more using Sasuke's body to make him torment Naruto, who is in"I got brothers on me " paradise ,two, para-dice (pair of dice,get it....OK, it was a biker gang in T.O.years ago ,I am using them,my mind enjoys sullying bikers with yoai,heh heh hehha ha...oh..anyway..) Yeah ,Itachi is helping Sasuke by molesting him into Naruto who is sure he is seeing ,feeling things he will never have the chance to again...now does Itachi have to leave?Do they all get interupted?Point being the brothers will never get to do this again either, cause they would never be in a situation where they can deny what they are doing,I want them excited and caught up in it too,they can blame it on Naruto and go into denial later.Naruto can (not must) decide Sasuke must be removed from his family,um,Itachi,... before they all get into something further, he for one is not ready for..this is just before the end of this arc,do not want much thinking going on but all the denial/thought,Naruto removing Sasuke , goes on *after *the sexual contact (even if its just non intercourse,I'd like Sasuke getting faced with Naruto with Itachi behind him and getting his postate finger fucked by his brother, how or whether the others get any,the others could get started on hand jobs... or Itachi can grind Sasuke into Naruto without Naruto ever knowing about what Itachi's fingers are up to or....So Itachi starts it,Sasuke thinks its a good idea but he gets utterly turned on (exhibitionist as we all know )and forgets himself and Naruto has no mistakes in his mind after seeing/experiancing them what his preferance is ...Uchiha's! This way there is no evil Itachi,just yoai succulant goodness.Yup,thats my WISH!!! Beams,whadda ya think?Oh this can be at party yeah
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From ANON - Trekiael on September 17, 2005
I love your story. I love the part in the candy shop. I love this part: Well not like, �Oh Naruto, lets pick out new clothes for you, I�d think you�d be positively sexy in pink!� I mean more like, �Get on your knees by the bed so I can screw your bloody brains out and make you feel the best transcending time orgasm you�ve ever had.� I think it's one of the best I've read about how I saw "Sasuke the gay". Yes, Naruto belong to Sasuke, that's for sure! But that doesn't mean a foursome with Gaara and Neji is impossible! Sasuke as the ultimate seme, meaning fucking Neji or Gaara fucking Gaara or Neji fucking Naruto, a good one what. I suppose you would'nt make Gaara and Neji do things together, hum? Sad, it's my second favorite pairing after SasuNaru. I totally agree with Sasuke, Naruto as a woman is so wrong, eurk, bad, no, Naruto as a male with a little kinky outfit (like black leather shorts with black leather thigh high boots with little black leather jacket with black leather collar with a black leather leash) it's ok, not boobs or make up or long hair. I think Naruto could get revenge on Sasuke during the party by giving him a blowjob under the table, mwahahaha. Go Sas', pound him on the mattress! But as Naruto is Naruto, I think he would probably more fuck with Sasuke by riding him, straddeling his waist, like to say, with his twist logic "ha! I may be the uke, but I'm in control here!" Proud even if he has a dick shove up his ass! So Naruto-like. I hope it's not Gaara nor Neji who win him in the end (but after everyting I told, it seem normal I think that, ne?). Your story is good, it's not an angsty one but a funny one, it's good sometimes to have a well done story that make you laugh more than cry. Good luck! Ja ne!
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From ANON - Ellememe on September 13, 2005
And also, I wouldn't mind seeing some naru/gar(in any order) action, but in the end, Sasuke and Naruto belong together.(In my PERSONAL opinion. That is something that's debatable.)
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From ANON - Ellememe on September 13, 2005
.....I'm FEMALE...I'm not supposed to nose bleed...and yet you have broken my laws of reality, or in other words, that was a kick ass lemon.As for who should win Naruto, our very own kinky-ice bitch should win, 'cause they're polar opposites of eachother ('tis the hot~ness) and Sasuke just gets him into the most delisious scenarios( thankys to the writer, of course!~^,^~).
Naruto is ta' cute kinky sex kitten and Sasuke is the hot sadist, You-know-you-want-me-but-I'll-always-have-my-way-and-I-don't-want-you-cause-I'm-just-that-sexy bitch.Perfect coulpe!!1!!!(And besides, how can naruto not want more Sasuke lovin's and blowjobs from the hot bastard? We all know he enjoyed that blowjob, AND he even said that he didn't feel upset from the kiss like he thought he should have!
.......*pervert grin that could make Kakashi AND Jiraiya hide in fear and unnervement*...........
KEEP IT GOIN'!!!!!WE LOVE YOU FOR IT!!!(plus, you fit it all into a lovely plot, thankyou very much!)
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From ANON - neji101 on September 03, 2005
Very nice story, it had so many parts that cracked me up completely! Can't we please, please have a little bit of NejiNaru (or NaruNeji - I'm not fussy XD)? You make Neji sound so damn appealing... maybe Naruto feels that way too? *puppy dog eyes* PWEASE???
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From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on September 02, 2005
I wonder who Naruto's new roommate going to be? Let's see...whoever he is, if he's going to get some love interests towards Naruto...he has to be like Sasuke, Neji, and Gaara. Cold, collective, lacking in good social skills, and a hottie to boot...*gasp*...I BET ITS KIMIMARO!! (What? He's a hottie to me...)
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From ANON - Esca on August 28, 2005
LMFAO BEST SCENE EVER please continue
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From ANON - jazzy on August 27, 2005
Totally awsome, but I was hoping for more seduction verses full on sexual encounter. More sensual torture for Naruto or more of a fight from Naruto but hey its all good to me.

I hope there will be a next chapter very soon.

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From ANON - lala on August 27, 2005
I love it so far, especially that scene with naruto and gaara as shusaku and kyuubi, naruto is really cute and i like that you wrote him with more confidence rather than the customary hyperactive/too loud kid everybody picks on. your naruto doesn't seem to take any B.S. from anyone and that's probably alot better than someone defining themselves by what others see in them only. please update soon -lala
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From ANON - Choi-sama on August 26, 2005
That last line about Sasuke having wanted ti be a fireman... I thought the exact same thing the first you mentioned it! XD My mind really is on permanent gutter mode. Heh heh. As for suggestions, I want to see a nice, hard fuck scene. I've been reading a ton of fanfiction lately (before green light season starts), but no one's doing any lemons of whatever. Just mostly... plot. Eww. Hehe, I also want to see Jiraiya blackmail Naruto or something. It'd fit in perfectly in this story. ^__^

Oh ho ho ho...
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From ANON - lain on August 26, 2005
I WANT NARUTO AND GAARA ACTION! GIMME!.....please.....for the next chapter..... but everything is good! love the new chapter! ^_^
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From ANON - sara on August 25, 2005
wow. i realy love how the story if going. especially the personality you put into his perspective. its uberly addicitng. haha especially the neji and hish erbal commercial. LOL. that was awesome. got me cracking up like crazy. great work! keep writing!!
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From ANON - kataru on August 25, 2005
Oh my... really. Beautiful guys are either married or GAY. uh as for sasuke... O_o WTF! he's. pretty GAY.
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