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By : NexusW
  • From ANON - Raphael Argai Thanatos on June 23, 2005
    Oh, deaaaar... we'r in trouble...^^
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  • From ANON - silverfox on June 23, 2005
    this was an intersting atart i was laughing the whole time i read it very good so keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - T.K-kun on June 23, 2005
    Great introduction, it was a bit long though. the opinion naruto had of everyone
    was amusing. the plot seems to be interesting so far about the bet laeding to
    naruto being sasuke's slave for a month. great slide into that kind of situation.
    leads to the collar too, haha. continue, it's really interesting so far. update soon!
    =D
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  • From AkumaKawa on June 23, 2005
    Love it!

    Keep up the excellent work, Coolsa.
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  • From ANON - Jiro on June 23, 2005
    Like the caustic inner monologue! Yay for a wry, witty Naruto. Now all we need is to see him on his knees, in front of Sasuke, flushed and panting from... you get the idea ^_- Can't wait to see where you take this. I'm guessing since you made a point of talking about Gaara and Neji specifically and in great detail (relatively at least) that they, in addition to Sasuke, will be lusting after Naruto? *crosses fingers* Because nothing makes me happier than a Gaara vs. Neji vs. Sasuke in a winner takes all battle for Naruto's heart (or ass) (Naturally Sasuke should win, but he should have to TRY, ya know?) Haha! Anyway, awesome story, please update soon!
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  • From YuriKuro on June 23, 2005
    LLooOOOOooLL

    Neji in a Herbal add!! Wow that'd be fun!!^^

    I love the way you wrote this...the part with the pricks and all...well done and quite hilarious!!
    I like the idea too...can't wait to know what kind of Hell Naruto will have to go through!! Poor thing...I just hope he's gonna come back at Sasuke for this whole slave thing somehow...*evil perverted grin* héhé

    Well on that...you MUST give us a second chapter soon!!!!!*koneko's eyes*
    Great work!
    See ya
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 23, 2005
    Very cute beginning. I like the way Naruto acts in this one. I saw some grammar mistakes, but they can be easily fixed. I can't wait to see more!
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