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By : NexusW
  • From ANON - oOKeairaOo on June 24, 2005
    I'm honestly trying to figure out why this story has only four stars. Sure, I saw a few mistakes, but the humor far overshadows those. All you really need is maybe a beta. Oh, the unfairness of the AFF rating system.

    I love your Naruto in this story, he's hilarious, and I'm liking the first person POV. The fast updates are also definitely a bonus. I'll look forward to more from you!
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  • From ANON - Shikashinigami on June 24, 2005
    This story is friggin' awesome!! I can't believe it! It's sooooooo hard to find good fics these days!! *Swats at hair* Neji and Gaara and Sasuke are all sooooo cool!! Ans I can't wait till' the party. Itachi's my most favoritist character! I also like Naruto's new look it's ssseeexy!!! Whoo-hoo. Can't wait till' you update! Ja for now!
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  • From ANON - Sukara on June 24, 2005
    Pretty good but still OCC-ness.... -.-
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  • From ANON - queen_o_cupcakes on June 24, 2005
    So very very cool
    Keep writing!!!

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  • From AprilC on June 24, 2005
    oh my god this is soooooooo good i cant wait for the next chapter! i love it so much yayness good job
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  • From ANON - angel of darkness on June 24, 2005
    herbal boy!!!! lol gotta luv neji ^_^ -huggles neji plushie- lmao poor naru every guy is after him lmao cant wait for more!! u should have sasuke put naruto in a maids outfit and clean his house!! bwahahahahahha
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  • From ANON - Raphael Argai Thanatos on June 24, 2005
    what da hell is he gonna do with a herb-- ooooh!... OO
    I GET IT! fuhuhuhuhuhuuuuuuu!!!!
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  • From ANON - T.K-kun on June 24, 2005
    Haha, nice ending line! man, kid of funny, cuz I use herbal essence. i've got
    the neji hair! haha. ugh, i would NEVER be ale to update as often as you. good
    job on that! really, i compliment you on that. kudos to you. anyways, this was
    more intimate and gives away a lot in one go. man, naruto like attracts the
    wrong sex, lol. "naruto, you're not gonna attract girls with you black outfit. haha"
    great chapter and man... sasuke's gona have a butch gf at the party? he sounds
    REALLY tiny compared to naruto for some reason. haha, hope naruto's the uke!
    "sorry naruto-kun!" haha, actually not really sorry about that. go sasunarus! update
    soon, but at the rate you're going, should i eve be asking? haha
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  • From ANON - vampchic on June 24, 2005
    Very cute. Naruto is just too sexy for his own good.XP Cant wait to see what other things that Sasuke will have Naruto do. Or wear.*Snickers* Ahh, really, who could ever resist a groping Sasuke?? Or a jealous Gaara? And Neji does sounds like the type that would use Herbal Essences.^^ Wonder how Naruto will get out off that awkward situation? Really cant wait to read more. Update soon, kay?
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  • From ANON - ^^ on June 24, 2005
    omg lovely lovely! please update soon! hehe, are all three guys lusting after naruto? hehe, that's hot. update soon then!
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  • From ANON - tsuki on June 24, 2005
    LOL! Im loving this Please update it soon!!! poor Naruto...im loving it!
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  • From ANON - SilentInquisition on June 24, 2005
    Gah! I love it. I always love the ones where Neji, Gaara, and Sasuke compete for poor oblivious Naruto. And you do it so well. Update soon, please!
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on June 24, 2005
    Okay, it's official: you rock. ^^ No, really, this fic is AMAZING! The characterizations (especially Naru-kun's) are spectacularly done, as well as the descriptions, and OMG, the PLOT!!! *squeeeeeee!!!* ^^ Alright, I'll shut up now. But in all honesty, this is an excellent idea and so far you've written it wonderfully, so keep up the good work -- I can't WAIT for the next chapter!!! ^___~ Ja ne!!!
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  • From ANON - BlacKat on June 24, 2005
    Hey I read ur story and so far it GREAT! ^_^ It's totally hilarious and I just can't get enough of it :P I can't wait for the next chappie! -_- wonder what Naruto's gonna do with Herbal shampoo :ponders: o the possibilities! ^_^ UPdate soon pls!
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  • From ANON - Cloud_Haven on June 24, 2005
    oh that was funny*fell off her chair laughing* heh poor Naruto! please update!
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