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By : onesickmind
  • From ANON - DeadUchiha on July 16, 2005
    that was me weeping...BTW...
    3) every last word...makes me feel...see above...and then some... Itachi...sigh...*hearts*
    4) VIOLENT SEX! Wow. I love the violent sex. So nice. *is getting very sleepy* *evil cackle*
    5) The end...wait...I thought that the previous paragraph was the end...*is confused agian*...well it was a good ending...and wow! You sure do like RAPE! Rape is nice...sometimes...in the proper context of course. And when there isn't 'rasps' involved *quivers*...unless the 'rasp' is actually caused by being hoarse from screaming the name of the dominating...eh...raper(?)...gaa…tangent…sorry…
    The end of this review: Wow…I am exhausted from all that…well; I hope I have brightened up your day! Your fic brightened up mine. Thanks for your time spent writing! You know you enjoyed it. I meant writing that uber fucking funny ass piece of art…not my idiot raving. It is left to be seen if I have accomplished my mission of stroking your ego enough to compel you to compose more. Go ahead! Keep going! *wink* now I’m afraid for some reason…hmmm…having a “what’s in the box” moment…
    I had something to say just now…but it went away…sorry…guess I’m done then.
    d(^-^)b


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  • From ANON - DeadUchiha on July 16, 2005

    This is me saying that I hope my whole review posts…if it does not…I will have to try again…so bear with me…posting now!
    Wow...you know...I forgot that I had even read this fic before...so I checked...and then I remembered...and it was squee...
    HOORAY FOR DELETED SCENES!!!
    And my goodness...you are the author/authoress(?) of one of my absolute favorite fics in the whole friggin land..."Dead Brother"...fucking congratulations! I'm in love.
    Now I wonder if I should sit here and analyze every little bit that I thought was absolutely fucking hilarious, or if I should just bombard you with empty praise...I mean, I know that you would probably get a kick out of the analysis...but I’m not sure if you would like the whole copy/paste of your entire story in my review...hmm...now I’m having a battle of wills...alright...why the fuck not...it is all for love nay?
    1)--"it has the logical flaw of Naruto not using his kage no bushin to free himself from the trap......." The whole scene that follows that, this is what I have to say:
    I would never have caught that 'logical flaw'. You are brilliant, and that scene was equally as brilliant as well...glad you decided to add it! Though...now that I read that again...I'm confused by kage no bunshin? Was that a typo? (O.o) oh well...that actually sounds pretty cool...(love is supposed to be blind after all) 'Clone-go-away-ness'...oh yeah...that was a laugh out loud-er! Also, when I first opened it...I saw 'Chasing Naruto...' and became confused...and then I thought it was very funny...(I imagined that scene taking place in the fic entitled "Chasing Naruto" which I knew that this was not, but still, there is that word tie thing that got me...anyway, intentional or not, I chuckled...yay!)
    okay...moving on then...
    2) The Sakura Scene...I loved it! OMFG!!! That was soooo hilarious! And the part at the end...copy/paste again: "You know, I found Sakura. She was looking for you... calling out your name..." OMFGROFLMAO! So absolutely splendid...whatever being created you...has made me weep with joy...(TUT)
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  • From ANON - Emily Saeke on July 16, 2005
    More deleted scenes if you can, this is the funniest fanfic I have read to date!
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  • From ANON - Leasan on June 29, 2005
    KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!
    Just fricking funny, twirsted and sexy and geez...
    Just write the next chapter, now. I mean NOW!!
    Just no Sakura, pleeease *whines* Make her faint or something!

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  • From ANON - ally2002 on June 29, 2005
    yeah keep going! kakashi rapes them all!
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  • From ANON - JadeTiger on June 28, 2005
    alright then!
    Ahem! *cough*
    KEEP GOING!! MORE MORE MORE!
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  • From ANON - april on June 28, 2005
    keep going!
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  • From ANON - Emily Saeke on June 28, 2005
    Lol, that's pretty funny and strange at the same time! Would you continue? I wanna see what Kakashi does
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  • From ANON - blisblop on June 28, 2005
    No I was not being sarcastic,in the first reveiw,I was not really being sarcastic in the second one either.Nope,I am ernest.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on June 28, 2005
    Nooo.I want the one where they rape Kakashi! ,let Sasuke go first,Naruto is just gonna ream him no matter what so this way he really can just lie there and Naruto can fuck them both.Sakura can sit on Kakashi's face ( or head if he is belly down ),who wants to see it anyhow!Down! with sadistic teachers,I mean up! sarcastic teachers I mean...you know.SMILES Great shit you write!
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  • From ANON - M-to-tha-e on June 28, 2005
    KEEP GOING, KEEP GOING!!! God, that was hot.....MORE!!!
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  • From ANON - Imseniorbagofcrap on June 28, 2005
    Oh noes!!! The ending!!! Seriously the line of how Kakashi lifted the cage and raped them all was frickin funny. The sex was *puts fingers together* excellent. I loved the randomness of chapter 2.
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  • From ANON - Rai on June 27, 2005
    lol I love the end lol
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  • From Kusachu on June 23, 2005
    OH MY GOODNESS!!! HOW CAN YOU SAY THIS SUCKS?!? I LOVED IT! IT WAS YUMMY AND GREAT! SO VERY NICE!! YAY! I just love it when the boys pick on each other! I hope you do more of this! it would be hilarius to see how Sakura would react to finding them! *EVIL GRIN!* again: YAY! The begining had me laughing heartily, and the end..well, you see, i have this omnipresent white tissue for such occasions, so yeah, it's ALL GOOD! I love the way you wrote Naruto in this... he is absolutely SOOO misrepresented in so many fics, it's great to see someone actually write him in a mischivious and naughty fashion! It's more fitting! *claps merrily for you!*
    well, i could shower you with praise all day...but alas, i must be off...SooooooOOOO! Later then! *SUPERGLOMPS YOU!* d(^-^)b
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  • From ANON - mitsune on June 23, 2005
    okay...whats so good in a fic thats NOT FINISHED?! argh! pleasepost the next chapters alredy!! i cant wait what'll happen next!!!
    its so cool for naru-chan to ravish sasuke like that!
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