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By : Tremalkinger
  • From ANON - ^^ on June 22, 2005
    ehehehe! i'm reviewing once again! mwhahah. O M G! i LOVED this chapter. omg sakura really is gonna take advantage of naruto's body isn't she??!! OMG ew! it's like she's masturbating...but not. HAHAHAHA. i mean like it's not her body but haha. it's so much fun reading this story!!! MWAHAHA! i can't WAIT until sasuke comes in!!! mehehe. update again update again! *bounces around like a hyper puppy* i'm waiting for your update. ^^


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  • From ANON - ^^ on June 22, 2005
    tehee it's me again. teehee. i'm reviewing before i even READ it. hehe. i love you so much! you've got the second chapter up! i was only bookmarking the story and then i noticed that a chapter 2 was up. *smooch* thank you so MUCH! i'm off to read it now. mehhe. and if i can, then i'll review the chapter for the chapter. hahaa! i just hope aff will let me review a chapter two times...cuz apparently ff.net doesnt. ^^ well anyways, thanks for updating!
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  • From ANON - Monkey Lady on June 22, 2005
    Yeah! I'm getting a really big kick out of this! I think if you make Sakura go after Sasuke though, at least warn poor Naruto so he's not wondering what the hell's going on later. :) 'Why are you in my bed Sasuke?!' hehehe I am really looking forward to more of this one. Yeah!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 22, 2005
    Ahaha, this is gonna be great. Although Sakura is evil for thinking about decieving Sasuke..That's mean D: What will happen if she does that and they switch back? It's gonna suxx0r :((

    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - ^_^; on June 22, 2005
    One random thing; If Naruto were Yondaime's son himself and the whole of Konoha knew, then that would inevitably change their perceptive of him, ne? He wouldn't be so hated anymore and it wouldn't be Naruto that way anymore.... Unless, of course, you have a plot-explanation up your sleeve that you'll include next chapter =D!

    ....Sakura should stop angsting about not being part of a prestigious clan etcetera, etcetera. It's very unbecoming. :O


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  • From ANON - DeadUchiha on June 22, 2005
    Holy crap and YAY! Ever so cool! I love this. Your interactions are great! And damn it! Sakura is great too! Perfect! Well done! *Clapping for you* I'm am thoroughly enjoying Naruto and Sakura! the conversation had me chuckling happily! Again YAY! I did notice what i thought might be a typo:
    "He can't even think of females romantically, yet he let (HER?) waste away all these years, wanting the impossible."
    And another thing at the end...i forget what it said exactly, but, i think there is a missing word...it was where you talked about "how they would view it"...anyway, yeah...one sentance read funny to me, but that was it, otherwise this chapter was PERFECT! And hoora! now i feel silly for what i said in my email to you because you have answered my question already...that's what i get for being hastey i guess! Well shit! I hpe to goodness you have more of this story already written...or at least can plot and type with the speed of Konoha's Yellow Flash, because i seriously want like 10 to 15 more chapters of this like IMMEDIATELY! LOL... Good luck with that! Keep it coming, and i will keep with the enjoying! okay then i'm done now! *GLOMPS* d(^-^)b

    Oh yeah...i wanna see what Sakura THINKS of her new 'body' and how it will affect her 'feelings' about its owner...*wiggles eyebrows* ...heh...don't worry...I'm not suggesting anything special, but she has to AT LEAST pause and take notice of how absolutly fucking HOT "she" is now, doesn't she? *evil grin*
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  • From ANON - Lazzy on June 22, 2005
    I really hope that this won't turn out to be a SakuSasu story, because Sakura is in Naruto's body... and I don't think it would be fair for Sakura to use the advantage of being in Naruto's body... maybe she finds out more of how Sasuke feels for Naruto, and tells Naruto, but doesn't do anything until they switch back? Because ... *laughs* It's an intresting idea for certain, but I'm rather.. meh about Sakura/Sasuke anything... XD
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  • From ANON - Emily Saeke on June 22, 2005
    Oh...my...God. This is GREAT!!! keep it coming!!
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  • From ANON - lje on June 22, 2005
    Your story is really good, and I had a great time reading the chapter. I think you've done well in capturing the essence of each of the characters, and your writing is very good. This may not be where your story is headed, but it seems like a perfect set up for a sasusakunaru triangle (I noticed someone put up a challenge for one not too long ago). I feel really bad for sasuke, who I assume will get tricked into thinking that naruto actually has feelings for him. I hope the next chapter comes out soon :) and keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Tsuki Ame on June 22, 2005
    Ignore shuchan's review, he/she obviously doesn't know what they're talking about. You've put warnings up and you've told the essence of your story, so why would someone still click on it and read it and then leave such an obnoxious review? Reviewers these days...what happened to the nice, helpful reviews we used to get? I tell ya...I feel old...and I'm still in me tweens!!!
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  • From ANON - Tsuki Ame on June 22, 2005
    ::claps:: my hat's off to you, this is an excellent start to a great plotline. I've read some body-switching stories, but I must confess they weren't as interesting as yours. They had the normal Sakura bashing and whatnot, and perhaps a smidgen of a storyline. I am greatly interested in your plot here, I think it's a strong beginning and I have to love the understanding between Naruto/Sakura when they are in each other's bodies. They are trained shinbo, freaking out when being switched is not really plausible, is it? I applaud Sasuke's character, it's magnificentally himself and terrifically played. I hope to see an update soon, this story could twist in some unexpected ways, ne? ^_~
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  • From ANON - shuchan on June 22, 2005
    you insensitive ******!!! change them back!!! sasuke has to be with NARUTO, be it body or mind!!! (in this case, put naru back in his body and get them moving!!!)
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  • From Kusachu on June 22, 2005
    OMG!!!! This better not be all there is because I haven't read a fic that made me want to see what happens next THIS MUCH in a very very long time!!! This is awesome! You are really really good! The relationships between the characters are perfect! BANG ON! YAY! So excellent! I mean, it would work great as a one shot too, but i think a lot of people would be very disappointed if it ended here. Again *HI FIVE!* YAY! I can't wait for more. Actually, if it wouldn't trouble you too much, you could email me if you update. I would like that very much. I would hate to miss it! *GAAAA!* *super glomps!*

    also, i know from experience how "weird" it is to write "body switched" characters and the like... the descriptions of things being coherent and all... you did it very well! *Happy clapping* and you've got a whole MONTH of wonderful misadventure to work with! HOLY CRAP! I JUST WANNA GOBBLE UP MORE!!! Heh.

    Well I could go on and on but you might think I’m weird. so...Hahaha! *is waiting impatiently for more yummy fiction*
    LATER THEN! TYPE MORE!
    d(^-^)b

    P.S. Beware: I am now your fan *wink*

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  • From ANON - ^^ on June 22, 2005
    OMG OMG OMGOGMGOGMOGMGOMGMOGMOGMGOGMOMGMOG! i FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY!!! HAHAAHAHHA. omg is sakura gonna take advantage of being in Naruto's body? and will Sasuke find out. OMG i can't wait, please update soon! UEEEIIEEE! i love this story. kukuku. ooh what is gonna happen to naruto. MWAHAHA! and i can't wait to see what Sasuke will do if/when he finds out! mwahhaa


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  • From theyaoifairie on June 22, 2005
    *tears in eyes*

    This is wonderful.
    I love you.
    Please write the next chapter before I explode.
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