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Reviews for Unrequited

By : katonkunai
  • From kitsuko999 on March 18, 2007
    ^0^ I love it!! The detail and the way you write just caught my attention -especially since this is a sasunaru pairing story! I hope you write more different stories soon!!
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  • From ANON - nicole on October 09, 2005
    this is good is there saposed to be more i'd apreciate it if it was
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  • From ANON - blahblah on July 02, 2005
    HAHA!!! Make Sasuke lose Naruto...he deserves it ^_^;;...hehheh...anyway...Naruto deserves better than him...update soon???
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  • From ANON - Manda-Kun on June 25, 2005
    It's pretty good and all, but I think you've rushed the events, and it COULD use a little more detail.
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on June 23, 2005
    .............wow. Umm...I wasn't...uhh...expecting that...at all...and...ummm........yeah. ^^ But I really, really liked this -- very well done, with excellent descriptions. I'm quite interested in finding out how it ends/what happens next, so keep up the good work and update ASAP, k? ^___^ Ja ne!!!
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  • From ANON - rAiNwAtEr on June 23, 2005
    I have to say that this was a very sad chapter. Both boys seem to be in anguish. I hope your story has a happy ending. What can I say, I'm a sap for happy endings. This chapter brings a lot of questions to mind about naruto. Maybe you should have the next chapter in Naruto's POV. As always I wish you the best of luck and hope that you update soon and keep me posted.

    ~~~rAiNwAtEr~~~
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  • From ANON - rAiNwAtEr on June 23, 2005
    I have to say that this was a very sad chapter. Both boys seem to be in anguish. I hope your story has a happy ending. W
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  • From ANON - ku on June 23, 2005
    omg! Keep going!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on June 23, 2005
    That was heavy.To see Sasuke lose it like that seemed very believable.He is far beyond the grasp of reason somehow I feel and this story reflected that.It also seemed the emotions expressed were boyish (except for Sasuke modifying his understanding of his feelings of love/lust/connection which was very well done of him) violent ,they had been hidden and even the place he expressed them seemed significant,very realistic responces.Sorry I am not expressing this well but I am sure you get the drift.I thought this chapter was well done and was not disapointing at all compared the the first chapter which was dreamy hot,it just gripped me.There is something in your voice or take on Sasuke that is fresh,I admire that and when I figure out what it is I will let you know.Oh this chapter was hot,steaming hot.Thank you very much.
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  • From ANON - Raphael Argai Thanatos on June 23, 2005
    WOW!!!! and i mean WOOOOOOOOOOW!!!! OO
    I luv this story!!!
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  • From ANON - silverfox on June 23, 2005
    i'm liking this so far so keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on June 22, 2005
    super cool! can't wait for part two... or more. eh-heh
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  • From ANON - Bonjour on June 22, 2005
    I don't have much constructive critizism for you, and for that I'm sorry (It really is far too early in the morning). But I did enjoy it, and I'm looking forward to future chapters! *Cheers for*
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  • From ANON - Jiro on June 22, 2005
    Very interesting *grins widely* Hopefully it's not a one-shot? I'd love to see where you'd take this. It's ALWAYS fun to read about an angsty, horny, Naruto-obsessed Sasuke. ^_^
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  • From ANON - mk on June 22, 2005
    me LIKE!!!!!!!!
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