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Reviews for Make My Heart Do Flips

By : aiimeru
  • From AkumaKawa on June 17, 2005
    Love it. Keep up the great work. Got some grammer mistakes, but love it.

    Keep up the great work, Coolsa.
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  • From ANON - - on June 17, 2005
    Slight grammatical errors, but otherwise, very cute. Looking forward to reading the next chapter, definitely. lol I don't like sasuke being a bastard (since I just plain hate sasuke), nonetheless, he is one already :P Can't do much, ne. So, have him put more venom in his speech, thoughts, and actions. He is a bastard and will never change until he realizes the true love that Naruto has for him *sigh* Naruto just HAD to love someone like Sasuke in the end eh. Twisted lol. Keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Crystal Child on June 17, 2005
    aaaaaaaah, your first yaoi. *sniff* brings back memories (lol)

    Anywho, I really really like this. You're developing the story and the characters really well so far, they don't seem to be too OOC, though it's still early to tell, so I won't pass my judgement yet. I'll definitely be keeping my eye out for more. :D
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  • From ANON - Sukara on June 17, 2005
    W00T!!! Great fic. =3 Please continue! And Naruto ish aonly a lil outta charater. xD He's not the one who buys ramen, he gets other people to buy. xD He begs and such. xD So funny. xD
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  • From ANON - Raphael Argai Thanatos on June 17, 2005
    Nyuu... plz don't tell moi there's gonna be an IruNaru kiss! >< that's gross! but then again it's up to u, don't let my opinion influence u :)
    great story!
    ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Germaine(2lazy 2 sign in) on June 17, 2005
    Okay....this is really confusing...cause at first I thought this was a NaruIruk (which I'm not very found of since they act like they are brothers...and I HATE incest)... But then I started thinking "hey, this might be a SasuNaruSasu"...but I dunno...I love SasuNaru though...and I almost got convinced when I looked in your profile and saw that you had "Chasing Naruto" as one of your favorites...(and I LOVE that fanfic! xD) But then again you had like two SasuSaku (*barf*) as your favorites too...=S

    But then....when I actually read the summary I found out that it was NaruIruk NaruSasu...damn...please...stick to SasuNar instead...Iruka is like...10 years older than Naruto...he can have Kakashi instead..^^..and Iruka is more like a big brother (or even a mother...since he's kinda....over protective) to Naruto....I dunno, in my head that seams so wrong....

    You do whatever you want...but I would like to know if I should continue reading this or not...

    Hugs n'love

    ~Germaine~
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  • From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on June 17, 2005
    Awww...I never read a fic with a onesided IruNaru before!! Hope it turns out well!! UPDATE SOON!!
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  • From ANON - vampchic on June 17, 2005
    Hmm, so is this a SasuNaru fic or a NaruIru fic? NaruIru isn't really that common. That could be interesting. So far I think this is cute and you should continue. I would like to know where you plan on taking this. Exactly how old is everyone? Are they in highschool? And how long has it been sense Naruto and Sasuke last seen each other? Cant wait to see just what type of play it is that the two of them has gotten themselves into.^^ Yup, want to read more. Update soon, kay?
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