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Reviews for I Would Wait Forever

By : bean1498
  • From ANON - Redsliver on June 16, 2005
    I love your writing. The Naruto Sasuke rivalry is great but somehow I can read this and wonder when I'll get to see Kiba next.
    Keep it coming!
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  • From Karista on June 15, 2005
    At the risk of sounding cheesy, I would wait forever for this one to flesh out. I can't wait to read the rest! Your pairings, rather conventional or not, always seem to somehow stay so cannon and natural rather than just superficial. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - witchfyre on June 14, 2005
    i eagerly await more, this was a simply delightful begining

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  • From ANON - allyluv17 on June 14, 2005
    oh noooo!!!! poor naruto and hinata!!! what will happen now??? please continue :D
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  • From ANON - Me.. on June 13, 2005
    Nice nice nice.. a sequel!!!!! anyways, you know about the lj kakasaku community?? if you have a livejournal accoutn you can post the link there... ^_^ btw, its www.livejournal.com/community/kakasaku

    update soon!
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  • From ANON - naruto-fanfic on June 12, 2005
    i liked the chapter
    i feel sorry for both of them cuz hinatas dreams were ruind and naruto was rejected
    i hope they make up
    plz update soon plz let this not be a one shot
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  • From ANON - nonengel on June 12, 2005
    nice start to this
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  • From ANON - Lizzie on June 12, 2005
    Oh! I like where this is heading. Keep up the great work. ^^
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  • From ANON - Saico on June 11, 2005
    When I began reading this I was wary, because it seemed as if Naruto was gonna like Hinata only because she likes him. However, I was quite pleased with the twist at the end, seeing that things won't be that easy. I think Hinata's reactiong was very understandable, since I could see Naruto doing what she thought he was doing. I look forward to see what Naruto does to convince Hinata that he's not pitying her.

    Since they're friends, I think Naruto should have said that he wouldn't ignore 'her feelings', rather than Hinata herself. After all, it's not as if he has been giving the the cold shoulder.
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  • From ANON - Nagakura on June 11, 2005
    I really liked this story. Good job with the charecter interactions, my only criticism would be that i don't think hinata would say that much around him so easily, like when he bumped into her. She'd probably just blush, appologize and slip away. But whatever, I guess her personality changed over time. Is there going to be a next chapter? I hope so, because i'm really looking forward to it if there is.
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  • From ANON - xpotionnerd on June 11, 2005
    I like this very much!! Please write more!!
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  • From ANON - Naruhinafan on June 10, 2005
    sad but great chapter! Update soon
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  • From ANON - Caskas_Lyrik on June 10, 2005
    Ahhh so glad you are back writing!!! I loved Shotgun Wedding and by reading the first chapter of the sequel I know it is going to be better than Shogun Wedding. Hope a Lemon is on its way ;) Update soon...it's soo good I can't wait =D
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  • From ANON - archaicrose on June 10, 2005
    *gasp*
    I'm hooked.
    This first chapter has the potential to form a really good story.
    You must update fast and often.
    :)
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  • From ANON - Time Shifter on June 10, 2005
    Uh oh; he screwed up! She needs to understand he's not feeling guilty; he wants to know if it's worth pursuing a relationship with her. Damn, she took that the wrong way! Can't wait to see how Naruto sixes this one!
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