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Reviews for I Would Wait Forever

By : bean1498
  • From ANON - nonengel on June 18, 2005
    wow...

    I want to write more... really but its late and thats all that comes to mind... just... wow. I'm goin got have to go back and read the prequel for this just so i can adjust to your take on the characters. Don't get me wrong, they're enjoyable, its just either I read oyur other story our let you keep blowing my mind away.

    on a side note, i like how the resolution between hinata and naruto has been going
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  • From ANON - Lizzie on June 17, 2005
    This looks like it's starting to get REALLY good~ Anyway, keep up the good work. It's sad that Kakashi has to leave Sakura for a while and they can't keep making babies. :O I wonder what are her feelings on taking care of twins without Kakashi. XD
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  • From ANON - allyluv17 on June 17, 2005
    wonderful updates!!! it's really a treat reading your chapters!!! you're simply addicting!!!!!!!!!!! *fangirl squeal* please update again soon :D
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  • From ANON - Chelsey on June 17, 2005
    Update soon! I'm loving this almost as much as Shotgun Wedding! If your smut scenes are still the same I may be fanning myself off soon! I like how Hinata's finally becoming more brave, it suits her.

    -Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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  • From ANON - Me.. on June 17, 2005
    uh well.... eheheh he really is gay.... well, run out of options to whom he should be paired with....
    eheh NaruHina smexiness... i miss sakura already... adn kakashi too!!!
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  • From ANON - Me.. on June 17, 2005
    weeee!!!!!! an update!! nice!!!! and wow! congrats and good luck to you!!!!
    eheheheh.... um, about sasuke.... you dont plan on making him... y'know... eheheh necermind i'll just see what will happen next
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  • From ANON - armed and dangerous on June 17, 2005
    Hah! I knew it! I knew from chapter one -- you didn't make it very obvious in shotgun wedding -- that Sasuke would be gay in this story. Just by the way he thought about Naruto and his body. And the fact that he didn't want to be caught peeking or that mention of his comparing Naruto's size to other men. The beautiful man, Kuro, just sealed the deal. It was only a matter of time for him to come on to Naruto, and he did. I really do hope you can finish this before you move to Japan. Do you plan on living there permanently? If so, cool! Have fun learning the language.
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  • From ANON - xgirlrogue on June 17, 2005
    oh how funny - hinata's a very naughty girl underneath it all really lol
    I like how you still made her understanding so the problems with naruto were overcome quickly enough - it seems like a very hinata thing to do
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  • From ANON - Crimsonails on June 17, 2005
    I just wanted to say that I really like your story and you write very well. I also thought Shotgun Wedding was fabulous. *thumbs up* And congrats on you getting married and have fun in Japan. *broods* lol
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  • From Atropa on June 17, 2005
    I must say... I enjoy this story...
    You are making it fun and very entertaining to read. Good build up.

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  • From on June 16, 2005
    Update soon! Sorry it took so long for me to read this. I've been busy working both my jobs. Congrats on getting married soon! I hope all works out well for both you and the story you're writing.

    -Chelsey-
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  • From ANON - Time Shifter on June 16, 2005
    Awesome chapter again! I've become addicted to this fic. I don't mind Sasuke being gay, just so long as it doesn't go anywhere and we don't find out what he's thinking; this is NaruHina, and I'd love it if you kept it that way. Wonderful pairing choice, by the way; best pairing ever! Congratulations on your moving to Japan (lucky bastard!) and getting married (not quite as jealous about that, but it's cool nonetheless). Can't wait to see what happens next!
    P.S. - About how many chapters will this be? Do you have any idea?
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  • From ANON - slayerette0 on June 16, 2005
    Err I accidently deleted a chunk of my last post when I sent it, so you get another one! Ok anyways, on first reading I thought there might be some kind of weird threesome thing going on here, but on a second reading it didn't seem like that. Go figure.
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  • From ANON - slayerette0 on June 16, 2005
    Heh, a one sided Sasunaru where Hinata will actually eventually win Naruto (not that he's a prize to be won or anything heh)? Isn't that against the rules of the naruto section on adultfanfiction.net? LOL Well _I_ love that aspect of the fic. I'm a major NaruHina shipper and the high amount of NaruSasu compared with the tiny bit of naruhina has always annoyed me.

    Although it seems like it almost could go in a weird. o_0 I don't think you intended that. If this was just a pure smut fic I'd be all for it, but I much prefer lemons with emotion and characterization. Well, there's always alternate chapters eh?

    Anyways, I like this fic (Shotgun was good too). I do think your going a little overboard on the female ninja pregnancy rate, though. If Tsunade shows up with some really late in life pregnancy I'm just gonna have to step away from the fic for awhile. LOL The daycare buisness must be booming in Konoha.
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  • From ANON - Saico on June 16, 2005
    Good chapter. It wasn't boring at all.

    I liked the detail of Hinata leading. It's original, and it can help develope her character more in many senses.

    The river situation was classical. It can be old, but it never fails to make me smile.
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