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By : bean1498
  • From ANON - Lisan on July 13, 2005
    edit: narutards ive talked to** sorry
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  • From ANON - Lisan on July 13, 2005
    you know, i liked shotgun wedding a whole lot better. for some reason, naruto and hinata dont seem right together, okay fangirls, dont shoot me, but i dont think naruto's interested. at all. so this idea just doesnt work for me and the other narutards who have read this fic. i like your writing style though. thats what got me so into shotgun wedding.
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  • From ANON - naruto-fanfic on July 08, 2005
    hmm waiting for the het lemon
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  • From ANON - nauto-fanfic on July 08, 2005
    good funnys in there to i like it very witty in hinatas resposnes me like

    update soon
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  • From ANON - naruto-fanfic on July 08, 2005
    hah so your hinting at sasuke being gay right
    poor naruto and hinata geting into that situation but naruto handeled that suprisingly well.
    i like the story. update soon
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  • From ANON - Nagakura on July 02, 2005
    Shotgun wedding blew me away, no pun intended, and this sequal is really good to. I'm stoked for the next chapter. I check this site once a day to see if it's up yet. Not a fan of the lemon parts being between Sasuke and that dude though. But it's still a damn fine story either way.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on June 24, 2005
    Kuro eh?Yum.Kuro an' Sasuke,sounds like an expensive exotic cocktail...and so it is!I must admit I never read het stuff cause I thought everyone would just hook up in Het pairs good fit and characters be damned,I stand corrected.Nice plotting,sensible handling of situations was a plus reading this.Action between characters hot,sensual.I really liked Naruto's nude fishing and the cerbal interplay in that scene made me start at the beginning and do more than scan the story.I don't usually scan either,fate i guess.wink.Nice read.Well done.
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  • From ANON - Lizzie on June 24, 2005
    Yet another awesome chapter. Keep up the great work! :)
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  • From ANON - nonengel on June 24, 2005
    nice chapter... the differences in the paces taken by the two couples is making for a nice contrast
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  • From ANON - Time Shifter on June 23, 2005
    Another awesome chapter! I especially loved the NaruHina moment, and Pakkun catching them. And although I've nothing against gays, I don't want to read any yaoi or shounen ai, so I skipped about half of the chapter. But the first half was good, and the last few sentences wher Naruto was joking. Anyway, great job, and I can't wait for chapter 5; how close will Naruto and Hinata get? *winkwink*
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  • From ANON - Chelsey on June 23, 2005
    Souded quite hot! I wish I had been there to see.....it would have been interesting.......Update soon! I love your fic!

    -Chelsey- AKA:HisBeautiful
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  • From ANON - Saico on June 23, 2005
    Again, simply great.
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  • From ANON - narutofan20 on June 21, 2005
    good storyso far. i hope hinata and naruto get together. keep up the good work and i look forward to the next chapters.
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  • From ANON - Kagalli on June 18, 2005
    W00t! more chapters! This is developing quite nicely and interestingly I think. I hope you write more soon!
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  • From ANON - Jari-Kun on June 18, 2005
    Normally, I don't review here. I come to this place for smut, and smut I get. I love the site and all, would donate if I could, but I've found that few of the stories here actually warrant a review. This... this warrants one. My first review for this place. I haven't read the prequel to this one (Not a big fan of Ka/Sak), but having read this one, and how exceedingly well written it is, I think I'll go read the prequel anyway. As for the story itself, well.. it's pretty awesome. I've found very few stories that make the situations that show up in this one believable, but this manages it. I also like the fact that Hinata was a bit suspicious and didn't immediately throw herself into Naruto's arms and sleep with him. I'd critique, but I'm not sure what I could do! Keep up the work, this is amazing.
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